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I don't
They have money
I don't
They have both parents
I don't
They have so many friends
I don't
They say they're beautiful
I don't
They have smiles on their faces
I don't
They have everything
I don't
They think they're better than me
I don't
I don't
They have both parents
I don't
They have so many friends
I don't
They say they're beautiful
I don't
They have smiles on their faces
I don't
They have everything
I don't
They think they're better than me
I don't
Published 12th Feb 2012
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Anonymous
12th Feb 2012 3:52pm
A well done piece - concise but complete
The message is clear....
I would like to ask you to take this one step further...are these perceptions in any way coming from the BEING OUTSIDE looking in????
They may not have everything
***********************************
They think they're better than me
I don't
***********************************
You are responding to the way you think they think of you
They ACT like they think that they are better than me....
KEEP ON WRITING
Kitty
The message is clear....
I would like to ask you to take this one step further...are these perceptions in any way coming from the BEING OUTSIDE looking in????
They may not have everything
***********************************
They think they're better than me
I don't
***********************************
You are responding to the way you think they think of you
They ACT like they think that they are better than me....
KEEP ON WRITING
Kitty
12th Feb 2012 7:20pm
Anonymous
18th Feb 2012 3:02am
You found a place in wich you fit. Good job, great write
10th Oct 2015 5:51am
I live with my 2nd adopted parents I have no one really my blood parents were killed in front of me when I was 5
