Tanka Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Before Covering Her Up
Michael looked outside
and saw that Nancy enjoys
dancing naked when
it rains before covering
her up with a warm blanket.
and saw that Nancy enjoys
dancing naked when
it rains before covering
her up with a warm blanket.
#fiction
#home
#rain
#sensual
#tanka
210 reads
2 Comments
When One Chick Pops Up On The Tube
While watching tee vee,
Jonathan is able to
imagine himself
and some hot blonde get naked
and bang each other right there.
Jonathan is able to
imagine himself
and some hot blonde get naked
and bang each other right there.
#dreams
#fiction
#home
#sensual
#tanka
183 reads
4 Comments
I Want It
Erica sat on
the floor with only a large
cotton sweater on,
looked at Brian and said "I
want it" before stripping down.
the floor with only a large
cotton sweater on,
looked at Brian and said "I
want it" before stripping down.
#dating
#fiction
#friendship
#sensual
#tanka
296 reads
2 Comments
May I Join You?
Xander saw Lisa
in the bathroom, stripped down and
joined his roommate in
the shower just in time for
Lisa to turn and see him.
in the bathroom, stripped down and
joined his roommate in
the shower just in time for
Lisa to turn and see him.
#fiction
#home
#lover
#sensual
#tanka
193 reads
0 Comments
Karen Should Play That One Role
Unless someone has
a better idea on
who should play the role
of "Orgasm Girl", I still say
Karen should play that one role.
a better idea on
who should play the role
of "Orgasm Girl", I still say
Karen should play that one role.
#fiction
#friendship
#porn
#sensual
#tanka
277 reads
0 Comments
He Might Be Lucky... But He's Also Dead!
Oh, Damn! Tina got
herself so ticked when she saw
her man Marcus and
some white girl naked on the
floor and humping like crazy!
herself so ticked when she saw
her man Marcus and
some white girl naked on the
floor and humping like crazy!
#dialogue
#fiction
#sensual
#suffering
#tanka
180 reads
2 Comments
She Got Her Revenge
She got her revenge
by shooting that cheating jerk
dead with the shotgun
along with that blonde skanky
bitch she caught that jackass with.
by shooting that cheating jerk
dead with the shotgun
along with that blonde skanky
bitch she caught that jackass with.
#death
#fiction
#murder
#sex
#tanka
177 reads
0 Comments
Summing Up The Journey
Hatching from an egg
one rarely knows what’s to come.
I molted and grew.
Went through metamorphosis
and now I just span my wings.
one rarely knows what’s to come.
I molted and grew.
Went through metamorphosis
and now I just span my wings.
#LifeChangingMoment
#tanka
248 reads
18 Comments
Don't You Dare Turn Your Back On Me
#deception
#fiction
#friendship
#sensual
#tanka
158 reads
0 Comments
Saw You Sit Naked In The Cool Water
When I saw you sit
naked in the cool water,
I felt the urge to
strip down and allow myself
to be eternally yours.
naked in the cool water,
I felt the urge to
strip down and allow myself
to be eternally yours.
#beach
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
154 reads
2 Comments
A Result Of Having Gone To Dawson's Beach Party
Nicole opened her
eyes and saw herself naked
in bed with Cody
as a result of having
gone to Dawson's beach party.
eyes and saw herself naked
in bed with Cody
as a result of having
gone to Dawson's beach party.
#friendship
#beach
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
175 reads
0 Comments
This Is For Cheating On Me, You Jerk!
Richard was humping
Lucy and enjoying it
before he saw Grace
aiming a shotgun at the
two before shooting them dead.
Lucy and enjoying it
before he saw Grace
aiming a shotgun at the
two before shooting them dead.
#death
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
#sensual
117 reads
0 Comments
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