Poems About Nightmares Seeking Honest Critique
#nightmares
Poems about nightmares seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Daddys Girl (Horror)
The taste of my own blood is not satisfactory
I need for him to come back to me
I may have taken too much; I will admit
I can't hold back I'm a greedy bitch
Pass the blade across my lips.
Feeling the trickle down to my tits
He looked into my eyes it's saying nothing was there
Two black pools of loss and despair
He got away out the window and down the wall
He must have broken his leg it’s a hell of a fall
“You must come back to me
I'm being so sweet
Daddy, come back to me
what we started is not complete.” ...
I need for him to come back to me
I may have taken too much; I will admit
I can't hold back I'm a greedy bitch
Pass the blade across my lips.
Feeling the trickle down to my tits
He looked into my eyes it's saying nothing was there
Two black pools of loss and despair
He got away out the window and down the wall
He must have broken his leg it’s a hell of a fall
“You must come back to me
I'm being so sweet
Daddy, come back to me
what we started is not complete.” ...
#anger
#dark
#nightmares
274 reads
22 Comments
Unable To Open My Eyes
Behind closed doors lurks a different monster
Not the one that’s portrayed on every livestream
Playing off this charade that’s been getting over
Moving forward with the logistics of the scheme
Heartless in the belief of satisfying his shallow ego
We’re all human pawns on a maniacal chessboard
Plotting how to conquer and slay every single rival
Every attempt at peace will be maliciously ignored
Loyalty is rewarded while the insubordinate suffer
Transparent souls are met with an untimely demise
Brutal stench of death abominates a...
Not the one that’s portrayed on every livestream
Playing off this charade that’s been getting over
Moving forward with the logistics of the scheme
Heartless in the belief of satisfying his shallow ego
We’re all human pawns on a maniacal chessboard
Plotting how to conquer and slay every single rival
Every attempt at peace will be maliciously ignored
Loyalty is rewarded while the insubordinate suffer
Transparent souls are met with an untimely demise
Brutal stench of death abominates a...
#nightmares
157 reads
21 Comments
Nightmare Parallax
I walk the halls where shadows cling
where nothing living stirs
The walls are wet with blackened veins
that pulse with broken words
Each step I take, the ground recoils
or is it I who shift?
This place, alive with writhing thoughts
twists like a cosmic rift
A door appears, its frame a mouth
its teeth like jagged stone
It yawns, a breathless, deathless void
I enter, not alone
A figure stands, but lacks a face
its limbs a tangle, bare
It lifts its hand, but there’s no hand
just fingers made of air ...
where nothing living stirs
The walls are wet with blackened veins
that pulse with broken words
Each step I take, the ground recoils
or is it I who shift?
This place, alive with writhing thoughts
twists like a cosmic rift
A door appears, its frame a mouth
its teeth like jagged stone
It yawns, a breathless, deathless void
I enter, not alone
A figure stands, but lacks a face
its limbs a tangle, bare
It lifts its hand, but there’s no hand
just fingers made of air ...
#dark
#dreams
#nightmares
154 reads
0 Comments
Carnival of the Wicked
"Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, step right up for the spectacle you’ve all been waiting for, as tonight, we celebrate The Wretched And The Damned! Get ready to experience the most frightening night of all, hide your kids whether big or small. Brace yourselves and open your eyes people, welcome to the CARNIVAL OF THE WICKED".
BEHOLD
The freaks of nature taking all control
STAND UP
For the show you’ve all been waiting for
LAUGHTER
Is filling up the creepy marquee
FIRE
The fire breathers heating up the stage
...
BEHOLD
The freaks of nature taking all control
STAND UP
For the show you’ve all been waiting for
LAUGHTER
Is filling up the creepy marquee
FIRE
The fire breathers heating up the stage
...
#dark
#evil
#fiction
#nightmares
#ThrillSeeking
86 reads
2 Comments
Dreamscapes Out of Consciousness
Shadowed realms where dreams distort
He wanders through a twisted court
A place where reason fades away
And sanity begins to fray
The skies above are never still
They twist and churn, a hungry will
While fractured moons drift high and low
Casting light that doesn't glow
In these dreamscapes, cold and vast
A presence lingers, slow, steadfast
It pads behind him, soft and sly
Unnamed thing with gleaming eye
Rotted fur an endless night,
Its form a whisper just in sight
A creature that defies all sound ...
He wanders through a twisted court
A place where reason fades away
And sanity begins to fray
The skies above are never still
They twist and churn, a hungry will
While fractured moons drift high and low
Casting light that doesn't glow
In these dreamscapes, cold and vast
A presence lingers, slow, steadfast
It pads behind him, soft and sly
Unnamed thing with gleaming eye
Rotted fur an endless night,
Its form a whisper just in sight
A creature that defies all sound ...
#dark
#dreams
#fear
#nightmares
#scary
81 reads
0 Comments
Sacred Hunts and Wretched Shapes
In shadows cast by spectral light
Where angles twist and curl to spite
Creatures hunt through planes unseen
In realms where order’s lost its sheen
Twisted arches, fractal planes
Whisper secrets, birth new chains
With eyes that gleam like shattered night
They stalk the edges of pure fright
The ground beneath, a liquid thought
Steps echo softly, sanity caught
In the dance of the grotesque shapes
Where time itself warps and escapes
A howl bursts forth – a soundless scream
Resonating with a haunting dream ...
Where angles twist and curl to spite
Creatures hunt through planes unseen
In realms where order’s lost its sheen
Twisted arches, fractal planes
Whisper secrets, birth new chains
With eyes that gleam like shattered night
They stalk the edges of pure fright
The ground beneath, a liquid thought
Steps echo softly, sanity caught
In the dance of the grotesque shapes
Where time itself warps and escapes
A howl bursts forth – a soundless scream
Resonating with a haunting dream ...
#curse
#death
#nightmares #sleep
#nightmares #sleep
107 reads
4 Comments
Beyond the shadow
In darkness, I dwell, where shadows roam
A world that's turned cold, leaving me to atone
For sins I didn't commit, I wear the blame
A heart once full, now but a hollow frame
When the going gets tough, the tough get going
But I'm stuck in the mud, with no way of knowing
If I'll ever find my way, out of this darkest night
Or if I'll be forever lost, without a guiding light
Lonely streets, I wander, lost and forlorn
Echoes of memories, forever torn
From the depths of despair, I cry out in pain
But the world just moves on, leaving...
A world that's turned cold, leaving me to atone
For sins I didn't commit, I wear the blame
A heart once full, now but a hollow frame
When the going gets tough, the tough get going
But I'm stuck in the mud, with no way of knowing
If I'll ever find my way, out of this darkest night
Or if I'll be forever lost, without a guiding light
Lonely streets, I wander, lost and forlorn
Echoes of memories, forever torn
From the depths of despair, I cry out in pain
But the world just moves on, leaving...
#apathy
#grief
#loneliness
#mythology
#nightmares
134 reads
0 Comments
I didn't do it
I'm gonna kill this woman
My friends are going to kill her baby
The baby looks like a profile face I've seen on this website
They can't do it
I look down at the baby, who's in a pile of books
The baby is bleeding out of it's head
When I look back I see the baby's head rolling down a bowling alley
It's a split
I bury the body near the restroom
I turn around
The police have arrived
They received a short story written by someone here, saying I was the murderer
I know I will find them and destroy them
My friends are going to kill her baby
The baby looks like a profile face I've seen on this website
They can't do it
I look down at the baby, who's in a pile of books
The baby is bleeding out of it's head
When I look back I see the baby's head rolling down a bowling alley
It's a split
I bury the body near the restroom
I turn around
The police have arrived
They received a short story written by someone here, saying I was the murderer
I know I will find them and destroy them
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#fiction
#nightmares
93 reads
6 Comments
Something's inside
You wish you were asleep.
You wish you weren't alive.
You wish so many things but you haven't opened your eyes.
You aren't real on the ground.
Just look at that beast in the mirror.
Don't you wish you could be free?
It couldn't be any clearer.
Sounds around you.
Are you scared?
Shrieks and screams ring.
Flesh and clothes flee.
Ripped from their homes.
Shhh...
You're safer alone you think.
But soon you realize.
That subtle note sings every time in bed you lie.
Bloodshots reappearing old...
You wish you weren't alive.
You wish so many things but you haven't opened your eyes.
You aren't real on the ground.
Just look at that beast in the mirror.
Don't you wish you could be free?
It couldn't be any clearer.
Sounds around you.
Are you scared?
Shrieks and screams ring.
Flesh and clothes flee.
Ripped from their homes.
Shhh...
You're safer alone you think.
But soon you realize.
That subtle note sings every time in bed you lie.
Bloodshots reappearing old...
#humankind
#nightmares
#secrets #suicide
#secrets #suicide
324 reads
0 Comments
Nightmares
Dread under twilight lamentations
Come give dreamless sanitation
The grinding of the nocturnal arcane
Screams of the mad and insane
Through wastelands wandering astray
Dark animus that won't wither away
Siren song of the sleepless perverse
Cruel sovereigns or the sanctified inverse?
Dying works of demigods alone
Coffin tipped spilling bone
Skulls smiling in moonlight's gleam
Is this some twisted dream?
Brimstone and damnation aflame
Umbral...
Come give dreamless sanitation
The grinding of the nocturnal arcane
Screams of the mad and insane
Through wastelands wandering astray
Dark animus that won't wither away
Siren song of the sleepless perverse
Cruel sovereigns or the sanctified inverse?
Dying works of demigods alone
Coffin tipped spilling bone
Skulls smiling in moonlight's gleam
Is this some twisted dream?
Brimstone and damnation aflame
Umbral...
#dark
#fate
#ghosts
#nightmares
#shadows
76 reads
0 Comments
This Path of Uncertainty
I know this path…
This is a path I’ve walked before…
It’s a dark one with an indeterminate end.
Me, myself and I think there are some things that are just kept better quiet.
I don’t want to be quiet anymore.
I want to leave this arctic realm of realism, lower my foot into the warm bath water
of surrealism, and be home!
Here in reality, I am no one.
There in surrealism, I am someone.
I’ll raise my hand to the glass
and the figure in the reflection follows.
Then we join palms,
then a ripple in the glass.
All I...
This is a path I’ve walked before…
It’s a dark one with an indeterminate end.
Me, myself and I think there are some things that are just kept better quiet.
I don’t want to be quiet anymore.
I want to leave this arctic realm of realism, lower my foot into the warm bath water
of surrealism, and be home!
Here in reality, I am no one.
There in surrealism, I am someone.
I’ll raise my hand to the glass
and the figure in the reflection follows.
Then we join palms,
then a ripple in the glass.
All I...
#anxiety
#bipolar
#MentalHealth
#nightmares
#OCD
152 reads
1 Comment
a simple puppet
look, I live on a hill
sometimes I can walk up it
but sometimes I can’t
help falling down
sometimes I can walk up it
but sometimes I can’t
help falling down
#MentalHealth
#nightmares
#vulnerability
97 reads
3 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Nightmares Seeking Honest Critique