Summer Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#summer
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 7:42am
14th Dec 2024 7:42am
IN THE MIDSUMMER HEAT
In the midsummer heat
our blues are in retreat.
Joie de vivre in the street,
the disco pounds its beat.
Dresses are less discreet;
bare legs and sandalled feet
roving eyes' gazes meet.
The flirtatious greet.
our blues are in retreat.
Joie de vivre in the street,
the disco pounds its beat.
Dresses are less discreet;
bare legs and sandalled feet
roving eyes' gazes meet.
The flirtatious greet.
#happiness
#inspirational
#love #summer
#love #summer
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SeaCat
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 1:47am
14th Dec 2024 1:47am
Nasturtiums in light snow
Cold bites to my bones, stings my skin, joking
that summer was ever warm.
Beneath an iron sky, stragglers, jovial party people
linger by the cold windy door.
The warmth of their orange and red rages,
but diminished, by a light snowfall blanket.
It weighs them down,
their hot summery heads drooping under early winter’s white weight.
No cabbage white or tortoiseshell will visit these roguish
summer remnants;
the first frost will finish them soon enough—
smiting their tender leaves and stems to...
that summer was ever warm.
Beneath an iron sky, stragglers, jovial party people
linger by the cold windy door.
The warmth of their orange and red rages,
but diminished, by a light snowfall blanket.
It weighs them down,
their hot summery heads drooping under early winter’s white weight.
No cabbage white or tortoiseshell will visit these roguish
summer remnants;
the first frost will finish them soon enough—
smiting their tender leaves and stems to...
#fall
#summer
#winter
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 8:29pm
11th Dec 2024 8:29pm
You Want To Join Us, Yvonne?
Yvonne discovered
Jonathan and Rose naked
and skinny dipping outside.
Jonathan and Rose naked
and skinny dipping outside.
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#summer
118 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 3:21am
10th Dec 2024 3:21am
Nude Sunbather Massacre
Linda was sunbathing outside naked.
That's before she saw Mark with daggers.
She screamed before he slashed.
That's before she saw Mark with daggers.
She screamed before he slashed.
#death
#fiction
#scary
#sex
#summer
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 11:34am
8th Dec 2024 11:34am
Wise Moments In The Wild
Around The Future
i spent the morning on the mountain, roaming like a drifter searching a new way
to chase away my stress, and spill out the bitter spleen in my heart, striding along,
passing every stone, climbing each rock, hearing every bird sending his complains, filling the dead void with a thousand sighs..
The pine forest lies quite on the steep rocky plain, anchored firmly to a childhood earth,
as some joyous robins and goldfinch broke my thoughts with a twitter and a gentle birdie scream,
Seemingly, Spring has sped some happy harbingers...
i spent the morning on the mountain, roaming like a drifter searching a new way
to chase away my stress, and spill out the bitter spleen in my heart, striding along,
passing every stone, climbing each rock, hearing every bird sending his complains, filling the dead void with a thousand sighs..
The pine forest lies quite on the steep rocky plain, anchored firmly to a childhood earth,
as some joyous robins and goldfinch broke my thoughts with a twitter and a gentle birdie scream,
Seemingly, Spring has sped some happy harbingers...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#summer
#TimeHeals
61 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 12:37pm
5th Dec 2024 12:37pm
Looked Like She Lost Something On That Beach
At first, Deanna thought that she found
true paradise on a Cancun
beach. But that was before she
saw some guys staring at
her, looked down and saw
tan lines where her
bikini
was to
be.
true paradise on a Cancun
beach. But that was before she
saw some guys staring at
her, looked down and saw
tan lines where her
bikini
was to
be.
#beach
#fiction
#ignorance
#sex
#summer
109 reads
4 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 9:04pm
1st Dec 2024 9:04pm
Mid six week summer break
I wake, early,
to the dawn chorus coda, an oriole calling as a flute,
while I lay on my pillow,
an ivory mountain.
It’s August, middle of the six week schooling break,
and the day’s horizon shimmer beckons with sweet breath.
I follow the stream, where Kingfishers glide,
and dragonflies ply the sparkling water lanes.
to the dawn chorus coda, an oriole calling as a flute,
while I lay on my pillow,
an ivory mountain.
It’s August, middle of the six week schooling break,
and the day’s horizon shimmer beckons with sweet breath.
I follow the stream, where Kingfishers glide,
and dragonflies ply the sparkling water lanes.
#memories
#nostalgia
#school #summer
#school #summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 2:27pm
29th Nov 2024 2:27pm
Some Guys Were Staring At Them
One summer,
Christie and her two friends
Kathy and Rachel were walking on
the beach and wondering why some guys were staring
at them before they looked down and saw
They lost their bikini
tops somewhere.
Christie and her two friends
Kathy and Rachel were walking on
the beach and wondering why some guys were staring
at them before they looked down and saw
They lost their bikini
tops somewhere.
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 11:20am
27th Nov 2024 11:20am
What Made My Mind Go Blank As Well
Look,
I know
that I was
supposed to write
about what this guy
had done on his summer
vacation. But while I was
staring at those blank pages, a
voice said "hi" which made me look up and
see this hot blonde in a bikini smile.
I know
that I was
supposed to write
about what this guy
had done on his summer
vacation. But while I was
staring at those blank pages, a
voice said "hi" which made me look up and
see this hot blonde in a bikini smile.
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#seductive
#summer
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 7:45am
9th Nov 2024 7:45am
Summer's Treausre
Summer comes fast, heat radiating outwards into the bright day,
It's as if the people glow, their auras gleaming in this sun-drenched sway.
The liberating feel of diving into cool waters during the scorching summer's heat,
And the sun, a warm yet unobtrusive ray,
while happy children confidently at play.
The day’s adventure, skies open wide,
Each step wrapped in love’s soft tide.
A gentle breeze, the grass lush and soft,
With laughter and voices rising aloft. ...
It's as if the people glow, their auras gleaming in this sun-drenched sway.
The liberating feel of diving into cool waters during the scorching summer's heat,
And the sun, a warm yet unobtrusive ray,
while happy children confidently at play.
The day’s adventure, skies open wide,
Each step wrapped in love’s soft tide.
A gentle breeze, the grass lush and soft,
With laughter and voices rising aloft. ...
#beauty
#nature
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 2:13am
24th Oct 2024 2:13am
Nothing Left But Tan Lines
Zelda had her bikini on.
But when she stepped outside, it's gone.
Nothing left but tan lines.
But when she stepped outside, it's gone.
Nothing left but tan lines.
#fiction
#home
#mystery
#sex
#summer
195 reads
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Whackytraveler
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 3:22am
21st Oct 2024 3:22am
A seagull’s view
I flew
My wings spread out wide
I was above the rushing tides
Light
As a feather
The weather
A perfect mix
Of sunshine and mist
I saw a bottle of wine
The sun shined
It was a fine day
Then I jump awake
My wings spread out wide
I was above the rushing tides
Light
As a feather
The weather
A perfect mix
Of sunshine and mist
I saw a bottle of wine
The sun shined
It was a fine day
Then I jump awake
#sea
#summer
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