Poetry competition CLOSED 26th November 2015 5:54am
WINNER
HHMCameron (BetaWolfinVA)
HHMCameron (BetaWolfinVA)
RUNNER-UP:
Jade-Pandora
Love,. you are UnFaithful
In the blink of eye, everything can change
What love has given to me, love has taken away, hate the beating heart within, never will it not betray, leaving me here in darkness, skin to skin with my misery, walking hand in hand with silence, silently suffering my pain, you see not my glory, all you see is my shade, unloved and long forgotten son, bound in chains of a lover gaze.
What love has given to me, love has taken away, hate the beating heart within, never will it not betray, leaving me here in darkness, skin to skin with my misery, walking hand in hand with silence, silently suffering my pain, you see not my glory, all you see is my shade, unloved and long forgotten son, bound in chains of a lover gaze.
One Careless Moment I cannot forgive myself
Can't stop the rolling tears
I have brought destruction
Upon what we built for years
She wasn't that fascinating
Not as pretty as you
Wine has driven me crazy
Look what it made me do
I thought it will remain a secret
Buried forever within
But time has revealed me
And my heinous sin
God knows how true you were
And so he has made you see
With your own naked eyes
What a liar I have been
All the vows and promises
All the sweetness of my words
Cannot redeem what I have broken
This is too much for love
One careless moment
My whole world is ruined
I do not know what will happen next
But I know I will never be the same without you
The Wait
All was lost.
So, many years ago;
And then, you were there;
Confident and secure.
You hid your torment well,
but,it called to me all the same.
Something stirred, inside my soul,
pushed through the walls I had built,
around my heart;needing to be alive,
again.
and so, you cradled it with a stoic
resolve,
igniting a passionate fire,
that I could not express.
All that time, you waited;
with a calm patience I
mistook for cold indifference.
Now, I am aware that you
needed me to say
I wanted you.
is there time to mend, this rift and
bridge the gulf between
your heart and mine?
All was lost.
So, many years ago;
And then, you were there;
Confident and secure.
You hid your torment well,
but,it called to me all the same.
Something stirred, inside my soul,
pushed through the walls I had built,
around my heart;needing to be alive,
again.
and so, you cradled it with a stoic
resolve,
igniting a passionate fire,
that I could not express.
All that time, you waited;
with a calm patience I
mistook for cold indifference.
Now, I am aware that you
needed me to say
I wanted you.
is there time to mend, this rift and
bridge the gulf between
your heart and mine?
Thank you everyone for participating in the competition. The top three winners are all brilliant, and each one has spoken of their ire and pain well. Al participants did brilliantly and I wish I could award more. HHM Cameron, Todski and Jade...congratulations. Please join me in my next competition.
I want to thank you Grace for my having been a runner-up to this terrific competition. I also congratulate Cameron for winning, well done... and to give Tod a nod and a wink for also coming in a runner-up. And to everyone, it was a treat as such a newbie here in DUP to have competed with many fellow poets. *applauds*
Grace said:Thank you everyone for participating in the competition. The top three winners are all brilliant, and each one has spoken of their ire and pain well. Al participants did brilliantly and I wish I could award more. HHM Cameron, Todski and Jade...congratulations. Please join me in my next competition.
I'd be honored ma'am, thank you so much. -- Jadey <3
I'd be honored ma'am, thank you so much. -- Jadey <3
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Grace said:Thank you everyone for participating in the competition. The top three winners are all brilliant, and each one has spoken of their ire and pain well. Al participants did brilliantly and I wish I could award more. HHM Cameron, Todski and Jade...congratulations. Please join me in my next competition.
Thank you very much, perhaps someone else will read and know the folly of not acting on ones heart... or acting on it too late, or too early
Thank you very much, perhaps someone else will read and know the folly of not acting on ones heart... or acting on it too late, or too early
