Poems About Shame Seeking Honest Critique
#shame
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 5:32pm
5th Nov 2024 5:32pm
2837 sonata
Now that he is growing up
He doesn't stay home very much
Because he is out all the time
And he is afraid that he will miss out
In his life
I say that is understandable for him and me
Even though life is short
He doesn't stay home very much
Because he is out all the time
And he is afraid that he will miss out
In his life
I say that is understandable for him and me
Even though life is short
#dark
#denial
#hate
#heartbroken
#shame
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Alois_inwriting02
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 4:49pm
5th Nov 2024 4:49pm
honey, the Kid ain’t alright
Dopesick, drug addled
Brain zaps, sinking in logical traps-
Blinded by the perceived righteousness of my own path—
a Will long since fettered unwillingly
espousing the
same
self-deceiving
hypocrisy I detest
mini seizures, the slippery slope’s
steeper,
fuck, my knees hurt.
Drawing closer to a yawning primeval Void that
ever patiently beckons my return.
The very essence of It is atomized in my
arteries, asphyxiating erythrocytes in Epicurean Entanglements
...
Brain zaps, sinking in logical traps-
Blinded by the perceived righteousness of my own path—
a Will long since fettered unwillingly
espousing the
same
self-deceiving
hypocrisy I detest
mini seizures, the slippery slope’s
steeper,
fuck, my knees hurt.
Drawing closer to a yawning primeval Void that
ever patiently beckons my return.
The very essence of It is atomized in my
arteries, asphyxiating erythrocytes in Epicurean Entanglements
...
#anxiety
#denial
#loneliness
#shame
#addiction
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 12:27pm
5th Nov 2024 12:27pm
My love, your love, his love, and our love
My love, your love, his love, and our love
Are all different from each other
Let me tell you about my love first
My love is very weak
Like the baby
That had just been born
Today
Your love
Is very strong
Like the thunder
That is going on in the sky
Right now
His love
Is very special
Because he is giving
It to us right now
Are all different from each other
Let me tell you about my love first
My love is very weak
Like the baby
That had just been born
Today
Your love
Is very strong
Like the thunder
That is going on in the sky
Right now
His love
Is very special
Because he is giving
It to us right now
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
#sadness
#shame
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Aquatic-Vehicle
Lexiloo
Lexiloo
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 5:20am
4th Nov 2024 5:20am
Final Taste
If I wasn’t so nauseous
Maybe I would go for a final taste
It’s been such a lengthy time
I lost all desire to the sense
Instead bile lines my throat
And I can’t help but support a gag
Maybe if I wasn’t so disgusted with myself
I would’ve enjoyed a final taste of you
Maybe I would go for a final taste
It’s been such a lengthy time
I lost all desire to the sense
Instead bile lines my throat
And I can’t help but support a gag
Maybe if I wasn’t so disgusted with myself
I would’ve enjoyed a final taste of you
#emptiness
#hate
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 11:28am
2nd Nov 2024 11:28am
Toronto
Now that the day ended
The sun went down
And I saw the most beautiful
Sunset
And finally, the night arrived fast
At midnight
The light went out
And also, the traffic on the road
Had died down
And Toronto was quiet now
Also, there is no body walking
At midnight in the street
I hope all the people are sleeping
In their beds at midnight
Also, I know that the night is very long
Because God made the night that way
For us to sleep
Also, God made the four seasons for us
To live in it
Now we are at the end...
The sun went down
And I saw the most beautiful
Sunset
And finally, the night arrived fast
At midnight
The light went out
And also, the traffic on the road
Had died down
And Toronto was quiet now
Also, there is no body walking
At midnight in the street
I hope all the people are sleeping
In their beds at midnight
Also, I know that the night is very long
Because God made the night that way
For us to sleep
Also, God made the four seasons for us
To live in it
Now we are at the end...
#anger
#disappointment
#fear
#loneliness
#shame
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 11:31am
1st Nov 2024 11:31am
The Negative side of Ai.
In google, i typed : AI generated poetry, and here what came.
uncountable websites of AI generated poetry with so many options,
and so i chose the first one that came on top of my search.
https://deepai.org/chat/what-is-ai
--I typed A Life of Rhyme, and all the world poetry fell down on me. the following are just example....
A Life of Rhyme
In gardens where the wildflowers sway,
A whispering wind beckons each day.
With laughter like sunlight, bright and warm,
Life dances around in a joyful form.
Each morning...
uncountable websites of AI generated poetry with so many options,
and so i chose the first one that came on top of my search.
https://deepai.org/chat/what-is-ai
--I typed A Life of Rhyme, and all the world poetry fell down on me. the following are just example....
A Life of Rhyme
In gardens where the wildflowers sway,
A whispering wind beckons each day.
With laughter like sunlight, bright and warm,
Life dances around in a joyful form.
Each morning...
#disappointment
#frustration
#rejection #shame
#rejection #shame
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cheesa
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 1:16pm
29th Oct 2024 1:16pm
It's a shame
Everything has become so brutally painful
The world is so mundane
It's a shame
My interest in life has diminished
My sky offers only rain
It's a shame
I wake already exhausted
I live my life in vain
It's a shame
The world is so mundane
It's a shame
My interest in life has diminished
My sky offers only rain
It's a shame
I wake already exhausted
I live my life in vain
It's a shame
#boredom
#despair
#loneliness
#sadness
#shame
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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 4:01pm
26th Oct 2024 4:01pm
GOLDEN TEARS TRAILS
To understand what is" Golden Tears"
You must emerge from the past
Engage in the truth of darkness and all fears.
Starting from the first to the last
Every pain is acknowledged by its own story
Their purpose and reason
The weight and capacity make it all blurry
Clouds that abide to us by a different season
Every tear is a testament
Our souls' tormenting laments
The sadness of one's Clements
The Hell on earth that happens
The devil roams harder on earth
With scattered teams of demons to...
You must emerge from the past
Engage in the truth of darkness and all fears.
Starting from the first to the last
Every pain is acknowledged by its own story
Their purpose and reason
The weight and capacity make it all blurry
Clouds that abide to us by a different season
Every tear is a testament
Our souls' tormenting laments
The sadness of one's Clements
The Hell on earth that happens
The devil roams harder on earth
With scattered teams of demons to...
#bittersweet
#frustration
#sadness #shame
#sadness #shame
197 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 2:14pm
24th Oct 2024 2:14pm
Find Your Clothes And Put Them Back On
Could
you please
find your clothes
and put them back
on? I mean, I know
how hot it is outside.
But I still don't think that the
management of this store would take
kindly to seeing a customer
standing naked in front of a cooler.
you please
find your clothes
and put them back
on? I mean, I know
how hot it is outside.
But I still don't think that the
management of this store would take
kindly to seeing a customer
standing naked in front of a cooler.
#dialogue
#fiction
#MentalHealth
#sex
#shame
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2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 10:51am
23rd Oct 2024 10:51am
Pain And Fear
when your body
Your nerve endings
Your mind
Are Screaming
Blue bloody murder
IT will be forgotten
Not even remembered
For it cannot be
Described
Only felt
But the Fear of Change
Will twist your world
IF you let it Worm
Its way
Into your
Everyday life
For it has the nasty ability
To change your personality
IT will stop you
It will stunt you
IT will
Twist you
Into thing's
You were Never
Meant to be
Your nerve endings
Your mind
Are Screaming
Blue bloody murder
IT will be forgotten
Not even remembered
For it cannot be
Described
Only felt
But the Fear of Change
Will twist your world
IF you let it Worm
Its way
Into your
Everyday life
For it has the nasty ability
To change your personality
IT will stop you
It will stunt you
IT will
Twist you
Into thing's
You were Never
Meant to be
#anxiety
#confusion
#despair
#fear
#shame
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Artavious25
Taypen99
Taypen99
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 5:34am
15th Oct 2024 5:34am
Soul Tired
I think I’ll find a needle in a haystack
Before I find a soul mate
It’s exhausting to keep the faith
My confidence is slim
My expression is grim
I feel out of place in a world that beats me down to shame
I know love is not a race but even a marathon eventually ends.
Before I find a soul mate
It’s exhausting to keep the faith
My confidence is slim
My expression is grim
I feel out of place in a world that beats me down to shame
I know love is not a race but even a marathon eventually ends.
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#sadness
#shame
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ChloesPoeticInk
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 6:03am
14th Oct 2024 6:03am
In the Loop
I’m lying here, still as the air,
But inside, I’m running, I’m everywhere.
I’m trapped in this place where time bends and breaks,
Reliving my past, feeling every mistake.
I thought if I could just go back,
I’d fix it all, erase the black.
The hurt, the loss, the words I regret,
But no matter what, I can’t forget.
I see them all—the ones I’ve known,
I try to reach them, but I’m alone.
I say what I couldn’t, I hold them tight,
But something’s wrong—nothing feels right.
I run through my life, scene...
But inside, I’m running, I’m everywhere.
I’m trapped in this place where time bends and breaks,
Reliving my past, feeling every mistake.
I thought if I could just go back,
I’d fix it all, erase the black.
The hurt, the loss, the words I regret,
But no matter what, I can’t forget.
I see them all—the ones I’ve known,
I try to reach them, but I’m alone.
I say what I couldn’t, I hold them tight,
But something’s wrong—nothing feels right.
I run through my life, scene...
#emptiness
#loneliness
#rejection
#sadness
#shame
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