Poems About Suicide Seeking Honest Critique
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Stoney223
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WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 2:26am
5th Apr 2025 2:26am
Water Over Rocks
Sometimes we find ourselves involved in creating, the wrong kind of a relationship, that will eventually create an environment of despair, and loneliness with emptyness. But yet it's not a situation that you can make it right when it has been wrong. Sometimes a relationship is like water over to rocks running smoothly like water over glass. YET it's appears as thought everything was fine, but yet behind close doors 🚪 As Hell has no fury like the feelings of a lost love, due to deception filled with anger and hatred and self destruction. For the worst thing you can do to someone, is...
#despair
#emptiness
#hurt
#loneliness
#suicide
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BeautifulNothing2
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 6:57am
2nd Apr 2025 6:57am
Insanity Within Humanity
She looks over the edge of temptation,
They whisper in her ear,
"One more step my dear,
All your worries will disappear."
She questions her sanity,
With more pills made by humanity,
That state her mental health,
Is the reason for her insanity.
She tells herself it's time to go,
To the world's end,
No one will ever have to know.
One leap of faith,
For an angel with no wings,
She jumps forward,
Listening to the things,
She has been called.
You hear a smack,
A...
They whisper in her ear,
"One more step my dear,
All your worries will disappear."
She questions her sanity,
With more pills made by humanity,
That state her mental health,
Is the reason for her insanity.
She tells herself it's time to go,
To the world's end,
No one will ever have to know.
One leap of faith,
For an angel with no wings,
She jumps forward,
Listening to the things,
She has been called.
You hear a smack,
A...
#humankind
#MentalHealth
#philosophical #suicide
#philosophical #suicide
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 3:47pm
24th Mar 2025 3:47pm
One Bullet, Five Chances
I came to you for a problem
Instead, all I heard were your problems!
I really needed you in these dark times
I had no one else to talk to
I truly thought I meant something to you
I guess not
You can't stop talking about yourself, can you?
It's sickening how self-centered and vain you really are
Even when it's negative, you seem to address it, like some exciting movie script
You don't care what kind of audience you have
As long as they have a pulse
Someone could be lying on the ground dying,
and you would talk about your day or...
Instead, all I heard were your problems!
I really needed you in these dark times
I had no one else to talk to
I truly thought I meant something to you
I guess not
You can't stop talking about yourself, can you?
It's sickening how self-centered and vain you really are
Even when it's negative, you seem to address it, like some exciting movie script
You don't care what kind of audience you have
As long as they have a pulse
Someone could be lying on the ground dying,
and you would talk about your day or...
#inspirational
#motivational
#suicide #support
#suicide #support
106 reads
9 Comments
u53l355
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 1:44pm
21st Mar 2025 1:44pm
Black dressed crowds
Read this out loud to the black dressed crowed
Im sorry if this letter is the way you found out.
Blow me a kiss to the skys
Or
Peace sign to the ground
Find me in the mirror
In the shadows out the way
In the wind thru the mountains
In the sounds of the rain
Im sorry if your sad
This wasnt for you
I just couldn't cope alone in the head of which I've grew.
- A writer
Im sorry if this letter is the way you found out.
Blow me a kiss to the skys
Or
Peace sign to the ground
Find me in the mirror
In the shadows out the way
In the wind thru the mountains
In the sounds of the rain
Im sorry if your sad
This wasnt for you
I just couldn't cope alone in the head of which I've grew.
- A writer
#dark
#depression
#hate
#sadness
#suicide
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 9:24am
13th Mar 2025 9:24am
Bet with your head, not over it
Neil Anblomi of Italy took a trip to Las Vegas and sent some letters back home in 1996. His letters telling loved ones his tales of American adventure. One letter told them he had a win of $2,500.00 on roulette. Another was about seeing Wayne Newton live, enjoying the performance immensely. In a postcard to his mother, he talked about how exhausting gambling could be, but told her not to worry. "I am sensible, so I won't blow my savings." He told her of his plans to see the Grand Canyon by helicopter and maybe buy a ticket to a magic show. On August 1st, 1996, Anblomi threw himself...
#addiction
#fiction
#holiday
#satirical
#suicide
90 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 9:11pm
10th Mar 2025 9:11pm
Success!
Three hours ago
She tried to take her own life
I'll help her succeed
She tried to take her own life
I'll help her succeed
#dark
#murder
#satirical
#senryu
#suicide
158 reads
15 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 6:57pm
5th Mar 2025 6:57pm
Gone
Gone into the distant thoughts of others
when I am no more than a memory.
Vanished into the clay of the earth,
gone I'll be into that distant memory.
When my voice dies with me,
gone I'll be as words in a sob story.
Gone into the imagination of others
where they recall only the best of me.
Vanished to into the nothingness,
gone I'll be into that memory.
When my hand dies with me,
gone I'll be from the pen for eternity.
when I am no more than a memory.
Vanished into the clay of the earth,
gone I'll be into that distant memory.
When my voice dies with me,
gone I'll be as words in a sob story.
Gone into the imagination of others
where they recall only the best of me.
Vanished to into the nothingness,
gone I'll be into that memory.
When my hand dies with me,
gone I'll be from the pen for eternity.
#bipolar
#depression
#MentalHealth
#PTSD
#suicide
171 reads
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xthan
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 11:14am
24th Feb 2025 11:14am
Out on these lands
lets pretend
it's easy to face
sharpening ears
listening out for
every breath
they take,
lets pretend
it's easy to
swallow
when it
could be
their last
inhale.
it's easy to face
sharpening ears
listening out for
every breath
they take,
lets pretend
it's easy to
swallow
when it
could be
their last
inhale.
#LifeCycle
#minimalist
#homelessness #suicide
#homelessness #suicide
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 12:40pm
17th Feb 2025 12:40pm
Treating Love Letters Like Junk Mail
She told the police on her boyfriend
They nailed him with a suitcase full of heroin
He was tried & sent to jail
She was paid in full, the money that she was promised for helping out
She moved into a nice apartment
After a while, she got some letters from him
He didn't know that she was the one that had set him up
His letters were full of declarations of eternal love
The only thing that kept him going was thinking of her each & every day he sat in his rotten, stinking cell
She laughed at the letters and threw them away
After a few...
They nailed him with a suitcase full of heroin
He was tried & sent to jail
She was paid in full, the money that she was promised for helping out
She moved into a nice apartment
After a while, she got some letters from him
He didn't know that she was the one that had set him up
His letters were full of declarations of eternal love
The only thing that kept him going was thinking of her each & every day he sat in his rotten, stinking cell
She laughed at the letters and threw them away
After a few...
#apathy
#heartbroken
#prison
#rejection
#suicide
125 reads
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 9:28pm
10th Feb 2025 9:28pm
What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
A woman pours gasoline all over herself and her infant child
She lights a match, and the two of them go up in flames in the middle of their playground in town
The reason...Someone asked the woman, "What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
Sucks for her and her infant.
She lights a match, and the two of them go up in flames in the middle of their playground in town
The reason...Someone asked the woman, "What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
Sucks for her and her infant.
#devil
#fire
#food
#satirical
#suicide
105 reads
15 Comments
Gorotika
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 00:45am
23rd Jan 2025 00:45am
Farewell
I was born through misery,
and raised with pain.
The life they gave me was always filled with vain…
Forgive me my dear, for me wanting to disappear,
everything is going downhill, I can't handle the despair.
This life is too much for me.
But please trust me my dear, I'm now free from despair
Please excuse the blood my dear.
and raised with pain.
The life they gave me was always filled with vain…
Forgive me my dear, for me wanting to disappear,
everything is going downhill, I can't handle the despair.
This life is too much for me.
But please trust me my dear, I'm now free from despair
Please excuse the blood my dear.
#dark
#death
#depression
#despair
#suicide
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mea_ultima_verba
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 7:00pm
22nd Jan 2025 7:00pm
ill tell you my sins save my tears plz (everyone's disapproval she giggled at a funeral that day she knew she was ill)
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth
#PTSD #suicide
#PTSD #suicide
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