Poems About Vampires Seeking Honest Critique
#vampires
Poems about vampires seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Today 2:51pm
Today 2:51pm
Come To Me. You Could No Longer Deny What You Really Are.
Clare
stepped out
of the house
naked and with
blood on both hands. She
looked like she was about
to scream. But that was before
she saw a man standing also
naked and holding his hand out to
her... making a frightened Clare come closer.
stepped out
of the house
naked and with
blood on both hands. She
looked like she was about
to scream. But that was before
she saw a man standing also
naked and holding his hand out to
her... making a frightened Clare come closer.
#dark
#fiction
#scary
#sex
#vampires
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 9:59pm
7th Nov 2024 9:59pm
Teenage Vampire
how can you know the distance run
between the longing and the sun…
when I was just a little boy
they caught me with a rat,
about to sink my fangs in it.
the sun slanting between
the houses on that row
to where I crouched beside the hose and bikes
and contemplated blood.
they called me mad
and locked me up
and gave out pills
like sweets on Christmas morn.
they tried to unlock a room in my skull
that would contain the answers to my self.
abandoned at just four years old, ...
between the longing and the sun…
when I was just a little boy
they caught me with a rat,
about to sink my fangs in it.
the sun slanting between
the houses on that row
to where I crouched beside the hose and bikes
and contemplated blood.
they called me mad
and locked me up
and gave out pills
like sweets on Christmas morn.
they tried to unlock a room in my skull
that would contain the answers to my self.
abandoned at just four years old, ...
#murder
#suffering
#teens #vampires
#teens #vampires
49 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 11:58am
27th Oct 2024 11:58am
A WICKED WORLD
As long as I can remember I never truly thought that my hometown. 🌆 NEW YORK CITY 🏙️ WOULD BE BLANKET IN SHADES OF 🌑 DARKNESS. THE YEARS OF THE INVASION 2020 to now 2024 OF THE MAGGOTS, CALLED THE NEW COMERS OF AMERICA. IMMIGRANTS AS THEY WERE SENT BY BUSES AND PLANES, even walking across the border. WHO KNEW WILL BE DESTROYING THE CITY LIFE. 😲 YET here is the truth of the devastation of crimes, with no punishment or jail time, murders and robbery, and the senseless killings of American citizen. WHO are people young and elderly and childrens....
#money
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#vampires
#werewolves
74 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 2:21pm
21st Oct 2024 2:21pm
Captive Audience Of A Vampire Show
Zane
spotted
Kimberly
walking towards
Jonathan. And with
a wave of hand, he made
her strip down before he slipped
off his robe and pressed her naked
body against his. Then, Jonathan
sucked Kimberly's blood with his razor fangs.
spotted
Kimberly
walking towards
Jonathan. And with
a wave of hand, he made
her strip down before he slipped
off his robe and pressed her naked
body against his. Then, Jonathan
sucked Kimberly's blood with his razor fangs.
#dark
#fiction
#Halloween
#sex
#vampires
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 5:40pm
20th Oct 2024 5:40pm
WHEN NIGHT FALLS
When night falls and with the shade darkness of night, with it's every dim lights that goes out, as they surround your thoughts. AS it creates shadow images of human shadows against the wall. 🧱 But yet as soon as you close your eyes and reopen, 👁️👁️ only to reveal the sounds of silent whispers of shadows. Dancing in complete darkness of footsteps only leaving behind, no real steps to visually to see. Yet do you know what does it mean, when you saw with your own eyes. 👁️👁️ For is it just a mirage or has your own thoughts, been...
#ghosts
#StreamOfConsciousness
#vampires
#werewolves
#witches
80 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 3:08am
20th Oct 2024 3:08am
One's Vampiric Nightmare
Karen
found herself
inside
a crypt stripped naked
and probed by a beast
that sucks blood before
she woke
up screaming
so loud.
found herself
inside
a crypt stripped naked
and probed by a beast
that sucks blood before
she woke
up screaming
so loud.
#fiction
#nightmares
#scary
#sex
#vampires
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 2:15pm
19th Oct 2024 2:15pm
What We Didn't Know About Her
Madison and Parker found Jeremiah.
Victoria was naked and sucking his blood.
Her brothers wait for feasting.
Victoria was naked and sucking his blood.
Her brothers wait for feasting.
#fear
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#vampires
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 3:07am
19th Oct 2024 3:07am
Result Of Watching Too Many Vampire Movies
Remington
felt something snake like on
her bare skin which made her open both
eyes and find herself naked in a coffin with
a bat creature about to suck her
blood until she woke up
screaming loud.
felt something snake like on
her bare skin which made her open both
eyes and find herself naked in a coffin with
a bat creature about to suck her
blood until she woke up
screaming loud.
#fiction
#graveyard
#nightmares
#sex
#vampires
106 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 8:14am
11th Oct 2024 8:14am
The Playful Dead
Fiery hair, black lace frocks
Entangled in her chains and locks
Howls reflect, beyond the night
Chambers blow a flick of light
Satanic verse, read out rites
Satan's curse, ravenous bites
Blazes strip dungeons, rooms
Gothic trips, roses doomed
A thirst for blood, world's apart
Mirrors judge, tainted hearts
Demonic dust, laid bare, bled
From dawn til' dusk... The Playful Dead
Entangled in her chains and locks
Howls reflect, beyond the night
Chambers blow a flick of light
Satanic verse, read out rites
Satan's curse, ravenous bites
Blazes strip dungeons, rooms
Gothic trips, roses doomed
A thirst for blood, world's apart
Mirrors judge, tainted hearts
Demonic dust, laid bare, bled
From dawn til' dusk... The Playful Dead
#ghosts
#vampires
#zombies
161 reads
20 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 7:07pm
9th Oct 2024 7:07pm
The Call of The Dhampir chapter 3
Makalo(The prince)
The night wraps around the undead like a silken sheet that slowly caresses and transitions with their every move.
A slight shift disrupted the serene night. Everyone felt and knew "He" was approaching. The newly turned made their way to their rooms, and the older vampires stayed to greet the prince.
Makalo decided to enter his home through Abella's chambers. He wanted to see what his mate was up to. Once he regained his form from being a shapeless mist. He knew that Abella was not in her chamber. It did not bode well for her. ...
The night wraps around the undead like a silken sheet that slowly caresses and transitions with their every move.
A slight shift disrupted the serene night. Everyone felt and knew "He" was approaching. The newly turned made their way to their rooms, and the older vampires stayed to greet the prince.
Makalo decided to enter his home through Abella's chambers. He wanted to see what his mate was up to. Once he regained his form from being a shapeless mist. He knew that Abella was not in her chamber. It did not bode well for her. ...
#vampires
155 reads
10 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 7:56am
9th Oct 2024 7:56am
Killin' Time
Feed my lust behind the mask
Any questions, dare you ask?
My wicked games, evil heart
I feel no shame, ripped apart
The walls can't hear, the light is dead
Face your fear, tonight dons red
Fan my shrine, I bid farewell
It's killin' time... Here in HELL!
Any questions, dare you ask?
My wicked games, evil heart
I feel no shame, ripped apart
The walls can't hear, the light is dead
Face your fear, tonight dons red
Fan my shrine, I bid farewell
It's killin' time... Here in HELL!
#ghosts
#monsters
#vampires
118 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 11:53pm
8th Oct 2024 11:53pm
The Call of the Dhampir chapter 2
Abella
As the ominous yet memorable heel struck the marbled floor, it alerted all the trusted high guards that he had returned. All shuttered in his presence since he carried out the orders of immortal Abella, the mate of the immortal Prince Makalo.
Abella considered herself to be the queen of their kind. Following the mortal monarchy, she adorned a crown with pure onyx stones. Her gown was made to emphasize a sultry physic. If she turned a certain way, you would catch a glimpse of forbidden flesh, whether it be above or below the waist. She stood tall on stilts...
As the ominous yet memorable heel struck the marbled floor, it alerted all the trusted high guards that he had returned. All shuttered in his presence since he carried out the orders of immortal Abella, the mate of the immortal Prince Makalo.
Abella considered herself to be the queen of their kind. Following the mortal monarchy, she adorned a crown with pure onyx stones. Her gown was made to emphasize a sultry physic. If she turned a certain way, you would catch a glimpse of forbidden flesh, whether it be above or below the waist. She stood tall on stilts...
#vampires
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8 Comments
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