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Licking Inspiration
******
My Goddess is dark chocolate submissive
tasting of blackberry creaminess
I love her she backed down my demons
with her wicked fierceness
embracing and loving
tender yet tenacious
Taryn my beautiful one
brings me to my knees
for a taste of her ripe bud
my Goddess of erotica
Dominated by one Soul alone
still she shares with us all
allowing us entry into her inner sanctum
where she is at constant play
licking, biting, nibbling
naughty lass has us all creaming
Queen of fucking and getting down
take a bow lovely one
******
Diamond of a man
set me free with our Serial killer series
writes with a fearless pen
no one quite like him
cumming with him while our demons were teeming
Dave writes with a wicked flair
proud and profound
an alien race of higher intelligence
I believe him genetically connected
the seed planted within him
his mind always like an antennae
connecting with outer and inner space
rifting his lyrics on the page
man my friend and love
you truly rock the stage
******
Rising like an unholy wraith
inspires my darkest thoughts
sometimes I really think Lucifer
walks in the body of this man
Hades brings out the beast in me
has me reach for the stars
tells me in my mind's ear
make your demons your bitch
he really brings the heat
when he disembowels us on the page
divulging and uncovering knowledge
not known to most humans
walking amongst the tombstones
collecting our souls along the way
under his spell bedeviled and bewitched
this Master lays it down dark and wicked
******
My Queen of Darkness
leaves my mouth agape
Lady Devlin pulls no punches
she rides hard when she writes
you can feel her vibe streaming off the page
makes maggots come alive
inside your skull squirming around
wriggling around your cerebellum
she will get inside you
with her deep inking
licking and curling your insides
beguiling witchy woman
has me in awe of her skill
left treading deep waters
creating with her
in love with your ink
I bow while in your presence
leaving your mark searing our brains
with the darkness you reveal
love you lady my Queen
(For Dave's Show The Love Comp.)
Published 17th Nov 2015
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17th Nov 2015 1:04am
beautiful one I am blown away and overjoyed by your love and response to this write..
I literally lick inspiration from you and my fellow poets I'm in continual awe of..
I love you so very much thank you with all my heart for the love you show me..
xoxo Brenda
I literally lick inspiration from you and my fellow poets I'm in continual awe of..
I love you so very much thank you with all my heart for the love you show me..
xoxo Brenda
17th Nov 2015 3:43am
that's a sexy stunning tribute to erotic poets here in the underground, Crim.
lusty & loving...
lusty & loving...
17th Nov 2015 3:32pm
17th Nov 2015 4:14am
Sexy and awesome just like the owner of this poem I extremely enjoyed it great job Brenda you are awesome
17th Nov 2015 3:33pm
17th Nov 2015 8:08pm
A fine tribute to some of the most talented folks here. Taryn, Diamond Dave, Lord Hades and Devlin really come alive. Good luck with the comp, Crim!
18th Nov 2015 00:20am
18th Nov 2015 6:14am
Brenda,
What a wonderful write. You amazingly honor those of whom you wrote with such style. Only you
could come up with such a provocative title. Who else would have thought of such a thing.
Loved from beginning to end
Keith
What a wonderful write. You amazingly honor those of whom you wrote with such style. Only you
could come up with such a provocative title. Who else would have thought of such a thing.
Loved from beginning to end
Keith
18th Nov 2015 10:20pm
Brenda, this is truly brilliant.. such a heartfelt write and tribute to your collab partners.. i'm honored to be a part of that list.. and the words you wrote about me, have brought me such warmth to my soul.. i'm privileged to not only call you my collab partner, but most importantly my friend.. Taryn, Devlin, Hades, and myself.. are lucky to know, and have you in our lives.. with love..
Dave
Dave
18th Nov 2015 10:23pm
18th Nov 2015 7:49pm
18th Nov 2015 10:37pm
18th Nov 2015 11:39pm
Titillating tribute to show the love! Very much enjoy how your ink drips for the passionate poets! Bravo, and good luck for seizing the ribbon. Respectfully, blue angel
21st Nov 2015 5:28pm
19th Nov 2015 6:57pm
A beautiful and stunning piece, filled with direct passion, just sublime. It forced me to read it to the end and read it all over again :-)
excellent work :-)
excellent work :-)
21st Nov 2015 5:28pm
