Poems About Werewolves Seeking Honest Critique

My muscles spasm
My breath goes in
Little fingers start to grow
A snout turns from a nose
Big feet become bigger
The bite delivered
My teeth pop out
Too many to count
Eyes start to hone
My fur begins to grow
A hunger for flesh
Sinew to ingest
All because of the moon
I am the vampires doom
Fuck Jacob and Lupin
I am the new Lycan
I am the strongest in the world
Even stronger than Micheal in Underworld
I look at the moon
I howl " AAwwwooooo!"