Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry about angst, activism and hate
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 3:28am
26th Dec 2024 3:28am
When the tears fall silently
For sure through the process of life someone else, may walk into your life, 💕 leaving an impressive place in your own thoughts. Wondering if this is the one with insight and a spiritual soul of there heart. 💖 FOR sure it's gonna make you smile, yet you wonder could this be really real, or just more of the same mind games 😤 that so many still like to play. 🤔 To leave you alone and broken, like a shattered glass of broken pieces, 😭 THAT will never heal as those memories of the past, behind you have you feeling trap in ways that becomes, completely...
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
#LifeStruggles
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
71 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 8:37pm
22nd Dec 2024 8:37pm
Not His Daughter Anymore
#betrayal
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#sex
54 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 12:00pm
22nd Dec 2024 12:00pm
Anyone getting this for Xmas this year?
Besides Big Brother, who else will create a profile on you?
#evil
#minimalist
#scary
#science
#technology
87 reads
15 Comments
drone
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 9:23am
22nd Dec 2024 9:23am
Hard tech
Does one
Hate to Learn
How to use
One's own personal
Soft Technology
That much
One is willing
To Sacrifice
One's own personal
Conection
To Source
To that Spark
That defines
Who You Are
Hate to Learn
How to use
One's own personal
Soft Technology
That much
One is willing
To Sacrifice
One's own personal
Conection
To Source
To that Spark
That defines
Who You Are
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
49 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 9:08am
22nd Dec 2024 9:08am
Odds
It's well over the odds
When calculating the Costs
Of the Consequences
That will Be
Incurred
When one Decides
Not to Fight
Those Thoughts
That Claim
Their Yours
When calculating the Costs
Of the Consequences
That will Be
Incurred
When one Decides
Not to Fight
Those Thoughts
That Claim
Their Yours
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
53 reads
0 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 1:37am
22nd Dec 2024 1:37am
Is This Thing On?
You have to be patient in love how about you just love yourself first new diets based on blood type death to the 1% there are drones no one cares rent is too high this is not sustainable the planet is going to boil us alive like frogs in a pot and we kind of deserve it there’s a convicted felon in the White House I guess it’s true that there are aliens but do they need work visas swipe left swipe right polyamorous still figuring things out intimacy with no commitment unicorn hunters getting paid biweekly is ass no one can see me why doesn’t anyone fucking see me there is metal in tampons we...
#anxiety
#bipolar
#corruption #fear
#corruption #fear
108 reads
4 Comments
drone
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 10:06am
20th Dec 2024 10:06am
Your Here
It is said
Your not Here
To Save the World
You are here
To save Your Self
And those
Who You
Care for
Your not Here
To Save the World
You are here
To save Your Self
And those
Who You
Care for
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
56 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 4:46pm
19th Dec 2024 4:46pm
Black Wall Street
Tulsa 1921
As I stare at the dangling sign
It reads Williams Dreamland Theater
Hanging on by a thread it’s about all that’s left
Dawn rises in Tulsa 1921 smoke and debris is all that’s stands
Downtown shoe shine boy gets accused of
Being lewd with a White Lady
Newspaper prints the story and a white crowd grows for hours
Black men assemble put on war uniforms
March down to the courthouse to save a Black man from lynching
Police say there is nothing to fear go home and chill out
...
As I stare at the dangling sign
It reads Williams Dreamland Theater
Hanging on by a thread it’s about all that’s left
Dawn rises in Tulsa 1921 smoke and debris is all that’s stands
Downtown shoe shine boy gets accused of
Being lewd with a White Lady
Newspaper prints the story and a white crowd grows for hours
Black men assemble put on war uniforms
March down to the courthouse to save a Black man from lynching
Police say there is nothing to fear go home and chill out
...
#apocalypse
#courage
#hate #racism
#hate #racism
40 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 11:14am
19th Dec 2024 11:14am
Truth or Death?
I despise that blunt honesty shit
Honesty isn't blunt
Honesty is cool
Lies are blunt
You want to hurt someone?
Lie to them!
Then shoot them in the fucking head!
Honesty isn't blunt
Honesty is cool
Lies are blunt
You want to hurt someone?
Lie to them!
Then shoot them in the fucking head!
#betrayal
#honesty
#lies #TruthOfLife
#lies #TruthOfLife
90 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 10:28pm
18th Dec 2024 10:28pm
Maga Hats made in China
Maga hats made in China
How about I grab you by the pussy(cat)
But you’re all in you swallow my bullshit
I tried insurrection but now I’m in the Election
Cries and screams from the outer rings
Now I’m a Liar back in the West Wing
Tell you he’ll fight for you but look out
Turn around it’s no one but billionaires
Yes u wake up early to feed the family
Something so foreign but it comes up Orange
How about I grab you by the pussy(cat)
But you’re all in you swallow my bullshit
I tried insurrection but now I’m in the Election
Cries and screams from the outer rings
Now I’m a Liar back in the West Wing
Tell you he’ll fight for you but look out
Turn around it’s no one but billionaires
Yes u wake up early to feed the family
Something so foreign but it comes up Orange
#deception
#greed
#lies
63 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 10:20pm
18th Dec 2024 10:20pm
End of the Month
End of the month
Money is too tight
Scrape together all I have
Hoping it’s enough to pay the rent
But I walk around in a red hat
And I have t shirts and flags
Fake billionaire sweats orange off his skin
Selling his faithful on his lies
Send me money they’re persecuting me and you
Fake culture wars not really
But I need more money to keep this lie going
I’m being indicted for you
I did the crime but it’s you loser who will pay for me
Build the wall that falls down
Grifting on the highest...
Money is too tight
Scrape together all I have
Hoping it’s enough to pay the rent
But I walk around in a red hat
And I have t shirts and flags
Fake billionaire sweats orange off his skin
Selling his faithful on his lies
Send me money they’re persecuting me and you
Fake culture wars not really
But I need more money to keep this lie going
I’m being indicted for you
I did the crime but it’s you loser who will pay for me
Build the wall that falls down
Grifting on the highest...
#lies
#politics
36 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 10:31am
18th Dec 2024 10:31am
Orange Jesus
Orange Jesus will save us
From what I don’t know but he’ll tell you
Immigrants like our forefathers that made
The Great Green Lady hold a torch
Give me your poor your tired your hungry
That’s been our Brand way before trump
But Orange Jesus will save us from what I don’t know
Get to the punch bowl at the party
Buts it’s only Orange Kool Aid
Make you feel above them but it’s just nightmare
How many friendships and families broken
Because some worship the Orange king ...
From what I don’t know but he’ll tell you
Immigrants like our forefathers that made
The Great Green Lady hold a torch
Give me your poor your tired your hungry
That’s been our Brand way before trump
But Orange Jesus will save us from what I don’t know
Get to the punch bowl at the party
Buts it’s only Orange Kool Aid
Make you feel above them but it’s just nightmare
How many friendships and families broken
Because some worship the Orange king ...
#greed
#lies
#politics
48 reads
0 Comments
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