Poetry competition CLOSED 27th June 2013 8:44pm
WINNER
case28 (Alexander Case)
case28 (Alexander Case)
RUNNER-UP:
LobodeSanPedro
Dark City
Derailed
It's half past eight
It's gonna be late
Stuck at the station
Waiting for next
Got up the train
Start to think
Where is my ticket
Oh that's great
Cash was dried up
Captain was there
Ask for pay up
You were scared
One kind soul
Start to say
''I will help''
Don't be scared
You were shocked
You were thankful
No words out
Mind was blank
Wonder who she is
Wonder why she helped
She is a beauty
So what's now
Moved next to her
Asked her why
And there she replied
''Just lend a helping hand''
Wanna meet her again
Wanna pay her back
There she said ''yes''
You were overwhelmed
The day they met
They started to lie
Lied to their hearts
Lied to their loved ones
How naive he was
Thinking she loves him
Not knowing it's a trap
And he's just another prey
She cheated his heart
She cheated his money
Feeling bad inside
As he believes her
Knowing about his daughter
Knowing about his conditions
She felt guilty
She wants a change
It's all too late
When he found out
Anger blind him
Revenge got him
She died with guilt
She died with regret
Knowing she still love him
But reality is cruel
She knows it....
It's half past eight
It's gonna be late
Stuck at the station
Waiting for next
Got up the train
Start to think
Where is my ticket
Oh that's great
Cash was dried up
Captain was there
Ask for pay up
You were scared
One kind soul
Start to say
''I will help''
Don't be scared
You were shocked
You were thankful
No words out
Mind was blank
Wonder who she is
Wonder why she helped
She is a beauty
So what's now
Moved next to her
Asked her why
And there she replied
''Just lend a helping hand''
Wanna meet her again
Wanna pay her back
There she said ''yes''
You were overwhelmed
The day they met
They started to lie
Lied to their hearts
Lied to their loved ones
How naive he was
Thinking she loves him
Not knowing it's a trap
And he's just another prey
She cheated his heart
She cheated his money
Feeling bad inside
As he believes her
Knowing about his daughter
Knowing about his conditions
She felt guilty
She wants a change
It's all too late
When he found out
Anger blind him
Revenge got him
She died with guilt
She died with regret
Knowing she still love him
But reality is cruel
She knows it....
Stefaith said:Derailed
It's half past eight
It's gonna be late
Stuck at the station
Waiting for next
Got up the train
Start to think
Where is my ticket
Oh that's great
Cash was dried up
Captain was there
Ask for pay up
You were scared
One kind soul
Start to say
''I will help''
Don't be scared
You were shocked
You were thankful
No words out
Mind was blank
Wonder who she is
Wonder why she helped
She is a beauty
So what's now
Moved next to her
Asked her why
And there she replied
''Just lend a helping hand''
Wanna meet her again
Wanna pay her back
There she said ''yes''
You were overwhelmed
The day they met
They started to lie
Lied to their hearts
Lied to their loved ones
How naive he was
Thinking she loves him
Not knowing it's a trap
And he's just another prey
She cheated his heart
She cheated his money
Feeling bad inside
As he believes her
Knowing about his daughter
Knowing about his conditions
She felt guilty
She wants a change
It's all too late
When he found out
Anger blind him
Revenge got him
She died with guilt
She died with regret
Knowing she still love him
But reality is cruel
She knows it....
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It's half past eight
It's gonna be late
Stuck at the station
Waiting for next
Got up the train
Start to think
Where is my ticket
Oh that's great
Cash was dried up
Captain was there
Ask for pay up
You were scared
One kind soul
Start to say
''I will help''
Don't be scared
You were shocked
You were thankful
No words out
Mind was blank
Wonder who she is
Wonder why she helped
She is a beauty
So what's now
Moved next to her
Asked her why
And there she replied
''Just lend a helping hand''
Wanna meet her again
Wanna pay her back
There she said ''yes''
You were overwhelmed
The day they met
They started to lie
Lied to their hearts
Lied to their loved ones
How naive he was
Thinking she loves him
Not knowing it's a trap
And he's just another prey
She cheated his heart
She cheated his money
Feeling bad inside
As he believes her
Knowing about his daughter
Knowing about his conditions
She felt guilty
She wants a change
It's all too late
When he found out
Anger blind him
Revenge got him
She died with guilt
She died with regret
Knowing she still love him
But reality is cruel
She knows it....
It looks like you're lost. This comp. has ended and your topic is not near anywhere its theme. Let me point you to the right direction. Under Members Only (upper top left of your screen) link, click on Submit Poem and post it there.
