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When she looks at me
When she looks at me, I feel like a house full of busted windows.
The wind just blows right through me.
The wind just blows right through me.
Published 23rd Sep 2023
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23rd Sep 2023 1:54pm
That's one of the most perfect expressions of unrequited I have ever read. It aches ~Willow
23rd Sep 2023 6:11pm
23rd Sep 2023 2:45pm
Powerful indeed..........and all without having to speak a word. Regards, Robert.
23rd Sep 2023 5:05pm
23rd Sep 2023 6:10pm
24th Sep 2023 3:08am
Dear M,
I concur with my esteemed poets above. You’ve masterfully described unrequited love. Well said, beautifully written. H🌷
I concur with my esteemed poets above. You’ve masterfully described unrequited love. Well said, beautifully written. H🌷
24th Sep 2023 4:08am
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