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Sexiest Whim (Part 1)
Eyes lock...from across the room
The sexiest impending doom
I've ever laid my eyes upon
She and I both came on strong
Flipped her hair and spread her thighs
Bit her lip and winked her eye
I checked my breath "is it that of a cow!?"
*Exhale...sniff* we're ok for now
Raised my brow and gripped my junk
Hey eyes wide open like her heart had sunk
We met halfway face to face
I slyly mouthed "lets ditch this place"
We made it to her house atlast
50 on 20 miles fast
Removed her heels 'cause pain had rose
Revealed her sexy feet and toes
We seemingly flew up the stairs
Away just seconds to stripping bare
Opened the door, its time to rock
She slammed it back and clicked the lock...
The sexiest impending doom
I've ever laid my eyes upon
She and I both came on strong
Flipped her hair and spread her thighs
Bit her lip and winked her eye
I checked my breath "is it that of a cow!?"
*Exhale...sniff* we're ok for now
Raised my brow and gripped my junk
Hey eyes wide open like her heart had sunk
We met halfway face to face
I slyly mouthed "lets ditch this place"
We made it to her house atlast
50 on 20 miles fast
Removed her heels 'cause pain had rose
Revealed her sexy feet and toes
We seemingly flew up the stairs
Away just seconds to stripping bare
Opened the door, its time to rock
She slammed it back and clicked the lock...
Published 30th Jun 2013
| Edited 6th Jul 2013
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30th Jun 2013 10:34pm
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 00:24am
Leaves the reader wanting more...awesome read :) x
1st Jul 2013 00:32am
1st Jul 2013 11:25pm
Dude, didn't know they made gold sexy pens now. Gotta get me one! ;) Nice
1st Jul 2013 11:35pm
7th Jul 2013 00:26am
I can definitely tell this is a part. Cant wait for part two. Definitely a over good beginning. I look forward to reading more of your poetry for sure. But I do think a few things need correcting. Aside from that this was awesome.
7th Jul 2013 2:16am
thankyou W.B...message me your thoughts on what you think needs correcting...
7th Jul 2013 5:21pm
7th Jul 2013 5:24pm
Thankyou so much Natural :-) I hope S.W.2 is as enjoyable as this one was...
23rd Jul 2013 6:12pm
Hi Z stopping by for visit, I liked this piece a lot nice work. very sexy.
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23rd Jul 2013 9:33pm
