Summer Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#summer
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 2:37am
5th Oct 2024 2:37am
What Happened Between Them On A Nude Beach
Saturday, Cloris was sunbathing naked.
That was before Adam started humping her.
She's unable to stop him.
That was before Adam started humping her.
She's unable to stop him.
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#summer
159 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 2:37pm
27th Sep 2024 2:37pm
Would You Rather Be Playing Another Type Of Game?
Could
you please
join me for
a game of chess?
Or would you rather
be playing another
type of game since you happen
to be looking at my chest and
letting that one part of you get so
hard that it would open your Levi's?
you please
join me for
a game of chess?
Or would you rather
be playing another
type of game since you happen
to be looking at my chest and
letting that one part of you get so
hard that it would open your Levi's?
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#sex
#summer
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2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 2:29pm
26th Sep 2024 2:29pm
Before You Guys Say Anything
Before you
guys say anything, my
top had suddenly popped off while I
was in the water and I figured that I might
as well get back on the boat and in
a tee shirt before Dad
spotted me.
guys say anything, my
top had suddenly popped off while I
was in the water and I figured that I might
as well get back on the boat and in
a tee shirt before Dad
spotted me.
#dialogue
#father
#fiction
#sex
#summer
118 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 10:53pm
21st Sep 2024 10:53pm
Goodbye Summer
She tested us
Every way she could
Burned us to the ground
Sweat, humidity and frowns
That damn sun
Relentless
Long evenings
Moon lit calls
Walking with you
Sweet summer
Margaritas by the seaside
Lust in the air
No cares
Too hot
Too much rain
Too much traffic
Too much
It goes fast
Somewhere in August
Knowing this will end soon
Labor Day
Last call
We love summer
Hate the heat
Complaints
Melancholy has a way
Autumn on the horizon
Damn pumpkin...
Every way she could
Burned us to the ground
Sweat, humidity and frowns
That damn sun
Relentless
Long evenings
Moon lit calls
Walking with you
Sweet summer
Margaritas by the seaside
Lust in the air
No cares
Too hot
Too much rain
Too much traffic
Too much
It goes fast
Somewhere in August
Knowing this will end soon
Labor Day
Last call
We love summer
Hate the heat
Complaints
Melancholy has a way
Autumn on the horizon
Damn pumpkin...
#emotional
#fall
#LifeAsAWriter
#summer
#TruthOfLife
161 reads
33 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 11:05am
20th Sep 2024 11:05am
Let's meet at the beach
September sun, late summer still holding on
Days grow shorter, nights become long
Let's meet at the beach, we have free reign
Crowds have disappeared, less stress, less strain
A pleasant walk, you & I on the sand
Enjoying life's finer pleasures, please take my hand
The air is cooler, the ocean quite warm
Out in the distant sky, we see a brewing storm
Were not discouraged, we faced many storms throughout our run
We learn to trust more fully, and to us that's second to none
Days grow shorter, nights become long
Let's meet at the beach, we have free reign
Crowds have disappeared, less stress, less strain
A pleasant walk, you & I on the sand
Enjoying life's finer pleasures, please take my hand
The air is cooler, the ocean quite warm
Out in the distant sky, we see a brewing storm
Were not discouraged, we faced many storms throughout our run
We learn to trust more fully, and to us that's second to none
#beach
#rhyming
#storm
#summer
#water
67 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 10:25pm
19th Sep 2024 10:25pm
I hate this bird
Last summer I was in my pool when a rooster arrived
Two doors down he would crow with pride
In my town, it's illegal to own
Constantly crowing, I picked up the phone
Authorities came, the owner was fined
Situation continued, nothing rectified
Endless noise throughout the year
How much more will I need to hear?
Every morning he woke me up around five
One day I paid a visit, shot him, and he died
Two doors down he would crow with pride
In my town, it's illegal to own
Constantly crowing, I picked up the phone
Authorities came, the owner was fined
Situation continued, nothing rectified
Endless noise throughout the year
How much more will I need to hear?
Every morning he woke me up around five
One day I paid a visit, shot him, and he died
#birds
#frustration
#home
#LifeChangingMoment
#summer
72 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 8:36pm
19th Sep 2024 8:36pm
On A Float In The Water
Remington
went out to the pool and
saw twin blonde sisters Lorelai and
Kennedy laying naked on a float in the
water but does not know which sister
he should let himself start
humping first.
went out to the pool and
saw twin blonde sisters Lorelai and
Kennedy laying naked on a float in the
water but does not know which sister
he should let himself start
humping first.
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#summer
#water
134 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 8:29am
19th Sep 2024 8:29am
Artemis Beckons
I heard the children of the night
in coyote lunar tribute
under the stars that love to shoot
final salutes on their last flight.
And geese as well cried through the beams
that lit the skies wherein they flew
which by my soul were midnight blue
just as they are in all my dreams.
But truth be told the crickets were
the ones who owned the skies the most
and probably from coast to coast
in concert insect crazy stir...
to soothe the feral human heart,
far more... than sapience...
in coyote lunar tribute
under the stars that love to shoot
final salutes on their last flight.
And geese as well cried through the beams
that lit the skies wherein they flew
which by my soul were midnight blue
just as they are in all my dreams.
But truth be told the crickets were
the ones who owned the skies the most
and probably from coast to coast
in concert insect crazy stir...
to soothe the feral human heart,
far more... than sapience...
#moon
#night
#summer
78 reads
11 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 9:58pm
18th Sep 2024 9:58pm
She's No Longer An Ugly Duckling
It
was on
a Sunday
afternoon that
Holden spotted on
the beach and wearing a
red bikini the former
shy bookworm Eunice who looked like
she had gone through a transformation
while visiting an aunt in Malibu.
was on
a Sunday
afternoon that
Holden spotted on
the beach and wearing a
red bikini the former
shy bookworm Eunice who looked like
she had gone through a transformation
while visiting an aunt in Malibu.
#beach
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 9:03pm
17th Sep 2024 9:03pm
Go Ahead, Master. Do It To Me Now.
While
the rest
of the gang
kept on having
fun at the pool, Josh
went down to the basement
and saw Karen naked and
strapped to some wooden thing. After
he looked around and saw no one else,
Josh stripped and began humping with Karen.
the rest
of the gang
kept on having
fun at the pool, Josh
went down to the basement
and saw Karen naked and
strapped to some wooden thing. After
he looked around and saw no one else,
Josh stripped and began humping with Karen.
#BDSM
#fiction
#home
#sex
#summer
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 8:00am
17th Sep 2024 8:00am
Yield
As full and as bright as her bumper crops,
she rose, like suitors by an arbor rung,
and higher than notes by falsetto sung...
in right ascension... right past the treetops
to sail through her meridian space
over the stratojet and shooting star
or any aviation objet d'art
at a sonic or supersonic pace.
Only wind chimes and crickets orchestrate
to score her silent orbit far above
our fair medium of earshot love
where daybreak birdsong is the morning fate
of the Harvest moon and all of her beams... ...
she rose, like suitors by an arbor rung,
and higher than notes by falsetto sung...
in right ascension... right past the treetops
to sail through her meridian space
over the stratojet and shooting star
or any aviation objet d'art
at a sonic or supersonic pace.
Only wind chimes and crickets orchestrate
to score her silent orbit far above
our fair medium of earshot love
where daybreak birdsong is the morning fate
of the Harvest moon and all of her beams... ...
#dawn
#moon
#night #summer
#night #summer
83 reads
8 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 1:42am
13th Sep 2024 1:42am
Summer Countryside
Summer Countryside
Once alive yet never dead
Children’s spring summertime laughter echoes
In the air and skies overhead
Omnipresent love
Sunshine and breezes
Soft as doves
Morning light
Shining thru windows
Upon meadows warmth
Radiating from above
Flowers in bloom
Fields turning green and brown
Playgrounds full of joy
Till the rise of the new harvest moon
II.
Ghostly sounds echo in the cities
Suburbs and towns
The wind sweeps and howls
To the outskirts
Upon sacred grounds ...
Once alive yet never dead
Children’s spring summertime laughter echoes
In the air and skies overhead
Omnipresent love
Sunshine and breezes
Soft as doves
Morning light
Shining thru windows
Upon meadows warmth
Radiating from above
Flowers in bloom
Fields turning green and brown
Playgrounds full of joy
Till the rise of the new harvest moon
II.
Ghostly sounds echo in the cities
Suburbs and towns
The wind sweeps and howls
To the outskirts
Upon sacred grounds ...
#fall
#morning
#night #summer
#night #summer
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