Poems About Vulnerability Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about vulnerability seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MelancholicMike
Poem Published
29th Jun 2024 5:20pm
29th Jun 2024 5:20pm
Therapy Session #3
Therapist : You spoke about “Home”
What does home represent ?
Protagonist :
Home represents a construct.
in its natural cocoon,
it blooms with sprung wings of elegance.
Home is a muse to unsung poetry.
love’s elusive grace
the ministry of presence.
Home drew its first breath on March 27th.
I found true perspective in beauty and loss.
her eyes agleam on first sight.
she sought me out and broke my will.
Home was born unlike the others.
the color blue under the sanguine skies
I've...
What does home represent ?
Protagonist :
Home represents a construct.
in its natural cocoon,
it blooms with sprung wings of elegance.
Home is a muse to unsung poetry.
love’s elusive grace
the ministry of presence.
Home drew its first breath on March 27th.
I found true perspective in beauty and loss.
her eyes agleam on first sight.
she sought me out and broke my will.
Home was born unlike the others.
the color blue under the sanguine skies
I've...
#happiness
#honesty
#hope
#peace
#vulnerability
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jun 2024 10:53am
25th Jun 2024 10:53am
I am lost
Life is a fire that won’t burn forever
It freezes, it fades
Hope is the curse of the individual
It dies with him
Fear is the individual’s lust for life
Paralyzing, it kills
Nature is a mother who eats her own young
Without care
Old, battered landscape, a tinge of memory fading
Soul and body falls to the ground
Remember the seasons of temperate beauty?
Stood I then amongst the falling rain
Death hides not in the summer’s warm winds
But a winter breeze can kill
Winter is a beast that tortures the strong ...
It freezes, it fades
Hope is the curse of the individual
It dies with him
Fear is the individual’s lust for life
Paralyzing, it kills
Nature is a mother who eats her own young
Without care
Old, battered landscape, a tinge of memory fading
Soul and body falls to the ground
Remember the seasons of temperate beauty?
Stood I then amongst the falling rain
Death hides not in the summer’s warm winds
But a winter breeze can kill
Winter is a beast that tortures the strong ...
#nature
#strength
#vulnerability
#weakness
#winter
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MelancholicMike
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2024 10:57am
23rd Jun 2024 10:57am
Therapy Session #2
Therapist : “I feel like I'm falling?”
Why do you feel that way ?
Protagonist :
I feel I've fallen from grace.
My karma appears imminent.
I have conceded to my self-destruction.
My sadness,my comfort.
April took its greatest toll.
With a heavy heart and tired eyes.
Twenty-five days like counting numbers.
Twenty-eight years of skimming through chapters.
Trying to find myself.
and nestled deep within
is an unwavering discomfort.
A vile dose of masochism.
My natural endorphins could not...
Why do you feel that way ?
Protagonist :
I feel I've fallen from grace.
My karma appears imminent.
I have conceded to my self-destruction.
My sadness,my comfort.
April took its greatest toll.
With a heavy heart and tired eyes.
Twenty-five days like counting numbers.
Twenty-eight years of skimming through chapters.
Trying to find myself.
and nestled deep within
is an unwavering discomfort.
A vile dose of masochism.
My natural endorphins could not...
#hurt
#love
#sadness
#vulnerability
#weakness
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QuietusQuill
Poem Published
13th Jun 2024 9:23pm
13th Jun 2024 9:23pm
Wrapped in the burden of your attritional gospel
Sometimes I can tarry,
on the work of the progenitor
of American ethos
and accrue the
blotted simulacrum of atman
as the ashen Sleipnir albedos
to evince its candor by dint of
my denude acuity.
Annan does the leviathan swarm
as froufrou mordito’s
wither in a canicule arboretum
sakura cedes their seeded whispers
exhaling their viennas up to me
for their is beauty in the suffering,
an understanding a collateral reflection
all for the hunger of atrophy,
swallowing that bittersweet...
on the work of the progenitor
of American ethos
and accrue the
blotted simulacrum of atman
as the ashen Sleipnir albedos
to evince its candor by dint of
my denude acuity.
Annan does the leviathan swarm
as froufrou mordito’s
wither in a canicule arboretum
sakura cedes their seeded whispers
exhaling their viennas up to me
for their is beauty in the suffering,
an understanding a collateral reflection
all for the hunger of atrophy,
swallowing that bittersweet...
#corruption
#deception
#LifeStruggles
#power
#vulnerability
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 5:06pm
12th Jun 2024 5:06pm
Boomerang ! Or Self-Destroyer ?
You do not have any friends, that's why you block those who won't talk with you.
spare yourself the trouble, you can't give what you don't have, so no need
to wear thick when its already hot, and say the sky is blue when you do not need to.
You wear red outside your house, and i know that inside you are as gray as the
walls that surround you, you can even dissolve into the walls and become a dumb,
mute stone..as well, you affect your look; your walk, you stalk the naive, introvert
ones, and you stutter like a turkey before the gentlemen, but,...
spare yourself the trouble, you can't give what you don't have, so no need
to wear thick when its already hot, and say the sky is blue when you do not need to.
You wear red outside your house, and i know that inside you are as gray as the
walls that surround you, you can even dissolve into the walls and become a dumb,
mute stone..as well, you affect your look; your walk, you stalk the naive, introvert
ones, and you stutter like a turkey before the gentlemen, but,...
#corruption
#deception
#oppression
#rebellion
#vulnerability
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 1:29am
11th Jun 2024 1:29am
Bibi and Biden
The conservative hand has made it clear,
with Genocide Joe and Genocide Jew,
that their bombs don't give a shit who is who
in any young family fleeing in fear.
But Bibi and Biden are not the same.
One loves the bombs much more than the other,
to murder folks with an Arabic name
as Semite brother on Semite brother!
No longer caring when targets are dead
and by detonations reduced to paste
not even considered medical waste
but a rusty stain, (where once was a head),
provided by some weapon crafty Yanks... ...
with Genocide Joe and Genocide Jew,
that their bombs don't give a shit who is who
in any young family fleeing in fear.
But Bibi and Biden are not the same.
One loves the bombs much more than the other,
to murder folks with an Arabic name
as Semite brother on Semite brother!
No longer caring when targets are dead
and by detonations reduced to paste
not even considered medical waste
but a rusty stain, (where once was a head),
provided by some weapon crafty Yanks... ...
#bullying
#LifeStruggles
#nightmares #vulnerability
#nightmares #vulnerability
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Vandelious
Neil Stewart
Neil Stewart
Poem Published
6th Jun 2024 9:35pm
6th Jun 2024 9:35pm
Pushed Proponents
All the ps, all for me.
All for one, and one for you,
but two times that is time for me.
A second to be wreckless is just right for me.
Told us that but sugar coated.
Hold on twat, so you decode it,
Ill decide if it's tonight when you console with
What if fucking might be, likely pushed proponents.
Shooshed supporters get disposed off.
Your component; told off.
But you told them your whole "all love"
A hole deep enough for their component.
They own you as,
You counsil a users ounce full, they use you...
All for one, and one for you,
but two times that is time for me.
A second to be wreckless is just right for me.
Told us that but sugar coated.
Hold on twat, so you decode it,
Ill decide if it's tonight when you console with
What if fucking might be, likely pushed proponents.
Shooshed supporters get disposed off.
Your component; told off.
But you told them your whole "all love"
A hole deep enough for their component.
They own you as,
You counsil a users ounce full, they use you...
#corruption
#freedom
#politics
#power
#vulnerability
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
6th Jun 2024 1:38pm
6th Jun 2024 1:38pm
The Jaws of Psychosis
The phantom voices are
soundless unsoundness
to the normal world.
With my tongue,
psychosis cracks this lash,
scolding the empty air.
Give one hell,
give another heaven,
but where is my heaven?
Fracture this jawbone -
this jabbering embarrassment
wishing my vacant face!
Raked over hellish coals,
blistering with utterances,
my mind now scorched earth!
Within this jaw-like clench
of a tongueless entity,
I am surely reviled!
soundless unsoundness
to the normal world.
With my tongue,
psychosis cracks this lash,
scolding the empty air.
Give one hell,
give another heaven,
but where is my heaven?
Fracture this jawbone -
this jabbering embarrassment
wishing my vacant face!
Raked over hellish coals,
blistering with utterances,
my mind now scorched earth!
Within this jaw-like clench
of a tongueless entity,
I am surely reviled!
#anxiety
#depression
#MentalHealth
#SelfHarm
#vulnerability
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3 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
26th May 2024 3:35am
26th May 2024 3:35am
seasons of plenty
Give justice to the weak and the fatherless; maintain the right of the
afflicted and the destitute. Rescue the weak and the needy; deliver
them from the hand of the wicked.”―Psalm 82:3-4 ESV
fountains of water
to quench the dry earth
mountains of laughter
to publish my mirth
then shall the nations
rejoice in the south
and ample rations
of praise fill my mouth
...
afflicted and the destitute. Rescue the weak and the needy; deliver
them from the hand of the wicked.”―Psalm 82:3-4 ESV
fountains of water
to quench the dry earth
mountains of laughter
to publish my mirth
then shall the nations
rejoice in the south
and ample rations
of praise fill my mouth
...
#kindness
#poverty
#support
#vulnerability
#weakness
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neves
Poem Published
26th May 2024 2:09am
26th May 2024 2:09am
Beauty is in the being that felt it
I sit with diprosalic
in my hair bathing in it,
believing in it, allowing
it to acknowledge dead
scales laying secretly
around my crown
I pick up my
double sided comb,
gliding and lifting
dead skin from
my scalp
I remember
vividly as a child;
being combed
to death making
sure there wasn't
a single flake to
be discovered,
then I remember
how every pain
began to form
each scale left
upon my head
how beauty
is actually ...
in my hair bathing in it,
believing in it, allowing
it to acknowledge dead
scales laying secretly
around my crown
I pick up my
double sided comb,
gliding and lifting
dead skin from
my scalp
I remember
vividly as a child;
being combed
to death making
sure there wasn't
a single flake to
be discovered,
then I remember
how every pain
began to form
each scale left
upon my head
how beauty
is actually ...
#confessional
#vulnerability
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Northern1
Poem Published
22nd May 2024 10:20pm
22nd May 2024 10:20pm
Pussy Power
I must not move too much while he lingers
He treats me like furniture with fingers
Before jumping down he will arch his back
Glances at me like I'm his favorite snack
Today he caught a fly then he ate her
As an appetizer for what he'll get later
He cries so sweet if he doesn't get fish
Am played like a fool for his every wish
If I call his name he simply ignores me
Wanting something he coyly implores me
With a purr and a soft rub against my leg
Makes me feel guilty for having him beg
He owns himself but...
He treats me like furniture with fingers
Before jumping down he will arch his back
Glances at me like I'm his favorite snack
Today he caught a fly then he ate her
As an appetizer for what he'll get later
He cries so sweet if he doesn't get fish
Am played like a fool for his every wish
If I call his name he simply ignores me
Wanting something he coyly implores me
With a purr and a soft rub against my leg
Makes me feel guilty for having him beg
He owns himself but...
#acceptance
#cats
#vulnerability
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th May 2024 11:21am
15th May 2024 11:21am
Feel the Leech
Hope
Fuck hope
Hope is a pig
Kick it, murder it
Annihilate it
Hope for hope?
To be full of hope is to be full of shit
Hope is a weapon used against you
Hope costs money, you always pay
You're always hoping that your god hears you
It's all in your mind
Fuck hope
Hope is a pig
Kick it, murder it
Annihilate it
Hope for hope?
To be full of hope is to be full of shit
Hope is a weapon used against you
Hope costs money, you always pay
You're always hoping that your god hears you
It's all in your mind
#atheism
#hope
#strength
#vulnerability
#weakness
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