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Used.
Sure, seduce the innocent girl,
misuse her trust you ignorant boy.
Thurst your cock make her feel loved,
leaving her naked and confused.
you know only lust,
she's feeling unjust.
she wanted your "more"
not to be your whore...
Now she's unwanted and wounded
lonely and polluted.
misuse her trust you ignorant boy.
Thurst your cock make her feel loved,
leaving her naked and confused.
you know only lust,
she's feeling unjust.
she wanted your "more"
not to be your whore...
Now she's unwanted and wounded
lonely and polluted.
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13th Feb 2014 6:57pm
A lot of boys see just lust
Unfortunately some never grow out of it
Keep striving for love DD
keep the poetry flowing it's good
rose
Unfortunately some never grow out of it
Keep striving for love DD
keep the poetry flowing it's good
rose
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re: Re: Used.
13th Feb 2014 9:06pm
Thank you Rose,
Though most of my poems are of others.
Never truly about me.
But I appreciate the sympathy.
xoxo
Though most of my poems are of others.
Never truly about me.
But I appreciate the sympathy.
xoxo
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2014 7:05pm
Yes. It's painful to read... But the truth always hurt. I like how your anger is portrayed deadly in this poem. I felt angry just reading it! But a honest write.
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13th Feb 2014 7:08pm
Echo Cassandra, I felt angry as well.Good write. Thank you for sharing this. :)
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