Summer Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#summer
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 6:26pm
7th Mar 2025 6:26pm
He Rubbed Those Hands On Her
Lindsay walked into the bedroom.
She stripped and laid on the bed.
Neal followed his roommate in.
He rubbed Hawaiian Tropic on his hands.
Then, he rubbed those hands on her.
She stripped and laid on the bed.
Neal followed his roommate in.
He rubbed Hawaiian Tropic on his hands.
Then, he rubbed those hands on her.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 2:00am
4th Mar 2025 2:00am
That's My First Clue
The air conditioner shorted out?
You see me playing video games topless?
Yes. That's my first clue.
You see me playing video games topless?
Yes. That's my first clue.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#summer
#technology
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 2:01pm
18th Feb 2025 2:01pm
Bad Idea To Have Couples Day At The Beach
Molly slipped off her jacket.
Guys think she's hot in that bikini.
Randall dragged his wife home.
Guys think she's hot in that bikini.
Randall dragged his wife home.
#beach
#beauty
#betrayal
#fiction
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 1:36pm
12th Feb 2025 1:36pm
The AC Broke Down Again And I Have To Do Something To Keep Cool
Veronica was taking a shower.
That was before David walked right in.
She turned towards her roommate.
That was before David walked right in.
She turned towards her roommate.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 2:38pm
7th Feb 2025 2:38pm
While She Was Getting Herself A Tan
Yvonne felt the cool
summer breeze touch
her naked skin while
she was getting herself
a tan on that nude beach.
summer breeze touch
her naked skin while
she was getting herself
a tan on that nude beach.
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 1:59pm
6th Feb 2025 1:59pm
They Asked For It Big
Do
you like
what I have
on? I bought this
outfit to show them
that I'm no longer the
geeky bookworm that they had
been making fun of back at the
days in college. What? Those bitches by the
pool are jealous? Good. They asked for it big.
you like
what I have
on? I bought this
outfit to show them
that I'm no longer the
geeky bookworm that they had
been making fun of back at the
days in college. What? Those bitches by the
pool are jealous? Good. They asked for it big.
#beauty
#dialogue
#fiction
#success
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 3:33am
5th Feb 2025 3:33am
Could You Come Over And Fix It?
Hi. I'm your new neighbor.
Sorry to have you see me naked.
My air conditioner broke down.
Heat in my apartment made me strip.
Could you come over and fix it?
Sorry to have you see me naked.
My air conditioner broke down.
Heat in my apartment made me strip.
Could you come over and fix it?
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
#summer
156 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 8:47pm
1st Feb 2025 8:47pm
Well? I Need To Do Something To Cool Off.
After looking all
over to make sure she is
alone, Debby stripped
down and sat in the water
before she saw Kevin there.
over to make sure she is
alone, Debby stripped
down and sat in the water
before she saw Kevin there.
#beach
#fiction
#sex
#summer
#tanka
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 11:01am
29th Jan 2025 11:01am
And now a true story
My childhood friend Kirby and I once hypnotized a frog in the summer of 88. We found a rock on the lake's shoreline that looked like an emerald. We believed the rock had super powers. An hour later, we found the frog. We began rubbing the rock on the top of it's forehead. It was amazing. The frog was hypnotized. (We thought) We weren't sure though on how to unhyptnotize the frog. Instead, we kept the frog and fed it to Kirby's German Sheppard, named Bear. That was the 1st time his dog tasted frog! 'oui oui'
After Bear had lunch, we went inside to see Kirby's Grandma. This old...
After Bear had lunch, we went inside to see Kirby's Grandma. This old...
#childhood
#friendship
#memories
#ShortStory
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:17am
19th Jan 2025 2:17am
My Pal's Got Something Better To Look At
Got something to show Arnie.
He's busy looking at two naked chicks.
So much for my seashells.
He's busy looking at two naked chicks.
So much for my seashells.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 2:03pm
17th Jan 2025 2:03pm
Outside My Bedroom Window
I would like to taste
more than her cherry
red lips whenever I
see her sunbathing
naked outside my
bedroom window.
more than her cherry
red lips whenever I
see her sunbathing
naked outside my
bedroom window.
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
#summer
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 7:23pm
15th Jan 2025 7:23pm
I will never forget
One night in August 2024 I took a walk down to the beach to hear the teenagers roll into shore
I smelled smoke
I looked across the street
Someone had nailed a bum to the neon lit 7-11 sign
His body formed the sign of the cross
He had been torched
There he was, crackling and burning against the night sky
He was the first saint I had ever seen
I smelled smoke
I looked across the street
Someone had nailed a bum to the neon lit 7-11 sign
His body formed the sign of the cross
He had been torched
There he was, crackling and burning against the night sky
He was the first saint I had ever seen
#motivational
#nonfiction
#spiritual
#summer
#uplifting
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