Poems About Separation Seeking Friendly Advice
#separation
Poems about separation seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
21st Aug 2024 2:39am
21st Aug 2024 2:39am
Moon Not As Bright
I looked at the super moon today
It’s not as bright as it used to be
Used to blind my senses, to my dismay
It’s now very faint almost dark to me
It used to brighten up my way
When I was lost in my deep blue sea
Brighter than the Sun during the day
Swimming in the heaven wild and free
Now all it wants is to stay away
hiding in the dark so I can not see
I have asked it to come and play
I even wrote a petition and a plea
I’m wondering why stars on display
Are all shining even brighter than she...
It’s not as bright as it used to be
Used to blind my senses, to my dismay
It’s now very faint almost dark to me
It used to brighten up my way
When I was lost in my deep blue sea
Brighter than the Sun during the day
Swimming in the heaven wild and free
Now all it wants is to stay away
hiding in the dark so I can not see
I have asked it to come and play
I even wrote a petition and a plea
I’m wondering why stars on display
Are all shining even brighter than she...
#love
#breakup
#heartbroken #separation
#heartbroken #separation
230 reads
13 Comments
Everavalon
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 1:42pm
14th Aug 2024 1:42pm
Cosmic inharmony
Projecting our desires upon the fragile
lessens the absolute
I pine, soulfully
doubting whether this upset
is merely a tremor in our confinement
or a cosmic inharmony
I am sceptical of our union
Perfect life on film
But behind the scenes,
the residuals are of resentment
feathered with spite
The words bleed off your tongue
like a symphony, amiss
You force feed me kisses
To appease the lies
That our coupling is crumpling
I agonize over the verbal bruises
that shade my...
lessens the absolute
I pine, soulfully
doubting whether this upset
is merely a tremor in our confinement
or a cosmic inharmony
I am sceptical of our union
Perfect life on film
But behind the scenes,
the residuals are of resentment
feathered with spite
The words bleed off your tongue
like a symphony, amiss
You force feed me kisses
To appease the lies
That our coupling is crumpling
I agonize over the verbal bruises
that shade my...
#conflict
#separation
206 reads
5 Comments
Lamjhnsn1
Poem Published
10th Aug 2024 8:58pm
10th Aug 2024 8:58pm
Too Soon
In a moment, we'll meet,
In a second, we'll caress,
In a minute, we'll kiss....
In an hour, we'll reminisce, on the passing of time, too soon....
Counting the moments....the seconds, until another brand new moon....
Rushing the minutes....
Cursing the hours....
Dreading the pace, of this sluggish afternoon.
What is it to time, that our time be too much?
What does the hour hand know of your, & my, cherished touch?
Does it not know, near you, I'm alive, but apart, I perish much?
I...
In a second, we'll caress,
In a minute, we'll kiss....
In an hour, we'll reminisce, on the passing of time, too soon....
Counting the moments....the seconds, until another brand new moon....
Rushing the minutes....
Cursing the hours....
Dreading the pace, of this sluggish afternoon.
What is it to time, that our time be too much?
What does the hour hand know of your, & my, cherished touch?
Does it not know, near you, I'm alive, but apart, I perish much?
I...
#IMissYou
#love
#night
#romantic
#separation
445 reads
4 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
26th Jul 2024 2:01am
26th Jul 2024 2:01am
All I see
#anger
#erotic
#separation
265 reads
9 Comments
sommerthe1st
Poem Published
29th Jun 2024 3:42am
29th Jun 2024 3:42am
Atoms
There’s a 1 in an 8 billion chance,
That if you stick your hand in the wall,
You’ll go between atoms and your hand will go right through
I used to think that was a huge number,
An impossible chance
Until I reached for you to stay,
And you kept walking,
My hand fades through yours.
That if you stick your hand in the wall,
You’ll go between atoms and your hand will go right through
I used to think that was a huge number,
An impossible chance
Until I reached for you to stay,
And you kept walking,
My hand fades through yours.
#MovingOn
#regret
#separation
250 reads
2 Comments
Awkward_Sasquatch1
Sasquatch
Sasquatch
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 6:03am
15th Jun 2024 6:03am
To You, Dear Love
To the one who had saved me,
I am nothing to you, I know.
Dragged away from my own demise,
To which I'd willingly go.
You kept me alive as I suffered
Now given a reason to stay.
I found beauty in darkness,
I had found my own way.
Now I can see what you're doing,
Slowly we're drifting apart.
When you leave for the last time,
You'll take with you my heart.
At the end, I will meet the Empty,
As lonely as when last we split ways.
And I am doomed to find no comfort,
Til the last pitied end of my days.
I am nothing to you, I know.
Dragged away from my own demise,
To which I'd willingly go.
You kept me alive as I suffered
Now given a reason to stay.
I found beauty in darkness,
I had found my own way.
Now I can see what you're doing,
Slowly we're drifting apart.
When you leave for the last time,
You'll take with you my heart.
At the end, I will meet the Empty,
As lonely as when last we split ways.
And I am doomed to find no comfort,
Til the last pitied end of my days.
#depression
#heartbroken
#separation
324 reads
0 Comments
Wordvomit2001
Poem Published
18th May 2024 4:13pm
18th May 2024 4:13pm
Dad
It's not 2 am it's 6 52 , yet
I feel 2 am sad, deep , Neverending heavy .it's not winter ,yet a winters sadness has taken hold . (( you're tough you'll get through this )) I shouldn't have to dad. I still need my dad . You're leaving in Two months, am I supposed to just smile and lie , and say IM SO HAPPY FOR YOU 🙄. Fuck that . If I'm caught crying I can't even say why do you know how fucked up that is . Acid tears litter my face , as I cry hard enough my jaw shakes side to side . It's not 2 am it's 7 22 yet I am 2 am sad .why am I not enough for you to stay. Do you...
I feel 2 am sad, deep , Neverending heavy .it's not winter ,yet a winters sadness has taken hold . (( you're tough you'll get through this )) I shouldn't have to dad. I still need my dad . You're leaving in Two months, am I supposed to just smile and lie , and say IM SO HAPPY FOR YOU 🙄. Fuck that . If I'm caught crying I can't even say why do you know how fucked up that is . Acid tears litter my face , as I cry hard enough my jaw shakes side to side . It's not 2 am it's 7 22 yet I am 2 am sad .why am I not enough for you to stay. Do you...
#father
#separation
151 reads
1 Comment
Nixprty
Poem Published
9th May 2024 3:45pm
9th May 2024 3:45pm
Breathe Her
Her eyes bring an ache to my chest,
She is painful and sharp without apology.
Our culmination is a bloody wound just above my collarbone,
A scarred over bite mark.
My skin is just as new as the day I was born,
She has rebuilt my body with carnage.
The stitches that bind my flesh are held together by a wire that sprouts from deep in her veins.
If she leaves,
she'll take my life with her.
She is painful and sharp without apology.
Our culmination is a bloody wound just above my collarbone,
A scarred over bite mark.
My skin is just as new as the day I was born,
She has rebuilt my body with carnage.
The stitches that bind my flesh are held together by a wire that sprouts from deep in her veins.
If she leaves,
she'll take my life with her.
#bittersweet
#manipulation
#separation
215 reads
0 Comments
Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
29th Apr 2024 9:51am
29th Apr 2024 9:51am
Viewing of a friend
Viewing of a friend
Not the way it was supposed to be
We promised to always be there
Shelters for each other
In the cold blistering rain
We've known each other
For as long as I can remember
All the secrets we kept between us
Will stay with me now
We saw each other through
The pain of love and love lost
But where are you now
For I'm hurt beyond measure
I'll think of the laughter
And the trials of growing up
In a jungle of pitfalls
Oblivious to them all
I know I won't forget ...
Not the way it was supposed to be
We promised to always be there
Shelters for each other
In the cold blistering rain
We've known each other
For as long as I can remember
All the secrets we kept between us
Will stay with me now
We saw each other through
The pain of love and love lost
But where are you now
For I'm hurt beyond measure
I'll think of the laughter
And the trials of growing up
In a jungle of pitfalls
Oblivious to them all
I know I won't forget ...
#death
#friendship
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#separation
186 reads
2 Comments
msbeav
Brenda
Brenda
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 3:19pm
24th Apr 2024 3:19pm
Love Will Never Die
On the night my mom passed I had a dream. In my dream was this beautiful angel with large pink wings. The angel smiled and said to me, " dry your eyes child, your mom is tired and ready to go home." NO , I screamed, this is her home!
The angel replied - follow me, there's something I want you to see.
She pointed to the left and there stood my mom in a field of wildflowers. She looked so beautiful with long dark auburn hair and not a wrinkle did I see. My mom was smiling and talking with my grandma and grandpa, aunts and uncles and my brother Joe too.
The...
The angel replied - follow me, there's something I want you to see.
She pointed to the left and there stood my mom in a field of wildflowers. She looked so beautiful with long dark auburn hair and not a wrinkle did I see. My mom was smiling and talking with my grandma and grandpa, aunts and uncles and my brother Joe too.
The...
#brother
#father
#mother
#separation
#sister
221 reads
2 Comments
DetectiveOGasm
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 10:53am
21st Mar 2024 10:53am
We Can Survive This
We still travel close
you and I
even in separation
we are forever
bonded by the children
Even in
anger, hurt
- the defeat
I can still love
from a safe distance
I'm no longer ashamed
that what I gave
turned out temporary
or that the heat between us
vanished in the midst
of the many changes
But we can't forget
that there were always
exterior forces
exerting unnecessary pressures
and pulling us from
the sanctuary of each other
And eventually,
we can't...
you and I
even in separation
we are forever
bonded by the children
Even in
anger, hurt
- the defeat
I can still love
from a safe distance
I'm no longer ashamed
that what I gave
turned out temporary
or that the heat between us
vanished in the midst
of the many changes
But we can't forget
that there were always
exterior forces
exerting unnecessary pressures
and pulling us from
the sanctuary of each other
And eventually,
we can't...
#relationships
#forgiveness
#separation
242 reads
4 Comments
wolfatthedoor1966
Poem Published
18th Feb 2024 10:17am
18th Feb 2024 10:17am
youthful remembrance
my youthful days flowed
like a river into summer,
while sweet fragrances danced on warm air,
hope carried within
a trusting vessel,
unknown to wandering expectations.
silhouettes of another
passed within reach,
connecting two souls,
interchanging,
an unintentional blaze
consumes both.
times change, their paths woven
with different threads,
still believing as one, again.
yet days passed,
days into nights, nights into years,
continuing on.
youthful remembrance
of soft caresses, ...
like a river into summer,
while sweet fragrances danced on warm air,
hope carried within
a trusting vessel,
unknown to wandering expectations.
silhouettes of another
passed within reach,
connecting two souls,
interchanging,
an unintentional blaze
consumes both.
times change, their paths woven
with different threads,
still believing as one, again.
yet days passed,
days into nights, nights into years,
continuing on.
youthful remembrance
of soft caresses, ...
#relationships
#romantic
#nostalgia
#separation
#crush
225 reads
5 Comments
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