Poetry competition CLOSED 27th January 2016 1:49am
WINNER
dejure (vick)
dejure (vick)
RUNNERS-UP:
Danii
and Jade-Pandora
Deep Underground Creepy Valentine
Poetry Contest Description
Be a creep to one you desire
Inspired by the Cheesy Valentine comp. But this time let's see how big of a creepy lust filled stalker. But not just anyone, someone from Deep Underground needs to be your target of affection. Enter as many times as you wish.
TWO WEEKS
MAKE IT CREEPY
MAKE IT FUNNY
NEW WRITES ONLY
All For You....Craic
Here it is, my
heart, for you; there
was an organ harvest
last night at the hospital,
and I watched....
I saw how to do it ...fascinating...
so I did. I harvested my own heart
afterwards, all for you.
I wrapped it in wax paper--don't
you want to touch it? Please touch it.
You've wanted my heart for so long, and I finally gave in. It's yours now.
How could I have made you wait? It's all for you... It was always all for you,
Craic.
Here it is, my
heart, for you; there
was an organ harvest
last night at the hospital,
and I watched....
I saw how to do it ...fascinating...
so I did. I harvested my own heart
afterwards, all for you.
I wrapped it in wax paper--don't
you want to touch it? Please touch it.
You've wanted my heart for so long, and I finally gave in. It's yours now.
How could I have made you wait? It's all for you... It was always all for you,
Craic.
LAVENDER
To say I'm impressed
With the way you've undressed
Me is perhaps a little too mild-
Such a gentle flaying
It goes without saying
Poetry in slaying
So styled!
But I caution you, lest
On your laurels you rest-
I must ask you
Who is wearing who?
I've spent a little rhyme
And a lot of my time
Searching for a hat
Filled with you!
To say I'm impressed
With the way you've undressed
Me is perhaps a little too mild-
Such a gentle flaying
It goes without saying
Poetry in slaying
So styled!
But I caution you, lest
On your laurels you rest-
I must ask you
Who is wearing who?
I've spent a little rhyme
And a lot of my time
Searching for a hat
Filled with you!
Across the hall:
Once you asked me to care for your house
along with that came your nice blouse
you gave me a key
now there is nothing I can't see
you know my history
as well as my mystery
just let me in
I know I already have
across the hall
Once you asked me to care for your house
along with that came your nice blouse
you gave me a key
now there is nothing I can't see
you know my history
as well as my mystery
just let me in
I know I already have
across the hall
Craic..
I am no longer single and I am happy and better for it
But if I were available, I would hand my heart to you...
There is something about you that makes us ladies fawn for you.
You are strong, smart, clever and sexy ")
There I said it for all of Dup to read...
Happy Valentine's Day Gorjus!
I am no longer single and I am happy and better for it
But if I were available, I would hand my heart to you...
There is something about you that makes us ladies fawn for you.
You are strong, smart, clever and sexy ")
There I said it for all of Dup to read...
Happy Valentine's Day Gorjus!
Anonymous
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~ Valentine Hades
my dear[est] sanguine Valentine:
you don't know
how many times
I've committed this crime,
standing `neath
your poetic rain
holding back
my burning lust, or trying to keep
from bursting an orgasmic [blood] vein;
and there was also a time
~and perhaps maybe even two~
when I felt like
gutting into my flesh and
ripping out my heart
and sending it directly to you
just so you could hold it, feel it
bloodied, beating,
oozing black and
pulsing blue
just a simple, harmless token
of how I'm such a fanatical for you;
so will you do me the honor
by sending me your best knife,
I promise I'll keep us a secret
especially from your wife ~
happy Valentine's day, baby;)
~ Valentine Hades
my dear[est] sanguine Valentine:
you don't know
how many times
I've committed this crime,
standing `neath
your poetic rain
holding back
my burning lust, or trying to keep
from bursting an orgasmic [blood] vein;
and there was also a time
~and perhaps maybe even two~
when I felt like
gutting into my flesh and
ripping out my heart
and sending it directly to you
just so you could hold it, feel it
bloodied, beating,
oozing black and
pulsing blue
just a simple, harmless token
of how I'm such a fanatical for you;
so will you do me the honor
by sending me your best knife,
I promise I'll keep us a secret
especially from your wife ~
happy Valentine's day, baby;)
A Date With Devlin
Devlin, be my Valentine
your morbid self, will be just fine
for when we dig our little graves
In the yard on Cupid’s Day.
We’ll fill them up with candy hearts,
lace and chocolate, then we’ll start
a song of “Pure Imagination”,
dressed like Willie Wonka’s creations
I’m Veruca, you be Violet,
and we’ll listen, very silent,
to see if anything comes to life
from the graves we dug tonight.
But first we’ll have to suck the juice
from blood oranges, or it’s no use
and we won’t get that bad ju-ju,
conjured up by me and you.
I have confidence—let’s begin
did you bring your VooDoo pins?
We’ll stick them in each other’s skin
let our juice flow out, then in
the holes with all the hearts and lace,
chocolate, smear it on our face
and when we’re covered, you and I
surprise, my love—it’s time we die!
Devlin, be my Valentine
your morbid self, will be just fine
for when we dig our little graves
In the yard on Cupid’s Day.
We’ll fill them up with candy hearts,
lace and chocolate, then we’ll start
a song of “Pure Imagination”,
dressed like Willie Wonka’s creations
I’m Veruca, you be Violet,
and we’ll listen, very silent,
to see if anything comes to life
from the graves we dug tonight.
But first we’ll have to suck the juice
from blood oranges, or it’s no use
and we won’t get that bad ju-ju,
conjured up by me and you.
I have confidence—let’s begin
did you bring your VooDoo pins?
We’ll stick them in each other’s skin
let our juice flow out, then in
the holes with all the hearts and lace,
chocolate, smear it on our face
and when we’re covered, you and I
surprise, my love—it’s time we die!
To the beauties and the beasts
So many of you look good thus far
Hiding behind your little miss avatar
Is that your real face captured by the still frame recorder?
I'll start my research now in alphabetical order
Ladies beware on these cold nights
And look over your shoulders in fear that I
Will come tonight just like the stars
And compare your face with your avatars
Close your curtains so I can't see
Get a dog if you don't have one
Or don't and put on a show for me
But creepy peeping sounds like fun
Latch and lock the doors and windows
In your home and in your cars
I've come a stalker and want to watch her
Who hides behind your avatars?
So many of you look good thus far
Hiding behind your little miss avatar
Is that your real face captured by the still frame recorder?
I'll start my research now in alphabetical order
Ladies beware on these cold nights
And look over your shoulders in fear that I
Will come tonight just like the stars
And compare your face with your avatars
Close your curtains so I can't see
Get a dog if you don't have one
Or don't and put on a show for me
But creepy peeping sounds like fun
Latch and lock the doors and windows
In your home and in your cars
I've come a stalker and want to watch her
Who hides behind your avatars?
Krosgood said:To the beauties and the beasts
So many of you look good thus far
Hiding behind your little miss avatar
Is that your real face captured by the still frame recorder?
I'll start my research now in alphabetical order
Ladies beware on these cold nights
And look over your shoulders in fear that I
Will come tonight just like the stars
And compare your face with your avatars
Close your curtains so I can't see
Get a dog if you don't have one
Or don't and put on a show for me
But creepy peeping sounds like fun
Latch and lock the doors and windows
In your home and in your cars
I've come a stalker and want to watch her
Who hides behind your avatars?
Perfect!👁
So many of you look good thus far
Hiding behind your little miss avatar
Is that your real face captured by the still frame recorder?
I'll start my research now in alphabetical order
Ladies beware on these cold nights
And look over your shoulders in fear that I
Will come tonight just like the stars
And compare your face with your avatars
Close your curtains so I can't see
Get a dog if you don't have one
Or don't and put on a show for me
But creepy peeping sounds like fun
Latch and lock the doors and windows
In your home and in your cars
I've come a stalker and want to watch her
Who hides behind your avatars?
Perfect!👁
Be My Valentine
Oh Tornado how I pine
for the hails of wisdom
falling from your lips
blue as the sky white as snow
Be my Valentine please please
I promise to give you my heart
Or a semblance of one
to hold to feel to savour
touch with pervent desire
I will pirouette for you
in a blue tutu
to the tune of fur elise
showing you my lacy panties
and thighs strong as a teak tree
or two...
I will succumb to you
like the limp swan at the lake
I will nail myself to the cage
nary a sqawk shall I utter
as I feel your hands
freeing me and declaring
your knowledge of my existence
Oh Tornado will you wont you
be my Valentine....
I will preserve my heart in turpentine
for you...
Oh...just dark chocolates
I'm border line diabetic
and roses makes me sneeze.
Oh Tornado how I pine
for the hails of wisdom
falling from your lips
blue as the sky white as snow
Be my Valentine please please
I promise to give you my heart
Or a semblance of one
to hold to feel to savour
touch with pervent desire
I will pirouette for you
in a blue tutu
to the tune of fur elise
showing you my lacy panties
and thighs strong as a teak tree
or two...
I will succumb to you
like the limp swan at the lake
I will nail myself to the cage
nary a sqawk shall I utter
as I feel your hands
freeing me and declaring
your knowledge of my existence
Oh Tornado will you wont you
be my Valentine....
I will preserve my heart in turpentine
for you...
Oh...just dark chocolates
I'm border line diabetic
and roses makes me sneeze.
