Tanka Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#tanka
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Mar 2024 11:38am
7th Mar 2024 11:38am
A Tale Of Fighting Fire With Fire
Alan, I spotted
you doing the nasty with
Kendra last week. So,
I decided to get it
on with Richie before you.
you doing the nasty with
Kendra last week. So,
I decided to get it
on with Richie before you.
#home
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
192 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Feb 2024 10:02pm
25th Feb 2024 10:02pm
Do It Here And Now
Rub your hands up and
down my naked body. Do
so before you slide
off your robe and get it on
with me. Do it here and now.
down my naked body. Do
so before you slide
off your robe and get it on
with me. Do it here and now.
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
#job
205 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Feb 2024 8:10pm
15th Feb 2024 8:10pm
Maybe This Would Wake Him Up
Iris woke up and
noticed she was naked and
Eric was sleeping
which made Iris rub up and
down his bod and kiss his lips.
noticed she was naked and
Eric was sleeping
which made Iris rub up and
down his bod and kiss his lips.
#home
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
#sensual
204 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 7:46pm
14th Feb 2024 7:46pm
What Turned Her On One More Time
Heidi woke up on
Oliver's bed naked and
watched the guy take a
shower before she got up
and joined him in that bathroom.
Oliver's bed naked and
watched the guy take a
shower before she got up
and joined him in that bathroom.
#home
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
#sensual
199 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Feb 2024 6:17pm
10th Feb 2024 6:17pm
The Type Of Massage He Does Enjoy
Hugh stripped down and laid
on the floor in order to
let Victoria
rub her naked body up
and down her roommate's bare back.
on the floor in order to
let Victoria
rub her naked body up
and down her roommate's bare back.
#friendship
#home
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
245 reads
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Josiah
Poem Published
8th Feb 2024 9:01pm
8th Feb 2024 9:01pm
Just Staying Afloat
I was young, so I waded in to paddle,
And later, paddled so I could swim,
Swam so I could drift...and now I drift away.
And later, paddled so I could swim,
Swam so I could drift...and now I drift away.
#tanka
185 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Feb 2024 8:04pm
5th Feb 2024 8:04pm
How Could I Be Able To Explain This To My Husband?
Carol walked into
the bathroom and looked at her
nude reflection in
the mirror before she gazed
upon a still sleeping John.
the bathroom and looked at her
nude reflection in
the mirror before she gazed
upon a still sleeping John.
#corruption
#home
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
217 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Feb 2024 2:09am
4th Feb 2024 2:09am
Moving Into A New Place With Discussing It First
"All we need to do
now is move ourselves in." was
what Dad said before
we took one look at the place
and ask "What did we do wrong?"
now is move ourselves in." was
what Dad said before
we took one look at the place
and ask "What did we do wrong?"
#home
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#ignorance
145 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2024 2:26am
3rd Feb 2024 2:26am
While The Friend Paints A Portrait
Margot was standing
in front of her best friend Kim
in nothing but her
glasses and panties while the
friend paints a topless portrait.
in front of her best friend Kim
in nothing but her
glasses and panties while the
friend paints a topless portrait.
#friendship
#fiction
#tanka
#art
#sensual
205 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Jan 2024 2:09am
28th Jan 2024 2:09am
We Went Into The Basement
Uncle Bert was not
home. So, we went on into
the basement and saw
Aunt Cloris naked, in rope
bondage and looking so scared.
home. So, we went on into
the basement and saw
Aunt Cloris naked, in rope
bondage and looking so scared.
#BDSM
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
246 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Jan 2024 12:11pm
26th Jan 2024 12:11pm
What Made Her Scream In Terror
She opened her eyes
and saw her naked body
covered with sweat just
before she sat up and looked
at the charred corpse of some guy.
and saw her naked body
covered with sweat just
before she sat up and looked
at the charred corpse of some guy.
#death
#fiction
#scary
#tanka
#sensual
179 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Jan 2024 2:25am
25th Jan 2024 2:25am
The Right Amount Of Romantic Atmosphere
Larry walked into
the beach house and saw that there
was not enough light
in the kitchen before he
saw Karen in lingerie.
the beach house and saw that there
was not enough light
in the kitchen before he
saw Karen in lingerie.
#romantic
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
#seductive
182 reads
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