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FishCake
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The Key to my Heart
When the door slammed shut,
I threw the key really far.
I picked up a blade and began to cut.
No, not my wrists. Just the stars.
With a plunk and plink they all fell,
Their strings murdered, tangled now.
Now they light the skies in hell,
Littering my heart like petals, a rotting vow.
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orexisx89
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When I walked away:
When that door slammed shut
I turned and walked away
Never looking back
I had nothing left to say
When that door slammed shut
I really should have stayed.
Maybe if I go back now,
no, Nothing will have changed
Opportunities are left in me
Though the air has gotten thin
since I walked away.
When that door slammed shut
I turned and walked away
Never looking back
I had nothing left to say
When that door slammed shut
I really should have stayed.
Maybe if I go back now,
no, Nothing will have changed
Opportunities are left in me
Though the air has gotten thin
since I walked away.
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Thank's everyone..I need to have another read of these entries and I'll have a winner soon. You all did great and deciding won't be easy. :-)
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Ok..it was really tough to pick, many awesome entries! Thank's again and congrats to Mr. A.
MrAlptraum
Mr A
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Mr A
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Thank you, miki(money's in the post). You have 1943 forum posts. Creepy when it matches your year of birth, eh? :)
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mikimoondancer said:[quote-202875-MrAlptraum]Thank you, miki(money's in the post). You have 1943 forum posts. Creepy when it matches your year of birth, eh? :)
cheeky bastard..lol
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hey, I just figured you probably meant-after a few more posts and not that I was born in 43 ha ha..
oops, yeah..that would be cool but I'll bet I don't even notice
cheeky bastard..lol
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hey, I just figured you probably meant-after a few more posts and not that I was born in 43 ha ha..
oops, yeah..that would be cool but I'll bet I don't even notice
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MrAlptraum
Mr A
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No, no I didn't. "cheeky bastard" was a very valid response. :)
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cheeky bastard! ;)
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Congratulations Mr A! Wish I'd thought of the money! Thank you miki for a great comp!
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Thank you for participating, tornado. Your entry was impressive. :-)
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Ha! I'm gonna leave that were it lays.....because I am a cheeky bastard ; ) LOL!!!
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wow..I gotta watch my words more, you'd think that to be a given in a poetry forum
my bad, I'll claim it and thank you kindly for the respect of restraint :-)
my bad, I'll claim it and thank you kindly for the respect of restraint :-)