Summer Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#summer
DaisyGrace
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 1:27am
20th Apr 2025 1:27am
Bonfire, Summer 2002
The night is fair and studded with the glow
of citronella candles, lightning bugs,
the flare of cigarettes, and flashing smiles.
She shrugs, the bottle at her lips a choice
that makes her smirk and turn her wandering eyes
to laughing bodies sweating in the heat.
Her limbs feel light, she moves to claim her prize.
She takes a seat, his lap is hot and firm
and soon his hand is on her flushing skin.
They share a beer and kisses, lost to all,
as lips demand a taste of salty sin.
The others cheer and leave them all alone
to lose...
of citronella candles, lightning bugs,
the flare of cigarettes, and flashing smiles.
She shrugs, the bottle at her lips a choice
that makes her smirk and turn her wandering eyes
to laughing bodies sweating in the heat.
Her limbs feel light, she moves to claim her prize.
She takes a seat, his lap is hot and firm
and soon his hand is on her flushing skin.
They share a beer and kisses, lost to all,
as lips demand a taste of salty sin.
The others cheer and leave them all alone
to lose...
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 11:06am
17th Apr 2025 11:06am
Not Exactly The Summer Vacation He Expected
Anger is in Dad's eyes
after catching both his
wife and daughter in
the river naked and
with their neighbor.
after catching both his
wife and daughter in
the river naked and
with their neighbor.
#betrayal
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
#summer
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InDreamz
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 6:51pm
4th Apr 2025 6:51pm
The Coronation
a caravan of stars
lit up the sky,
placid blue heavens
veiled with soft moon sighs...
the June midnight
seemed a jubilant celebration,
for the dark enchantress-
the mysterious night...
a coronation by the cosmos
for the black beauty
to be the queen of earth
so she could grow in her supremacy;
with each passing day
the night would be longer to stay...
those shimmering stellar gypsies
in hues of gold, red and blue
dazzling the ether
with their joyous laughter,...
lit up the sky,
placid blue heavens
veiled with soft moon sighs...
the June midnight
seemed a jubilant celebration,
for the dark enchantress-
the mysterious night...
a coronation by the cosmos
for the black beauty
to be the queen of earth
so she could grow in her supremacy;
with each passing day
the night would be longer to stay...
those shimmering stellar gypsies
in hues of gold, red and blue
dazzling the ether
with their joyous laughter,...
#moon
#night
#stars
#summer
#universe
109 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 2:13am
29th Mar 2025 2:13am
Care To Join Me For A Swim?
Cody stepped outside the house.
He spotted Lisa standing by the pool.
She slid off her robe.
Lisa glanced over at Cody and smiled.
Then, she started with her skinny dipping.
He spotted Lisa standing by the pool.
She slid off her robe.
Lisa glanced over at Cody and smiled.
Then, she started with her skinny dipping.
#fiction
#home
#sex
#summer
#water
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AmyMMosier
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 10:48pm
24th Mar 2025 10:48pm
Our Sun imprints heavy July
Our Sun imprints heavy July
Upon a crimson sunset.
The first star I see in the west
Brings with it a cobalt sigh ...
Upon a crimson sunset.
The first star I see in the west
Brings with it a cobalt sigh ...
#summer
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Sage_6_paths_light
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 8:31am
9th Mar 2025 8:31am
Seasonal Expedition
Our expedition started in Fall, days get short, nights are cold, then the frost freezes all.
Do you remember Winter my belly warmed up them toes.
Sniffling and sneezing as the boogers flow from your nose.
For me please be patient as Winter breaks into spring. blanket of snow soon will melt, you and I listen to all the songs they will sing.
We chirp our way into summer, warm, fuzzy sun has its lips on our skin. Let's not cheap out on the lotion or we might boil from within.
Do you remember Winter my belly warmed up them toes.
Sniffling and sneezing as the boogers flow from your nose.
For me please be patient as Winter breaks into spring. blanket of snow soon will melt, you and I listen to all the songs they will sing.
We chirp our way into summer, warm, fuzzy sun has its lips on our skin. Let's not cheap out on the lotion or we might boil from within.
#fall
#spring
#summer #winter
#summer #winter
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 6:26pm
7th Mar 2025 6:26pm
He Rubbed Those Hands On Her
Lindsay walked into the bedroom.
She stripped and laid on the bed.
Neal followed his roommate in.
He rubbed Hawaiian Tropic on his hands.
Then, he rubbed those hands on her.
She stripped and laid on the bed.
Neal followed his roommate in.
He rubbed Hawaiian Tropic on his hands.
Then, he rubbed those hands on her.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 2:00am
4th Mar 2025 2:00am
That's My First Clue
The air conditioner shorted out?
You see me playing video games topless?
Yes. That's my first clue.
You see me playing video games topless?
Yes. That's my first clue.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#summer
#technology
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 2:01pm
18th Feb 2025 2:01pm
Bad Idea To Have Couples Day At The Beach
Molly slipped off her jacket.
Guys think she's hot in that bikini.
Randall dragged his wife home.
Guys think she's hot in that bikini.
Randall dragged his wife home.
#beach
#beauty
#betrayal
#fiction
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 1:36pm
12th Feb 2025 1:36pm
The AC Broke Down Again And I Have To Do Something To Keep Cool
Veronica was taking a shower.
That was before David walked right in.
She turned towards her roommate.
That was before David walked right in.
She turned towards her roommate.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 2:38pm
7th Feb 2025 2:38pm
While She Was Getting Herself A Tan
Yvonne felt the cool
summer breeze touch
her naked skin while
she was getting herself
a tan on that nude beach.
summer breeze touch
her naked skin while
she was getting herself
a tan on that nude beach.
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 1:59pm
6th Feb 2025 1:59pm
They Asked For It Big
Do
you like
what I have
on? I bought this
outfit to show them
that I'm no longer the
geeky bookworm that they had
been making fun of back at the
days in college. What? Those bitches by the
pool are jealous? Good. They asked for it big.
you like
what I have
on? I bought this
outfit to show them
that I'm no longer the
geeky bookworm that they had
been making fun of back at the
days in college. What? Those bitches by the
pool are jealous? Good. They asked for it big.
#beauty
#dialogue
#fiction
#success
#summer
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