Worst Poem You Ever Wrote
Duncan
Duncan Alexander
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Duncan Alexander
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 4th May 2010Forum Posts: 2144
Death doesn't care
The message has been sent
filled with malicious intent
The deed has been rent
It's to late to lament,
He's filled with despair
Life isn't fair
And Death doesn't care
it's a treacherous snare
It lays you down bare
and gives you a scare
I don't really have a worst poem but after going through all my poems I think this is the one I feel I did worst in.
The message has been sent
filled with malicious intent
The deed has been rent
It's to late to lament,
He's filled with despair
Life isn't fair
And Death doesn't care
it's a treacherous snare
It lays you down bare
and gives you a scare
I don't really have a worst poem but after going through all my poems I think this is the one I feel I did worst in.
freddwzz
Naked Satirist
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Naked Satirist
Fire of Insight
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Joined 5th May 2012Forum Posts: 496
myraids of premade-awareness
strays suffering in citadels
blowing false-trumphet
licking unmeltable ice-cream
letting in flacid bananas
unaware?
your fetus excrements they are
let them be shat as shit
before they become
a self-gratifying
self-crowned royalty like ye
have pity for premade-awareness!
chance their senses a raise
bestow them knowledge to differentiate
to peace your fetus!
all hail jesus!
strays suffering in citadels
blowing false-trumphet
licking unmeltable ice-cream
letting in flacid bananas
unaware?
your fetus excrements they are
let them be shat as shit
before they become
a self-gratifying
self-crowned royalty like ye
have pity for premade-awareness!
chance their senses a raise
bestow them knowledge to differentiate
to peace your fetus!
all hail jesus!
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Forum Posts: 682
Dangerous Mind
17
Joined 25th June 2011 Forum Posts: 682
Crucifer
sacred womb, thou birth unholy hell,
in madness and rage thou danced to the cries of the damned.
screaming nymphet, calm thy bleeding nerves,
from water to wine, a tragedy divine,
witness the wonders of the Antichrist.
your black heart, embraced by thorns and steel,
a testament to all, heeding your call.
chained in hate, naked and eager,
with arms open wide, kiss of death in her eyes,
staring into your soul, the poisoned fruit rots,
and death to mankind.
sacred womb, thou birth unholy hell,
in madness and rage thou danced to the cries of the damned.
screaming nymphet, calm thy bleeding nerves,
from water to wine, a tragedy divine,
witness the wonders of the Antichrist.
your black heart, embraced by thorns and steel,
a testament to all, heeding your call.
chained in hate, naked and eager,
with arms open wide, kiss of death in her eyes,
staring into your soul, the poisoned fruit rots,
and death to mankind.