Poems About Vanity Seeking Honest Critique
#vanity
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:18pm
Yesterday 1:18pm
What She Said About The Jeans She Bought
She said those denim
slacks that she just purchased do
look sexy on her.
slacks that she just purchased do
look sexy on her.
#dialogue
#fiction
#haiku
#sensual
#vanity
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Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 7:44pm
3rd Apr 2025 7:44pm
Sweet Reprieve
I’ve done a number on a few
I’ve been deep down in the swells of my sins
And those waves touch the beauty that surrounds me
It seems useless, to change if you’ve learned to exist in a miserable way
Patterns pave a way back home
To where it all began
Nothing but mess, and the remains of a past time
It rots like any other dead body
It reeks at my doorstep
Let their tears fall!
They’re coming with
guns and knives to
tear my skin apart
I hold secrets in the crevices of my heart
I’ve cut a piece or two myself, to...
I’ve been deep down in the swells of my sins
And those waves touch the beauty that surrounds me
It seems useless, to change if you’ve learned to exist in a miserable way
Patterns pave a way back home
To where it all began
Nothing but mess, and the remains of a past time
It rots like any other dead body
It reeks at my doorstep
Let their tears fall!
They’re coming with
guns and knives to
tear my skin apart
I hold secrets in the crevices of my heart
I’ve cut a piece or two myself, to...
#bipolar
#confessional
#deception #vanity
#deception #vanity
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Pinkdreams
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 1:39am
23rd Mar 2025 1:39am
Anastasia Brielle
Anastasia Brielle (an unhyphenated compound first name)
liked to criticize what others ordered for dinner
Steak? She'd rather eat the box her toe-FOO come in
(that's how she pronounced it)
Whenever I was in a restaurant with Anastasia Brielle
I'd order things like bacon cheeseburgers
even when I had been eyeing the vegetarian chili.
Anastasia Brielle (not her real name, but close)
also liked to talk about the horrors of slaughterhouses
even though exactly no one
wanted to hear it.
And though I am mindful of having a number of...
liked to criticize what others ordered for dinner
Steak? She'd rather eat the box her toe-FOO come in
(that's how she pronounced it)
Whenever I was in a restaurant with Anastasia Brielle
I'd order things like bacon cheeseburgers
even when I had been eyeing the vegetarian chili.
Anastasia Brielle (not her real name, but close)
also liked to talk about the horrors of slaughterhouses
even though exactly no one
wanted to hear it.
And though I am mindful of having a number of...
#vanity
72 reads
2 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 2:39pm
18th Mar 2025 2:39pm
Everybody
Every woman is fragile
If they won’t admit it
publicly or privately
They are broken
I’ve lived with both
That’s how I know
Protect the one
Drop the other
Every man is vain
If they won’t admit it
publicly or privately
They are self-absorbed
I’ve worked with both
This is how it should go
Pay the one
Fire the other
Every person is a bank account
If they won’t admit it
publicly or privately
They are not balanced
I've transacted with both
And just so you know
One makes...
If they won’t admit it
publicly or privately
They are broken
I’ve lived with both
That’s how I know
Protect the one
Drop the other
Every man is vain
If they won’t admit it
publicly or privately
They are self-absorbed
I’ve worked with both
This is how it should go
Pay the one
Fire the other
Every person is a bank account
If they won’t admit it
publicly or privately
They are not balanced
I've transacted with both
And just so you know
One makes...
#vanity
61 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:09am
7th Feb 2025 3:09am
Storytime! Shut up and Listen!
#courage
#patience
#TimeHeals #vanity
#TimeHeals #vanity
148 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 11:09am
31st Dec 2024 11:09am
Queen for a day, fool for a lifetime
Pat yourself on the back
give yourself a hug
your ability to bore me is impressive
do you practice in front of your mirror?
you must have thick skin
the layers must have accumulated a horrific odor of skunk
what happens when there's no one left to put to sleep?
your obnoxious tendencies irritate me and all the others
you succeeded in being, "That obnoxious girl" no one likes
Here's a suggestion...
stop trying to one up or outdo whatever I or others have to say
it's not an attractive trait
if you can't be respectable...
give yourself a hug
your ability to bore me is impressive
do you practice in front of your mirror?
you must have thick skin
the layers must have accumulated a horrific odor of skunk
what happens when there's no one left to put to sleep?
your obnoxious tendencies irritate me and all the others
you succeeded in being, "That obnoxious girl" no one likes
Here's a suggestion...
stop trying to one up or outdo whatever I or others have to say
it's not an attractive trait
if you can't be respectable...
#emptiness
#loneliness
#rejection #vanity
#rejection #vanity
128 reads
15 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 6:52am
11th Dec 2024 6:52am
Vanity
Power to the people who see through the lie
Some of us know that it’s merely a parlor trick
Taxes fuel frustration choking out the little guy
Resulting in more money for that wealthy prick
It seems the rest of the population remain lost
Making choices difficult while feeding insanity
Looking in the mirror reveals what choices cost
Realizing we live in a world that caters to vanity
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Some of us know that it’s merely a parlor trick
Taxes fuel frustration choking out the little guy
Resulting in more money for that wealthy prick
It seems the rest of the population remain lost
Making choices difficult while feeding insanity
Looking in the mirror reveals what choices cost
Realizing we live in a world that caters to vanity
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#vanity
172 reads
18 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 2:42pm
6th Dec 2024 2:42pm
Jeremy's Christmas Card's From Eliza
Jeremy's Christmas card's from Eliza.
It shows her naked by the tree.
He better hide it quick.
It shows her naked by the tree.
He better hide it quick.
#Christmas
#fiction
#lover
#sex
#vanity
174 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 2:39pm
15th Nov 2024 2:39pm
The Shaggy D.A.
Famous MAGA piece of shit Gaetz
reminds us to be wise with votes
lest we wind up with reprobates
shaming daughters with shameless gloats,
which speak to his priorities,
for underage activism...
as merely bro proclivities
for ill suited public jism,
of which the citizens have heard
enough to think his word absurd
and that he is the biggest turd
to ever chase a teenage bird...
and if he could she'd be his slave
leftover from a MAGA rave.
reminds us to be wise with votes
lest we wind up with reprobates
shaming daughters with shameless gloats,
which speak to his priorities,
for underage activism...
as merely bro proclivities
for ill suited public jism,
of which the citizens have heard
enough to think his word absurd
and that he is the biggest turd
to ever chase a teenage bird...
and if he could she'd be his slave
leftover from a MAGA rave.
#corruption
#hypocrisy
#manipulation
#vanity
#vulnerability
290 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 9:34am
11th Nov 2024 9:34am
Private Jets
Private jets
And chemtrails
Flying first class
45 minutes to my house
1 percent carbon footprint
132 times more than you
Caviar and silk robes
Paid for by your local mailman
Billions and billions
Can’t wrap my mind around
But they leave the check for the rest of us
And tweet about bullshit
They think is important
But not in my world
Have a birthday of decadence
Jet set to opulence
Must be nice for a peasant
Close as you get
Be their servant
Pick up...
And chemtrails
Flying first class
45 minutes to my house
1 percent carbon footprint
132 times more than you
Caviar and silk robes
Paid for by your local mailman
Billions and billions
Can’t wrap my mind around
But they leave the check for the rest of us
And tweet about bullshit
They think is important
But not in my world
Have a birthday of decadence
Jet set to opulence
Must be nice for a peasant
Close as you get
Be their servant
Pick up...
#environment
#hypocrisy
#money #vanity
#money #vanity
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 4:12pm
8th Nov 2024 4:12pm
Brooklyn's Last Exit
Gang rape America is here to stay
proudly declared by each sick MAGA vote
influenced by meme mechanical rote
all the storm trooper night and half the day.
So now our boys can fuck the MAGA way
or grab some Hollywood Access tail
to fuck on a third political rail
just to find out what the homies will say
since nothing matters to the MAGA mind
where..."sucks to be you"...always plays through.
(We can't have their precious balls turning blue
when a hard working dude needs to unwind).
Just find someone...
proudly declared by each sick MAGA vote
influenced by meme mechanical rote
all the storm trooper night and half the day.
So now our boys can fuck the MAGA way
or grab some Hollywood Access tail
to fuck on a third political rail
just to find out what the homies will say
since nothing matters to the MAGA mind
where..."sucks to be you"...always plays through.
(We can't have their precious balls turning blue
when a hard working dude needs to unwind).
Just find someone...
#morality
#responsibility
#vanity #vulnerability
#vanity #vulnerability
150 reads
8 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 8:55pm
2nd Nov 2024 8:55pm
The Troll From Studio 54
#betrayal
#DomesticViolence
#lies
#secrets
#vanity
199 reads
30 Comments
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