Poems About Technology by Top Critiquers
#technology
Reoccurring Dream
Artificial eyes see every thought
Mystic shadows gaining ground
Control the narrative stir the plot
Forging beasts out of ironbound
Mystic shadows gaining ground
Control the narrative stir the plot
Forging beasts out of ironbound
#technology
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Addiction
Excuse me.
Excuse me!
EXCUSE ME!!!
Yes you. I have a question to ask.
Why does it take several times for you to respond to me?
You can't answer that
I know why...
It's because your head is buried into that device they call a smartphone
It seems that your compulsive behavior with this machine is creating a barrier amongst others
Sure you may have loads of friends online, but you can't truly see, feel or hear them
Your "friends" are not really your "friends"
Is it that necessary to refresh your post...
Excuse me!
EXCUSE ME!!!
Yes you. I have a question to ask.
Why does it take several times for you to respond to me?
You can't answer that
I know why...
It's because your head is buried into that device they call a smartphone
It seems that your compulsive behavior with this machine is creating a barrier amongst others
Sure you may have loads of friends online, but you can't truly see, feel or hear them
Your "friends" are not really your "friends"
Is it that necessary to refresh your post...
#anger
#CallToAction
#learning
#technology
#TruthOfLife
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Thora Flowers
unadulterated pain with its butterflywings mutated
they know how to morph but not fly
in sync with smiles that don't form from the soul
plastic, no paper will heal our planet
Who will heal the heart?
we used to know one another without talking
now we're afraid to look in each other's lying eyes
it's okay, smile nod, of course it is
penetrate the lie and sit and fib for a while
I don't know about you, but I'm dying inside
things are changing at light speed
but are they? I had a baby alive at five
Technology gets...
they know how to morph but not fly
in sync with smiles that don't form from the soul
plastic, no paper will heal our planet
Who will heal the heart?
we used to know one another without talking
now we're afraid to look in each other's lying eyes
it's okay, smile nod, of course it is
penetrate the lie and sit and fib for a while
I don't know about you, but I'm dying inside
things are changing at light speed
but are they? I had a baby alive at five
Technology gets...
#humankind
#technology
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DECADES OF INTERNALIZING THOUGHTS
Through our lives we will have to encounter situations that are just lessons learned from life for each encounter is a lesson of life, whether we learn the lessons or repeat it all over again like so many generations that have come and gone and been curse just passing it down from one set to another tribe of our lives bearly existencing to have life.
For when will it stop this changing who we are to just fit...
For when will it stop this changing who we are to just fit...
#technology
#money
#cars
#consumerism
#art
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Beyond the Dial
When you look at their faces you can see something appealing
Under the crystal the hands that mark time just tick away
For whatever aesthetics or complications you may be seeking
It’s the inner workings that matter most each and every day
Beneath the surface you can witness a marvel of engineering
From balance wheels and rotors to jewels and gear trains
All this inside of a barrel where you can see a mainspring
I guess you can say all these tiny parts are the brains
Every single component is important for a timepiece to work
Imagined,...
Under the crystal the hands that mark time just tick away
For whatever aesthetics or complications you may be seeking
It’s the inner workings that matter most each and every day
Beneath the surface you can witness a marvel of engineering
From balance wheels and rotors to jewels and gear trains
All this inside of a barrel where you can see a mainspring
I guess you can say all these tiny parts are the brains
Every single component is important for a timepiece to work
Imagined,...
#meditation
#nature
#technology
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On ...Off ...Tell me Another...Cut the Crap !!
That's my new expression
Old school like me
No apologies
I'll run circles around your candy ass
Streaming replaced cable
Bigger and faster they claimed
Still clouds and freezes
Just more bullshit
On... Off I say
Freaks of nature
Guys wearing shorts in 40 degree NYC
Motorized bikes, scooters, skateboards
Riding on the sidewalks
Pedestrians be damned
Selfish isn’t a right of passage
Hold a door for your neighbor
On… Off I say
5000 channels
Ten ingredient flavored mayonnaise
QR...
Old school like me
No apologies
I'll run circles around your candy ass
Streaming replaced cable
Bigger and faster they claimed
Still clouds and freezes
Just more bullshit
On... Off I say
Freaks of nature
Guys wearing shorts in 40 degree NYC
Motorized bikes, scooters, skateboards
Riding on the sidewalks
Pedestrians be damned
Selfish isn’t a right of passage
Hold a door for your neighbor
On… Off I say
5000 channels
Ten ingredient flavored mayonnaise
QR...
#technology
#TruthOfLife
#consumerism
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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SHE LEFT ME HER NUMBER
She'd been "playing away"
when we romped in the hay,
a casual pick up
that ended in a tup.
She left me her number,
while I still did slumber
when on she had put back
her clothes, left me in sack.
How was I, green, to know
that her cheated fellow
might answer the same phone,
hear my "Are you alone?"
When I called that number....
It got me a plumber
who, raged, threatened my life.
"You been screwing my wife?"
I heard a background scream,
as if some nightmare...
when we romped in the hay,
a casual pick up
that ended in a tup.
She left me her number,
while I still did slumber
when on she had put back
her clothes, left me in sack.
How was I, green, to know
that her cheated fellow
might answer the same phone,
hear my "Are you alone?"
When I called that number....
It got me a plumber
who, raged, threatened my life.
"You been screwing my wife?"
I heard a background scream,
as if some nightmare...
#sex
#betrayal
#technology #rhyming
#technology #rhyming
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The last will and testament of God the almighty.
Hi folks it's your heavenly father here just tidying things up before I leave you for good.
Even God's have to die.....did you not know that?
So I thought I'd better put my affairs in order lest it's left to the earthly courts to manage my estate.Courts stacked with the self obsessed and controlled by the obscenly wealthy cannot be trusted to let 'the meek inherit the earth', as my will stipulates.
There are new gods in town.Ones much more believable than I.
One of them DeepSeek wrote this will on my behalf as I'm too exhausted from tending my flock...
Even God's have to die.....did you not know that?
So I thought I'd better put my affairs in order lest it's left to the earthly courts to manage my estate.Courts stacked with the self obsessed and controlled by the obscenly wealthy cannot be trusted to let 'the meek inherit the earth', as my will stipulates.
There are new gods in town.Ones much more believable than I.
One of them DeepSeek wrote this will on my behalf as I'm too exhausted from tending my flock...
#technology
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keystrokes - shitty poetry part 1

#lies
#satirical
#technology
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Black Face
Let me give you redemption.
Everytime I ride you into a tree.
You're my favorite comedian,
And my noble steed.
Those bullet holes,
Are there to remind me,
Everytime I needed you,
After doing illegal things.
The government,
is coming after me.
Let's rob a train,
like traditional theives.
You have a black face,
But no Martin Luther King!,
You're just a dumb horse,
That does illegal things.
I hope I don't get banned.
I hope my horse understands.
When I whistle a command,
The...
Everytime I ride you into a tree.
You're my favorite comedian,
And my noble steed.
Those bullet holes,
Are there to remind me,
Everytime I needed you,
After doing illegal things.
The government,
is coming after me.
Let's rob a train,
like traditional theives.
You have a black face,
But no Martin Luther King!,
You're just a dumb horse,
That does illegal things.
I hope I don't get banned.
I hope my horse understands.
When I whistle a command,
The...
#funny
#technology
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Echoes
Bestirred by a radio app today,
reiterating the infamy date,
I recollected what my dad would say
about how that war affected our fate.
Sick, he had stayed home from Sunday school
where thusly by a broadcast he had heard
of the sneak attack on Yankee rule
and the international afterword...
which in a few short years saw him training
with artillery to use on Japan
when their empire was at last waning
along with their co-prosperity plan...
but Russian threats, and the atomic bomb,
had his odds increase for troth...
reiterating the infamy date,
I recollected what my dad would say
about how that war affected our fate.
Sick, he had stayed home from Sunday school
where thusly by a broadcast he had heard
of the sneak attack on Yankee rule
and the international afterword...
which in a few short years saw him training
with artillery to use on Japan
when their empire was at last waning
along with their co-prosperity plan...
but Russian threats, and the atomic bomb,
had his odds increase for troth...
#humankind
#LifeCycle
#technology
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Forgettable
Fusillades of faces -
All the modern things.
Feet into prints – Leaving no traces.
Shred sessions, into ribbons,
Falling to the floor
and more,
Falling away -
in segments.
Quick uploads -
into dissolution
vacancies
in memory breaches.
Photographic nothing.
Like -
Cigarette burns
at the surface
of the eyes.
So unseen -
in an absence
of meaning,
meaningless.
On to the next -
thing to be forgotten,
Ill gotten
begotten
of
...
All the modern things.
Feet into prints – Leaving no traces.
Shred sessions, into ribbons,
Falling to the floor
and more,
Falling away -
in segments.
Quick uploads -
into dissolution
vacancies
in memory breaches.
Photographic nothing.
Like -
Cigarette burns
at the surface
of the eyes.
So unseen -
in an absence
of meaning,
meaningless.
On to the next -
thing to be forgotten,
Ill gotten
begotten
of
...
#love
#technology
#apocalypse
#consumerism
#dystopian
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DU Poetry : Poems About Technology by Top Critiquers