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Worst Poem You Ever Wrote

Duncan
Duncan Alexander
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 1awards
Joined 4th May 2010
Forum Posts: 2144

Death doesn't care

The message has been sent
filled with malicious intent
The deed has been rent
It's to late to lament,
He's filled with despair
Life isn't fair
And Death doesn't care
it's a treacherous snare
It lays you down bare
and gives you a scare



I don't really have a worst poem but after going through all my poems I think this is the one I feel I did worst in.

freddwzz
Naked Satirist
Fire of Insight
Singapore 6awards
Joined 5th May 2012
Forum Posts: 496

myraids of premade-awareness
strays suffering in citadels
blowing false-trumphet
licking unmeltable ice-cream
letting in flacid bananas

unaware?

your fetus excrements they are
let them be shat as shit
before they become  
a self-gratifying
self-crowned royalty like ye

have pity for premade-awareness!
chance their senses a raise
bestow them knowledge to differentiate
to peace your fetus!

all hail jesus!

13
Dangerous Mind
India 17awards
Joined 25th June 2011
Forum Posts: 682

Crucifer

sacred womb, thou birth unholy hell,
in madness and rage thou danced to the cries of the damned.
screaming nymphet, calm thy bleeding nerves,
from water to wine, a tragedy divine,
witness the wonders of the Antichrist.
your black heart, embraced by thorns and steel,
a testament to all, heeding your call.
chained in hate, naked and eager,
with arms open wide, kiss of death in her eyes,
staring into your soul, the poisoned fruit rots,
and death to mankind.

No1
Fire of Insight
Sweden
Joined 22nd May 2012
Forum Posts: 85

13 said:Crucifer

No no. Really really good.

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