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Just Staying Afloat
I was young, so I waded in to paddle,
And later, paddled so I could swim,
Swam so I could drift...and now I drift away.
And later, paddled so I could swim,
Swam so I could drift...and now I drift away.
Published 8th Feb 2024
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A tanka.
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8th Feb 2024 10:43pm
Dear J,
I really enjoyed this style of poem. I also enjoyed the subject matter of one thing leading to another and then a sense of freedom. Lovely. H🌷
I really enjoyed this style of poem. I also enjoyed the subject matter of one thing leading to another and then a sense of freedom. Lovely. H🌷
