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'Mournin Rise'
I dreamt of
you...
The taste
of your
sweet
heated
flesh...
lingerin'
'Pon my lips.
Felt you...
slaking
my
body...
Each nibble
with mouth...
causin' tremors
n' molten, uncontrollable
joy jizz
to seep out...
I ache...
for more
though
I doubt
you'd be
willin...'
n' so all
I'm left with
is my
dream...
n' a heavy,
thickly rigid
cock...
in need of release.
you...
The taste
of your
sweet
heated
flesh...
lingerin'
'Pon my lips.
Felt you...
slaking
my
body...
Each nibble
with mouth...
causin' tremors
n' molten, uncontrollable
joy jizz
to seep out...
I ache...
for more
though
I doubt
you'd be
willin...'
n' so all
I'm left with
is my
dream...
n' a heavy,
thickly rigid
cock...
in need of release.
Published 12th Apr 2016
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Anonymous
12th Apr 2016 10:25am
Well and well.
;)
Wow that picture.
Hmm
;)
Wow that picture.
Hmm
12th Apr 2016 1:10pm
Lol I'm gonna hope that means u liked lol
Thank u sweetie I appreciate u much
Thank u sweetie I appreciate u much
12th Apr 2016 11:17am
12th Apr 2016 1:12pm
12th Apr 2016 3:25pm
"joy jizz
to seep out..."
haaaaa!!!
you gotta trademark that bro.
diggin this sensual vibe
of early mornin desires..
to seep out..."
haaaaa!!!
you gotta trademark that bro.
diggin this sensual vibe
of early mornin desires..
12th Apr 2016 6:43pm
Lol yea I need to huh? lol
Thank you bro. It's always an honor when u drop in for a visit. Peace n love to you n yours :)
Thank you bro. It's always an honor when u drop in for a visit. Peace n love to you n yours :)
12th Apr 2016 10:03pm
Sounds good PM...lol...
Well written and captures that moment for me with my different appendage...haha... :)
Well written and captures that moment for me with my different appendage...haha... :)
12th Apr 2016 11:30pm
Lol well I'm glad it works for u K lol
Thank u so much for all your support :)
Thank u so much for all your support :)
Anonymous
13th Apr 2016 2:14am
PM... In your face (no pun intended) hardcore poetry.... Most excellent scribe and drawing as well... And the title... Brilliant!!
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
13th Apr 2016 3:08am
Lol u mean in ur face ( in my dreams lol)
Thank u my dear Taryn ur the best :)
Thank u my dear Taryn ur the best :)
13th Apr 2016 4:01am
13th Apr 2016 8:52am
Have no idea what any other male has
but I can assure you I DONT just have one dream, I have many, about many things...this was merely a created piece inspired by my artwork... If it was offensive to you I'm sorry
still it's just an expression of creativity.
but I can assure you I DONT just have one dream, I have many, about many things...this was merely a created piece inspired by my artwork... If it was offensive to you I'm sorry
still it's just an expression of creativity.
14th Apr 2016 3:28am
Oh, no! Not offensive at all.
I do love poems of this kind.
Got a few of mine.
Just genuinely curious, that's all.
I do love poems of this kind.
Got a few of mine.
Just genuinely curious, that's all.
14th Apr 2016 8:35am
Oh ok, I was worried you thought of me as a typical male, (happened too many times in my real life) n only cared about sex lol. Alas, I'm sorry to you for judging :(... But thanks for the clearing up :).. . Oh n the answers still, I don't know lol :)
14th Apr 2016 2:41am
Hey Poet......all I can say to this is ~gulp~......other wise I'm speechless.......enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
14th Apr 2016 8:37am
Flower are you saying some things stuck in ur mouth!? Lmao thank you sweetie, always n forever for your support :)
15th Apr 2016 1:46am
I want some!! Damn!
Your words and your skillful artistry has gotten me wanting to fetch the hubby for a little sumthin’ sumthin’. ;)
Damn you Rich.... fuck! xo
Your words and your skillful artistry has gotten me wanting to fetch the hubby for a little sumthin’ sumthin’. ;)
Damn you Rich.... fuck! xo
15th Apr 2016 2:54am
LMAO... Well then I would say sorry BUT
getting u hot n bothered is a joy lol n damn hubby is a lucky sob lol... Thank u so much my dear :)
getting u hot n bothered is a joy lol n damn hubby is a lucky sob lol... Thank u so much my dear :)
15th Apr 2016 4:19pm
I really love this one... :) I would love to be able to write a poem like this! But I'm not sure if the words would flow as effortlessly and passion-filled for me.
15th Apr 2016 6:35pm
Aaawww I'm super flattered you liked this Lil piece of naughty lol truly appreciate your support sweet lady :)
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18th Apr 2016 9:21pm
20th Apr 2016 7:14pm
How is it that one can be so skillfully artistic with his words, in such a way that touches you like you literally reached out and laid hands? LOL
WOW, very well written is all I can say. Love it, Poetik.
~p.g
WOW, very well written is all I can say. Love it, Poetik.
~p.g
20th Apr 2016 7:32pm
Aaawww... This is going in my "greatest comments of all time list!!" lol thank u precious heart :)
28th Apr 2016 1:10pm
28th Apr 2016 7:35pm
Why thank u! N I'm pleasantly surprised to see u finally found your way to my place! take off ur shoes, sit, n stay awhile lol...
