Allusion
Simon_III_Msibi
Mandla Msibi
Forum Posts: 92
Mandla Msibi
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 29th June 2013Forum Posts: 92
Poetry Contest Description
Take a line from the poem of the poet above you and then write a poem of your own
so this means you must read the poems of another person to find the one line that you like,that like must be included in your poem(one entry) so the first person must take line from one of my poems then the second from the first ones poems and so on
Different concept but I know itll work
P.S. the line shouldnt come from the poem a poets just written you must take i from his/her non competition poems
Different concept but I know itll work
P.S. the line shouldnt come from the poem a poets just written you must take i from his/her non competition poems
night-star
Rhiannon
Joined 11th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 154
Rhiannon
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 154
Seeing things
"I like to gaze at the stars
During the day"
I like to look at the ocean
In Kansas
I like to watch the dinosaurs
Sitting next to me
Just because I do these things
See these things
Does it mean that I am crazy?
My imagination runs into overtime
Becase life demands it to
Do not call me crazy
For looking at a gun and seeing a knife
For looking at yellow and seeing green
For seeing things that others
Simply cannot
Please tell me that I did this right. If I didnt, I appoligize greatly.
"I like to gaze at the stars
During the day"
I like to look at the ocean
In Kansas
I like to watch the dinosaurs
Sitting next to me
Just because I do these things
See these things
Does it mean that I am crazy?
My imagination runs into overtime
Becase life demands it to
Do not call me crazy
For looking at a gun and seeing a knife
For looking at yellow and seeing green
For seeing things that others
Simply cannot
Please tell me that I did this right. If I didnt, I appoligize greatly.
Simon_III_Msibi
Mandla Msibi
Forum Posts: 92
Mandla Msibi
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 29th June 2013Forum Posts: 92
you got the concept
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Forum Posts: 2483
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
40
Joined 11th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 2483
Good thinking there Simon...this will give a chance for other members to discover poetry from the rest of us! I will come back later...
gardenlover
Forum Posts: 625
Fire of Insight
23
Joined 19th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 625
Morning
Seeing you at first light
''Makes my whole world bright''
I love to see before you wake
Beauty makes my body quake.
Your naked body displays
Parts that deserve my praise
Breasts that are just a handful
Beautiful and really ample
Between your curvaceous thighs
Is the part that I most prize
How I like to sleep with you
Wake up and our love renew
Seeing you at first light
''Makes my whole world bright''
I love to see before you wake
Beauty makes my body quake.
Your naked body displays
Parts that deserve my praise
Breasts that are just a handful
Beautiful and really ample
Between your curvaceous thighs
Is the part that I most prize
How I like to sleep with you
Wake up and our love renew
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Forum Posts: 2483
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
40
Joined 11th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 2483
DIRTY THOUGHTS
“My lust is fueled by the thought” (1)
as you walk swaying your hips
and biting your moist lips
I can’t think straight—
don’t know what to do,
just simply looking at you.
Horny thoughts turn on my libido
just thinking of a tryst with you
Rhythmic up and down motions
turning into wild gyrations
finally lit-up your warm moist pussy
sucking up my balls until midnight!
The rising sun, so warm and bright
cuts short my fantasy of you
It’s not going away quickly as I thought
trying to contain my hard-ons
as hard as I could
Just thinking of you
blissful cum will soon follow.
(1) From Lust by gardenlover
“My lust is fueled by the thought” (1)
as you walk swaying your hips
and biting your moist lips
I can’t think straight—
don’t know what to do,
just simply looking at you.
Horny thoughts turn on my libido
just thinking of a tryst with you
Rhythmic up and down motions
turning into wild gyrations
finally lit-up your warm moist pussy
sucking up my balls until midnight!
The rising sun, so warm and bright
cuts short my fantasy of you
It’s not going away quickly as I thought
trying to contain my hard-ons
as hard as I could
Just thinking of you
blissful cum will soon follow.
(1) From Lust by gardenlover
Anonymous
Storm
"she is gentle like a summer rain"
but she fuels an element
of his thunderous desire ~
widespread she runs
on fever fire and ice
moving heaven above earth ~
he cannot help but to drown
(1st verse from Like Summer Rain ~ D_Poetic Engineer)
"she is gentle like a summer rain"
but she fuels an element
of his thunderous desire ~
widespread she runs
on fever fire and ice
moving heaven above earth ~
he cannot help but to drown
(1st verse from Like Summer Rain ~ D_Poetic Engineer)
thepositivelydark
Forum Posts: 134
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 28th Aug 2013Forum Posts: 134
Lover
A silent night
A glint of light
On broken glass
You've broken in again
Closer, love, closer
Hear my whispers
At the shocking spark of the first...
The first.
Gentle fingers strumming
Wild melodies in my head
Send me thrashing on my bed
Symphony, fever pitch, spinning
I can feel your life
Your warmth
Electric
Completion
Pen to paper
Your lips to mine
A filled in crevice
Tugs and pain
Pushes and pleasure
Only in blackness you'll see
My secret dark treasures
Your white hot passion
And I am blind
I am high, so high
And I am lost
Shut eyes
And heavy breaths
Dawn slowly creeping
Soul weeping
Slowly, you exit
To a world where we exist
My phantom lover,
Waking up is listening
"To the hum of your dying heart"
A love that can never start
*From Devil Woman by DevlinDLC
It's the first time I wrote a poem with this theme...I hope I did alright.
A silent night
A glint of light
On broken glass
You've broken in again
Closer, love, closer
Hear my whispers
At the shocking spark of the first...
The first.
Gentle fingers strumming
Wild melodies in my head
Send me thrashing on my bed
Symphony, fever pitch, spinning
I can feel your life
Your warmth
Electric
Completion
Pen to paper
Your lips to mine
A filled in crevice
Tugs and pain
Pushes and pleasure
Only in blackness you'll see
My secret dark treasures
Your white hot passion
And I am blind
I am high, so high
And I am lost
Shut eyes
And heavy breaths
Dawn slowly creeping
Soul weeping
Slowly, you exit
To a world where we exist
My phantom lover,
Waking up is listening
"To the hum of your dying heart"
A love that can never start
*From Devil Woman by DevlinDLC
It's the first time I wrote a poem with this theme...I hope I did alright.
Arthur
The literate one
Forum Posts: 78
The literate one
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 11th July 2014 Forum Posts: 78
A Silent Night
I sit upon this cold park bench
Watching the sun set behind the city.
As the light fades,
The city uncovered,
Out come the monsters of the night.
The protective sun
Hidden once more,
Its hold on the darkness broken.
On come the lamps
But they do not last,
As the monsters break those feeble shields.
The men come striding
They target the lights,
One shot after another.
The moonlight comes
Revealing the faces,
Of the men, come to get me.
The clouds come over
The moonlight broken,
The night an eternal shadow.
Gun fire breaks
The silent night,
But there are no screams.
I now laugh
And open my soul,
Releasing the demon within.
Their frightened screams
Fuel my hatred,
The beast reaches further.
I now call it back
The men in hand,
Down through my soul.
To join the others.
The moonlight breaks
The cover of cloud,
The man sits on the bench.
"A silent night"
(A silent night) by thepositivelydark
I sit upon this cold park bench
Watching the sun set behind the city.
As the light fades,
The city uncovered,
Out come the monsters of the night.
The protective sun
Hidden once more,
Its hold on the darkness broken.
On come the lamps
But they do not last,
As the monsters break those feeble shields.
The men come striding
They target the lights,
One shot after another.
The moonlight comes
Revealing the faces,
Of the men, come to get me.
The clouds come over
The moonlight broken,
The night an eternal shadow.
Gun fire breaks
The silent night,
But there are no screams.
I now laugh
And open my soul,
Releasing the demon within.
Their frightened screams
Fuel my hatred,
The beast reaches further.
I now call it back
The men in hand,
Down through my soul.
To join the others.
The moonlight breaks
The cover of cloud,
The man sits on the bench.
"A silent night"
(A silent night) by thepositivelydark
thepositivelydark
Forum Posts: 134
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 28th Aug 2013Forum Posts: 134
Arthur said:A Silent Night
I sit upon this cold park bench
Watching the sun set behind the city.
As the light fades,
The city uncovered,
Out come the monsters of the night.
The protective sun
Hidden once more,
Its hold on the darkness broken.
On come the lamps
But they do not last,
As the monsters break those feeble shields.
The men come striding
They target the lights,
One shot after another.
The moonlight comes
Revealing the faces,
Of the men, come to get me.
The clouds come over
The moonlight broken,
The night an eternal shadow.
Gun fire breaks
The silent night,
But there are no screams.
I now laugh
And open my soul,
Releasing the demon within.
Their frightened screams
Fuel my hatred,
The beast reaches further.
I now call it back
The men in hand,
Down through my soul.
To join the others.
The moonlight breaks
The cover of cloud,
The man sits on the bench.
"A silent night"
(A silent night) by thepositivelydark
Arthur, I do not have a non-competition poem with the line "a silent night". The rules said that the line you use must come from my non-competion poems.
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I sit upon this cold park bench
Watching the sun set behind the city.
As the light fades,
The city uncovered,
Out come the monsters of the night.
The protective sun
Hidden once more,
Its hold on the darkness broken.
On come the lamps
But they do not last,
As the monsters break those feeble shields.
The men come striding
They target the lights,
One shot after another.
The moonlight comes
Revealing the faces,
Of the men, come to get me.
The clouds come over
The moonlight broken,
The night an eternal shadow.
Gun fire breaks
The silent night,
But there are no screams.
I now laugh
And open my soul,
Releasing the demon within.
Their frightened screams
Fuel my hatred,
The beast reaches further.
I now call it back
The men in hand,
Down through my soul.
To join the others.
The moonlight breaks
The cover of cloud,
The man sits on the bench.
"A silent night"
(A silent night) by thepositivelydark
Arthur, I do not have a non-competition poem with the line "a silent night". The rules said that the line you use must come from my non-competion poems.
]
Arthur
The literate one
Forum Posts: 78
The literate one
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 11th July 2014 Forum Posts: 78
My mistake
sorry...
sorry...
Simon_III_Msibi
Mandla Msibi
Forum Posts: 92
Mandla Msibi
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 29th June 2013Forum Posts: 92
lol well then arthur ill let it pass,read thepositivelydark's non competition poems n post another one
Arthur
The literate one
Forum Posts: 78
The literate one
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 11th July 2014 Forum Posts: 78
A Silent Night
I sit upon this cold park bench
Watching the sun set behind the city.
As the light fades,
The city uncovered,
Out come the monsters of the night.
"The bright sun"
Hidden once more,
Its hold on the darkness broken.
On come the lamps
But they do not last,
As the monsters break those feeble shields.
The men come striding
They target the lights,
One shot after another.
The moonlight comes
Revealing the faces,
Of the men, come to get me.
The clouds come over
The moonlight broken,
The night an eternal shadow.
Gun fire breaks
The silent night,
But there are no screams.
I now laugh
And open my soul,
Releasing the demon within.
Their frightened screams
Fuel my hatred,
The beast reaches further.
I now call it back
The men in hand,
Down through my soul.
To join the others.
The moonlight breaks
The cover of cloud,
The man sits on the bench.
A silent night.
(The bright sun) Anticipation by, thesarklypositive.
Fixed it :)
I sit upon this cold park bench
Watching the sun set behind the city.
As the light fades,
The city uncovered,
Out come the monsters of the night.
"The bright sun"
Hidden once more,
Its hold on the darkness broken.
On come the lamps
But they do not last,
As the monsters break those feeble shields.
The men come striding
They target the lights,
One shot after another.
The moonlight comes
Revealing the faces,
Of the men, come to get me.
The clouds come over
The moonlight broken,
The night an eternal shadow.
Gun fire breaks
The silent night,
But there are no screams.
I now laugh
And open my soul,
Releasing the demon within.
Their frightened screams
Fuel my hatred,
The beast reaches further.
I now call it back
The men in hand,
Down through my soul.
To join the others.
The moonlight breaks
The cover of cloud,
The man sits on the bench.
A silent night.
(The bright sun) Anticipation by, thesarklypositive.
Fixed it :)
LoveMinusZero
Forum Posts: 121
Twisted Dreamer
4
Joined 6th July 2013Forum Posts: 121
Beauty
"Her beauty took me"
from an hourly motel
in Tucson to the Viennese
waterways of paradise.
Sweat, shame, and distrust
brought me back to an
empty wallet and a
shattered ego.
She didn’t even pretend
to come with me.
"Her beauty took me"
from an hourly motel
in Tucson to the Viennese
waterways of paradise.
Sweat, shame, and distrust
brought me back to an
empty wallet and a
shattered ego.
She didn’t even pretend
to come with me.
peninnah
The Blue Rose
Forum Posts: 79
The Blue Rose
Fire of Insight
8
Joined 23rd Dec 2013Forum Posts: 79
IT WASN'T ME.
"It was a dark and stormy night on the
precipice of fall."
The lights were out,Wind was too mighty
There is no way you could have seen right.
Just because she wore red silk scarf over the leather like i do
Fire& ice' filled the air when she drove past you
Kawasaki Ninja just like mine
Does that mean it was me?
I was out of town that Friday night
Ask your Pops
I gassed at his station
I was not standing on that cliff,lips on his.
I did not cheat on you
why don't you understand?
I will never cheat on you again
At least not with him.
Just because her laughter echoed as loud as mine
Had long legs just like mine
does not mean it was i
Believe me baby,It wasn't me.
(P.S:On the road.Excuse *modification,thank you.)
"It was a dark and stormy night on the
precipice of fall."
The lights were out,Wind was too mighty
There is no way you could have seen right.
Just because she wore red silk scarf over the leather like i do
Fire& ice' filled the air when she drove past you
Kawasaki Ninja just like mine
Does that mean it was me?
I was out of town that Friday night
Ask your Pops
I gassed at his station
I was not standing on that cliff,lips on his.
I did not cheat on you
why don't you understand?
I will never cheat on you again
At least not with him.
Just because her laughter echoed as loud as mine
Had long legs just like mine
does not mean it was i
Believe me baby,It wasn't me.
(P.S:On the road.Excuse *modification,thank you.)