Poems About Women by Top Critiquers
#women
Being in control
He avoids big women- tall women
They scare the shit out of him
They make him feel like he has a small dick
He imagines fucking one and being able to hear his dick rattle around in there
The sound of something disappearing
Like a rock being thrown down a very deep well
This deep abyss, all consuming
He avoids them like the plague
Mostly they make him feel like a small man
He likes little women
Because, they can't wrap their hand around his arm, then he knows that he's in charge
He feels good when he's in charge
That's all...
They scare the shit out of him
They make him feel like he has a small dick
He imagines fucking one and being able to hear his dick rattle around in there
The sound of something disappearing
Like a rock being thrown down a very deep well
This deep abyss, all consuming
He avoids them like the plague
Mostly they make him feel like a small man
He likes little women
Because, they can't wrap their hand around his arm, then he knows that he's in charge
He feels good when he's in charge
That's all...
#fiction
#identity
#power
#sex
#women
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9 Comments
Elizabelle the becoming
you finally told the men I've been spread thin
your rejection stings Lu, Lu I'm not a child anymore
and neither are you
a man of the heavens and the worlds
I need my logical Son
not the one bent on tragedy for me
where I burn on a cross and in the end the vampires are set ablaze too
because one of my visions frightened you
you lit us on fire and code locked the door
and took off in space craft
it took forever for Daddy to heal my scars
but I'm glad you finally felt guilty and told Him
despite both of your...
your rejection stings Lu, Lu I'm not a child anymore
and neither are you
a man of the heavens and the worlds
I need my logical Son
not the one bent on tragedy for me
where I burn on a cross and in the end the vampires are set ablaze too
because one of my visions frightened you
you lit us on fire and code locked the door
and took off in space craft
it took forever for Daddy to heal my scars
but I'm glad you finally felt guilty and told Him
despite both of your...
#childhood
#love
#women
66 reads
8 Comments
Barbie
She looked just
Like a Barbie doll
Platinum hair
Pulled back
In a long ponytail
All dolled up
In her beach going
Clothes
Proudly flaunting
Her big Barbie boobs
Sadly, she was
As plastic
As they come
Like a Barbie doll
Platinum hair
Pulled back
In a long ponytail
All dolled up
In her beach going
Clothes
Proudly flaunting
Her big Barbie boobs
Sadly, she was
As plastic
As they come
#women
#fiction
147 reads
30 Comments
Broken Girl
at first it looks like
i'm a confident and
independent lady
while deep inside
there is this lonely
little girl who has
never felt loved
at times all that
she wants is for
someone to take
her hand, guide
her and lead her
through the battle
fields called life
show her the way
protect her tell her
she'll be okay, that
she's safe, that she
is and will always be
perfect exactly as she is
i'm a confident and
independent lady
while deep inside
there is this lonely
little girl who has
never felt loved
at times all that
she wants is for
someone to take
her hand, guide
her and lead her
through the battle
fields called life
show her the way
protect her tell her
she'll be okay, that
she's safe, that she
is and will always be
perfect exactly as she is
#inspirational
#women
94 reads
24 Comments
HINT OF CLEAVAGE
#confessional
#erotic
#rhyming #women
#rhyming #women
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3 Comments
bait & switch team
15 of 30
she tells them she's not looking to get involved
that they should just keep it moving
they insist they aren't either
...they just want to be friends
& isn't it just conceit on her part...to presume
but she's so often been driven down this well-traveled road
...knows where it probably leads
...& how it will likely end
her constant response to this accusation
to a sense of over-inflated ego
...is always the same
it might be...I am too full of myself...
...if it hadn't so frequently proven...
she tells them she's not looking to get involved
that they should just keep it moving
they insist they aren't either
...they just want to be friends
& isn't it just conceit on her part...to presume
but she's so often been driven down this well-traveled road
...knows where it probably leads
...& how it will likely end
her constant response to this accusation
to a sense of over-inflated ego
...is always the same
it might be...I am too full of myself...
...if it hadn't so frequently proven...
#women
#men
#manipulation
#deception
#NaPoWriMo2024
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4 Comments
Women Ask Men to Scoot Over
Usually it's in bed
Reluctantly of course we move
Often we'd like to stay where we are
Men never use the word SCOOT
That's a female word all the way
I read this to her
She asks me what I'm trying to prove
I tell her I don't like the SCOOT word
How come she asks
I tell her that she's more fun close by
She's quiet for a moment
Then tells me to SCOOT
Reluctantly of course we move
Often we'd like to stay where we are
Men never use the word SCOOT
That's a female word all the way
I read this to her
She asks me what I'm trying to prove
I tell her I don't like the SCOOT word
How come she asks
I tell her that she's more fun close by
She's quiet for a moment
Then tells me to SCOOT
#women
#men
#dialogue
#sleep
#PowerOfWords
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26 Comments
youthful flower
if i
cry like
the dawn,
where we
will find
pleasures,
a joy
in delight
that charms
the air,
and in
love's tender
poise,
let not
one petal
of her
flower
be seen
to fade
or wilt.
cry like
the dawn,
where we
will find
pleasures,
a joy
in delight
that charms
the air,
and in
love's tender
poise,
let not
one petal
of her
flower
be seen
to fade
or wilt.
#admiration
#aging
#inspirational
#strength
#women
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14 Comments
Softy Co-Piloting Your Mind First Class (Air Style)
To be in the know moment one takes time to see things as others cannot grasp the concept or lose focus of presented perceptions
We go through life to make better choices for ourselves
For the parents who have children, safeguard their future the best way possible
Read to them is always my advice
Do not allow highway information from the internet to be the window of their innocent souls
What happens when you live in a world that not only supports you...
We go through life to make better choices for ourselves
For the parents who have children, safeguard their future the best way possible
Read to them is always my advice
Do not allow highway information from the internet to be the window of their innocent souls
What happens when you live in a world that not only supports you...
#women
#motivational
#inspirational
#spiritual
#feminism
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6 Comments
Heroes and Mothers
Women in humble homes should be revered
when with their children they spin dreams
of their future greatness in ethics and creed
to achieve what they left for motherhood
for healthy sons and daughters
they toil with love always unseen
their looks judged as beauty fades
as they turn homes into the family haven
their heads may know no crowns
nor will they ever lead great nations
but within their love future seeds
of leaders and greatness reside
fathers may leave absconding from duties
but mothers stand strong...
when with their children they spin dreams
of their future greatness in ethics and creed
to achieve what they left for motherhood
for healthy sons and daughters
they toil with love always unseen
their looks judged as beauty fades
as they turn homes into the family haven
their heads may know no crowns
nor will they ever lead great nations
but within their love future seeds
of leaders and greatness reside
fathers may leave absconding from duties
but mothers stand strong...
#women
#WritingPoetry
#determination
107 reads
6 Comments
The true beauty of Woman
Maybe men mistake the power of femininity,
For they harbor judgments that fail to see,
Some hate older women, blind to their wisdom,
Viewing them as young, in their own delusion.
Skin colors, some despise, preferring between,
Missing the beauty in each vibrant sheen.
They label him skinny or fat, blind to his essence,
Reducing worth to mere physical presence.
Prostitutes they call liberated women,
Unaware of the freedom they have striven.
Complex, they label independent souls,
Ignoring the strength that within them unfolds. ...
For they harbor judgments that fail to see,
Some hate older women, blind to their wisdom,
Viewing them as young, in their own delusion.
Skin colors, some despise, preferring between,
Missing the beauty in each vibrant sheen.
They label him skinny or fat, blind to his essence,
Reducing worth to mere physical presence.
Prostitutes they call liberated women,
Unaware of the freedom they have striven.
Complex, they label independent souls,
Ignoring the strength that within them unfolds. ...
#women
#romantic
#beauty
#admiration
#respect
119 reads
2 Comments
Tripping
You know I think about women
This is not sexual, although my sexual preference is women
I just think on them a lot, not obsessing, but a lot
Not in ways to get them into bed or ensuring what I got
I think of other things like the way that they smell
The way that her voice rose and the way that it fell
The beauty of their hair cut short or draped down their back
Balding from an illness or treatment, yeah boo I like it like that
Without cause or need she willingly accepts responsibility
Eternally assigned to prove herself and her...
This is not sexual, although my sexual preference is women
I just think on them a lot, not obsessing, but a lot
Not in ways to get them into bed or ensuring what I got
I think of other things like the way that they smell
The way that her voice rose and the way that it fell
The beauty of their hair cut short or draped down their back
Balding from an illness or treatment, yeah boo I like it like that
Without cause or need she willingly accepts responsibility
Eternally assigned to prove herself and her...
#love
#women
#admiration #respect
#admiration #respect
302 reads
2 Comments
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