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You Can't
Find happiness through me
I'm a seer, mentor at best
In a lot of ways I've crossed over
Sex used to be everything
Now it's kinda like a side dish
Not quite french fries with gravy
More like brown rice and garlic
I'm a healthier option now
But I'll probably still stink up the joint
Tread lightly
Pass the butter please
I'm a seer, mentor at best
In a lot of ways I've crossed over
Sex used to be everything
Now it's kinda like a side dish
Not quite french fries with gravy
More like brown rice and garlic
I'm a healthier option now
But I'll probably still stink up the joint
Tread lightly
Pass the butter please
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Re: You Can't
2nd Aug 2014 6:12pm
So, I ask... what has changed? Are you saying you have grown into a more ( insert word/words here )type of person? This is interesting. I like it.
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Re: You Can't
2nd Aug 2014 6:19pm
Re: You Can't
2nd Aug 2014 7:56pm
A smile crosses my face Poet.... :)
Are you sure this isn't a stage?
I'm not complaining....
I like all aspects of you...
Are you sure this isn't a stage?
I'm not complaining....
I like all aspects of you...
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Re: You Can't
2nd Aug 2014 8:03pm
Re: You Can't
2nd Aug 2014 8:22pm
Ahhh, Granite, luv :-* ~
You present such challenges, always!
I find myself reading and rereading this and that other you have posted. Going back and forth, pondering, thinking. Setting aside, then coming back again.
If you are experiencing angst or a sense of shift in life then so be it. But, I'll admit, I, for one, am having difficulty with this mien. For one, to my mind, you were never so one-dimensional as to solely be about sex. If that were the case, you would have palled and quickly.
Sex has been your metier to get a great many things across, yes, I'll buy that one. Take me to the store right now, please.
I know not if I offend, luv. I only know what I see, and I require glasses...
You present such challenges, always!
I find myself reading and rereading this and that other you have posted. Going back and forth, pondering, thinking. Setting aside, then coming back again.
If you are experiencing angst or a sense of shift in life then so be it. But, I'll admit, I, for one, am having difficulty with this mien. For one, to my mind, you were never so one-dimensional as to solely be about sex. If that were the case, you would have palled and quickly.
Sex has been your metier to get a great many things across, yes, I'll buy that one. Take me to the store right now, please.
I know not if I offend, luv. I only know what I see, and I require glasses...
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re: Re: You Can't
2nd Aug 2014 8:59pm
What do want at the store ?
Here is a great line by one of my musical heroes, Sun Ra
Chew on this quote by Sun
"I'm so ignorant, that I'm sincere"
You never offend me Miss
Here is a great line by one of my musical heroes, Sun Ra
Chew on this quote by Sun
"I'm so ignorant, that I'm sincere"
You never offend me Miss
Re: You Can't
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2nd Aug 2014 8:35pm
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re: Re: You Can't
2nd Aug 2014 8:56pm
I've had mentors. It's a great thing to be do honored by someone taking an interest in you to take the time and explain life.
I'm passing it on now as natural course. I don't seek to do so, but it seems to gravitate to me. There is a fine though between mentoring and preaching ...
I'm passing it on now as natural course. I don't seek to do so, but it seems to gravitate to me. There is a fine though between mentoring and preaching ...
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2nd Aug 2014 9:02pm
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Re: You Can't
3rd Aug 2014 1:09am
I find it very sexy and a huge turn on to see a mean mature♥ into greatness a man you can beleive in♥
I love this I feel huge depth in the words I could be wrong it could be my mind but my soul see's depth♥
I love this I feel huge depth in the words I could be wrong it could be my mind but my soul see's depth♥
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Re: You Can't
3rd Aug 2014 4:29am
You get the wisdom package at a certain age. All the stuff you couldn't see before becomes very clear ....
Thx Lori
Thx Lori
re: Re: You Can't
3rd Aug 2014 9:54am
ya I no thats a thing you learn as you watch the differance between men and not yet men♥
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Re: You Can't
3rd Aug 2014 11:54am
Yes, it's true
Often, you have to grow into yourself, take the raw materials and shape them into a plan of life.
Often, you have to grow into yourself, take the raw materials and shape them into a plan of life.
Re: You Can't
4th Aug 2014 9:24am
But you can find happiness through you; you've always brought light with your prose. I love your pieces as they shape the nature of 'you'...
xx
xx
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Re: You Can't
4th Aug 2014 11:52am
So kind of you Glass
You have always been a supporter
Now, where have you been ?
Missed you
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You have always been a supporter
Now, where have you been ?
Missed you
x
Re: You Can't
7th Aug 2014 2:12pm
As stated before you are a man who knows himself well. Life is an evolution. If there isnt changes and growth we sre nothing more than a stagnant lump on this earth. Thank you for sharing with us
Belle
Belle
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Re: You Can't
7th Aug 2014 2:14pm
Crossing over is a perplexing place.
I'm kinda feeling my way.
Writing about it does help ...
Thx
I'm kinda feeling my way.
Writing about it does help ...
Thx
Re: You Can't
21st Mar 2015 8:14pm
I'll happily siphon your experience, as long as your happy to give.
Yet another lookie loo.
Yet another lookie loo.
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