Prose by Top Critiquers
#prose
Girls Get It
Our society has been so hell bent on selling us what we need in order to be complete, that we hardly have any real understanding of what it means to be human apart from our consumer culture. It seems that more and more and seamlessly so we are bombarded with images and made to feel that the world is being tailored to meet our every whim, even if the vast majority of them are the consequence of subliminal messages that are beamed solid at us from resources that have the agenda of creating within us the desire and need to be fulfilled by what they sell.
It is no real secret that...
It is no real secret that...
#women
#beauty
#food
#PopCulture
#prose
1056 reads
11 Comments
Why Do Recovering Alcoholics Love Diet Coke?
Mariah brings me carrots, and pasta, and money for thirty diet cokes, if I want.
She hugs me in her orange puffer coat, because she knows I have been scream crying
and bargaining with the universe, again. She’s been doing the same.
She grips me tightly and I cling to her, and we cast a spell that makes the five pm winter darkness
feel less like a life sentence.
Boys said they loved us and left. And that is the familiar knife we keep turning inside ourselves.
We give every twist a new name, but the hole looks the same.
I tell her that I hope they can...
She hugs me in her orange puffer coat, because she knows I have been scream crying
and bargaining with the universe, again. She’s been doing the same.
She grips me tightly and I cling to her, and we cast a spell that makes the five pm winter darkness
feel less like a life sentence.
Boys said they loved us and left. And that is the familiar knife we keep turning inside ourselves.
We give every twist a new name, but the hole looks the same.
I tell her that I hope they can...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#healing
#heartbroken
#prose
158 reads
2 Comments
Diary Of A Romance Addict #15
The incident was soon forgotten and we fell back into our normal routine. I couldn't be sure at the time if there really was a reason to be suspicious of Stormy or if I had just over reacted. I decided to let it go, mostly because I just couldn't believe Stormy would do anything to jeopardize our relationship.
One day I baked his favorite cookies and stopped by his job to surprise him with them. I was the one in for a surprise. I found Stormy deep in conversation with a female in construction clothes. They were standing rather close together and something just didn't seem right...
One day I baked his favorite cookies and stopped by his job to surprise him with them. I was the one in for a surprise. I found Stormy deep in conversation with a female in construction clothes. They were standing rather close together and something just didn't seem right...
#love
#fiction
#prose
647 reads
0 Comments
Just curious
So I keyed in -
" The evil trump has done ". ai provided ALL the rest
Based on the search results, here are some instances where Trump’s
actions, words, or policies have been described as “evil” or exhibiting
harmful, intolerant, and divisive behavior:
Fostering a culture of intolerance and prejudice: Trump supporters’ emails
and statements showcased a deep-seated fear and dislike of people of color,
immigrants, and those perceived as “other.”
This rhetoric has been linked to a rise in hate crimes and discrimination. ...
" The evil trump has done ". ai provided ALL the rest
Based on the search results, here are some instances where Trump’s
actions, words, or policies have been described as “evil” or exhibiting
harmful, intolerant, and divisive behavior:
Fostering a culture of intolerance and prejudice: Trump supporters’ emails
and statements showcased a deep-seated fear and dislike of people of color,
immigrants, and those perceived as “other.”
This rhetoric has been linked to a rise in hate crimes and discrimination. ...
#corruption
#HumanRights
#politics #prose
#politics #prose
154 reads
4 Comments
a Priestess
the trance triggers memories
powerful feelings overcome
in my midnight hours yearn
burning with passion
I can't explain my deep need
sorrow festers and I seek the sun
sadness comes with the rain
the grey overwhelms
it hangs over me heavy
I must touch blue
kissing the angels I rise
a cloud floating alone
the winds carry my soul far away
lilting on the breeze
across the desert
where I touch down
the sun is life and death here
still, I worship the sun
my body falters and I have...
powerful feelings overcome
in my midnight hours yearn
burning with passion
I can't explain my deep need
sorrow festers and I seek the sun
sadness comes with the rain
the grey overwhelms
it hangs over me heavy
I must touch blue
kissing the angels I rise
a cloud floating alone
the winds carry my soul far away
lilting on the breeze
across the desert
where I touch down
the sun is life and death here
still, I worship the sun
my body falters and I have...
#love
#prose
77 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Prose by Top Critiquers