Poems About Support by Top Critiquers
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Poems about support by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
When
When the world crumbles beneath your feet
And solace is what you seek
Don’t worry baby
I got you
And solace is what you seek
Don’t worry baby
I got you
#love
#support
104 reads
26 Comments
Mind Control
Entering my mind
Hearing silence stops all time
There's nothing to find
Hearing silence stops all time
There's nothing to find
#haiku
#identity
#memories #support
#memories #support
49 reads
4 Comments
Who Are You?
Its strange how someone can come into your life
And feel like they've been there forever
How you can feel so comfortable
And hold back nothing whatsoever
Hours pass by in what seems like a moment
Time weaving and shifting around you
Laughing, smiling and feeling human
A break from the darkness you are bound to
How they can know just what you need
When you havent the slightest clue
Taking aim at the the unbreakable
With words that slice right through
Making you wonder "who is this person?" ...
And feel like they've been there forever
How you can feel so comfortable
And hold back nothing whatsoever
Hours pass by in what seems like a moment
Time weaving and shifting around you
Laughing, smiling and feeling human
A break from the darkness you are bound to
How they can know just what you need
When you havent the slightest clue
Taking aim at the the unbreakable
With words that slice right through
Making you wonder "who is this person?" ...
#admiration
#friendship
#support
132 reads
23 Comments
I Cut Myself and Thought of You
That's the kind of relationship we have
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
#LifeStruggles
#SelfHarm
#confessional
#gratitude
#support
306 reads
20 Comments
HONESTLY, YOU REALLY DON'T MIND?
I hadn't seen her in
several years; then out
of the blue there was her
sensual voice on the phone.
After small talk and updating
the past, I told her I wanted to
see her as soon as it was convenient.
"Really?" she replied. "I'm not the
same "perfect doll" you once
circled the world in bed with."
"YES! A thousand times yes."
"Are you sure?" she asked.
She began her list:
"Do you want my fat body, I mean fat?"
"Oh, yes, I can feel and taste it now.,.
more...
several years; then out
of the blue there was her
sensual voice on the phone.
After small talk and updating
the past, I told her I wanted to
see her as soon as it was convenient.
"Really?" she replied. "I'm not the
same "perfect doll" you once
circled the world in bed with."
"YES! A thousand times yes."
"Are you sure?" she asked.
She began her list:
"Do you want my fat body, I mean fat?"
"Oh, yes, I can feel and taste it now.,.
more...
#girlfriend
#relationships
#honesty
#support
#admiration
237 reads
3 Comments
In The Arms Of An Angel
Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death,
I will fear no evil;
For You are with me;
Your rod and Your staff, they comfort me
Lead me always to the light as my breath at times may become shallow
Bless over my mind when my words are too weak to manifest upon my delayed swallow
Receive me, thy Lord, as the cord of my life returns to the cocoon of my existence
My astral traveling, a star dust in the stratosphere interwoven of many placentas
I have been reborn, may Deja vu moments allow me to connect the...
I will fear no evil;
For You are with me;
Your rod and Your staff, they comfort me
Lead me always to the light as my breath at times may become shallow
Bless over my mind when my words are too weak to manifest upon my delayed swallow
Receive me, thy Lord, as the cord of my life returns to the cocoon of my existence
My astral traveling, a star dust in the stratosphere interwoven of many placentas
I have been reborn, may Deja vu moments allow me to connect the...
#support
#cancer
#spiritual #angels
#spiritual #angels
297 reads
PLEASE
The only thing that can make me feel whole again
Is to hear that aching desire tremble in your voice
To feel you quiver whenever my tongue wanders
All over your skin, and down your forbidden places
So, please...I need to hear you beg for my lust
I need to feel your hot breath against my ear
To hear your heart beating faster and faster
To feel your hardness throbbing against my thigh
Hearing your moans grow more strident with each tease
Let me feel your hands groping me ever so eagerly
Heavy breathing meld as I ravage and devour you
Bodies...
Is to hear that aching desire tremble in your voice
To feel you quiver whenever my tongue wanders
All over your skin, and down your forbidden places
So, please...I need to hear you beg for my lust
I need to feel your hot breath against my ear
To hear your heart beating faster and faster
To feel your hardness throbbing against my thigh
Hearing your moans grow more strident with each tease
Let me feel your hands groping me ever so eagerly
Heavy breathing meld as I ravage and devour you
Bodies...
#ILoveYou
#support
#admiration #ForbiddenLove
#admiration #ForbiddenLove
541 reads
8 Comments
Soul Friend
affections are funny
they grow and wane over time
from furious flames to cooling embers
but my love remains constant
I don't have to like you to see beauty
your soul's scars tell me so much about you
gentle truth, I share my honesty
from one soul to another
sacred promise I will always be your friend
secrets of faith
we have trusted each other facts over our lives
never to ever be used as weapons
I keep your privacy down deep
in the sanctity and bond of friendship
it is an honor to know you ...
they grow and wane over time
from furious flames to cooling embers
but my love remains constant
I don't have to like you to see beauty
your soul's scars tell me so much about you
gentle truth, I share my honesty
from one soul to another
sacred promise I will always be your friend
secrets of faith
we have trusted each other facts over our lives
never to ever be used as weapons
I keep your privacy down deep
in the sanctity and bond of friendship
it is an honor to know you ...
#love
#friendship
#support
#admiration
#respect
189 reads
14 Comments
you have left me
hours barely passed,
such fleeted body,
you ravaged
the jeweled fields,
and made your choice
such fleeted body,
you ravaged
the jeweled fields,
and made your choice
#breakup
#secrets
#support
#disappointment
#deception
107 reads
9 Comments
You
Reassuring and safe,
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
#kindness
#friendship
#confessional
#support
#wisdom
566 reads
34 Comments
Red-handed Revelation
spanking
with firm
but brutal honesty
slowly removing
fear, to bring
enlightenment
dancimg
raven black
hair
welling tears
within ocean
blue eyes
those red imprints
on tender
skin
sparking the embers
of submissive
tendences
fluctuations
of the soul
grabbing
at the new
senasations
being made
to go through both
mental and physical anguish
finally releasing
the...
with firm
but brutal honesty
slowly removing
fear, to bring
enlightenment
dancimg
raven black
hair
welling tears
within ocean
blue eyes
those red imprints
on tender
skin
sparking the embers
of submissive
tendences
fluctuations
of the soul
grabbing
at the new
senasations
being made
to go through both
mental and physical anguish
finally releasing
the...
#BDSM
#support
#SelfDiscovery
#passion
#sensual
478 reads
5 Comments
Loving Touch
Sometimes, things are going wrong
You've had enough and you feel
Like you're just not tough enough
To make it through
Just think of me and how much
I love you and remember that
I'm here for you
Yes, I'll always be here for you
(Chorus)
Close your eyes and visualize
That I'm there with you
I wanna help see you through
I just wanna keep loving you
Your loving touch means so much
It's true your love is
A bright spot in my day
And darling, I've just got to say
I want to love you in everyway ...
You've had enough and you feel
Like you're just not tough enough
To make it through
Just think of me and how much
I love you and remember that
I'm here for you
Yes, I'll always be here for you
(Chorus)
Close your eyes and visualize
That I'm there with you
I wanna help see you through
I just wanna keep loving you
Your loving touch means so much
It's true your love is
A bright spot in my day
And darling, I've just got to say
I want to love you in everyway ...
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#support
#respect
655 reads
2 Comments
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