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Poetry competition CLOSED 7th April 2014 6:29am
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Balefulmalevolence
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RUNNER-UP: MadameLavender

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Let Us Mosh

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest

we are your audience
A few months ago I hosted a comp called "Calling All Metalheads." I had such fun with it so now I present the sequel. With that said, Turn down the lights and crank up the music. You the front person of your heavy metal band. What's your biggest hit and what the hell does your band call itself? Give me that in the style of a metal song

TWO WEEKS

WHAT'S YOUR SONG?

NAME YOUR BAND

HORNS UP

LET'S MOSH

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
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I'll be back.... :D

Satyr
Twisted Dreamer
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"Hell Hast Risen", - Black Snow

did i do it right?

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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Satyr said:"Hell Hast Risen", - Black Snow

did i do it right?


The first part yes. Now you need the poem "Hell Hast Risen" in the style of a metal song

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
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...

TLIFD
Rope
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heck yeah.
like when dimmu borgir made a song called dimmu borgir

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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i will return

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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TLIFD

The Lamb Is For Dinner
and now serpents included
screams that echo
from and to the four corners
death metal
bringing death to those not metal
black metal
blackening the churches
hailing the devil,
a thing of old.
preaching freedom
becoming God of self
with roaring conviction
carnival music on the keyboard
sure to scare the kids into rebels
dressed in black ,like heading to a funeral
for once T.L.I.F.D is heard
one is birth a new
in solid darkness

HadesRising
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Thanks for kicking it off , you two

LobodeSanPedro
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I'm gonna audition a few drummers during the week ... MadameLavender has inspired me!

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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Bring it on. The more the merrier

liz
BlueRoseLiz
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Devils Axe



Screams from the crowd
Devils Axe! Devils Axe!

Behind Devils Axe

Blood taste like wine
ticks crawling up my spine
holding the head of time
freedom lost my mind
lost my mind

Chorus:


Chase me down
chase me down
chase me down
to the Devils crown
Drums beating harder
Chase me down
chase me down
chase me down
to the Devils crown

Speeding down the highway
more than 99
Harley Davis chrome name
we ride to we die
to we die

Chase me down
chase me down
chase me down
to the  Devils crown
Drums beating harder
Chase me down
chase me down
chase me down
to the Devils crown

Crowd roaring for more
Devils Axe! Devils Axe!
Fights in the crowd






DeadEnergy
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nice !!!

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Announcer: "I wrote this poem for the best metal band ever.
Even though T.L.I.F.D asked me not to read this.
God strike me down before i do.
Anything...nothing."

-Inhales.
"entitled "WHOA! WOE""

from the black background pierce
the envied most legendary men of legends
to the new to symphonic screamo, scary
corpse paint hides reality
on stage ,birthing masters of instruments and demonic vocals
Apollo guides them

screams from the likes of the taunted tormented pray in hell
to pray before headbanging to this band does while,only
if its to the gods of Metal
for now witness Lutetium metal.

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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expect mine today... finally a day off...
so definitely gonna post of my new materials

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