Poems About Nightmares Seeking Honest Critique
#nightmares
Poems about nightmares seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Lost Traveler
Let's pretend
I traveled over a bend
I went back in time
For no reason or rhyme
To be caught and tried
For someone else's lie
My sentence was death
Uttered under someone's breath
I will not go easy into the night
Once the moon is full I will see the whole site
There are men, women, children and aged souls
All out to see the penalty dolled
I'll be the last to go
Making me witness this horrible show
One was...
I traveled over a bend
I went back in time
For no reason or rhyme
To be caught and tried
For someone else's lie
My sentence was death
Uttered under someone's breath
I will not go easy into the night
Once the moon is full I will see the whole site
There are men, women, children and aged souls
All out to see the penalty dolled
I'll be the last to go
Making me witness this horrible show
One was...
#nightmares
#Halloween
157 reads
14 Comments
On The Way Back To The Campsite
On
the way
back to the
campsite, Nancy
spotted Marcia on
the ground naked under
a full moon with a demon
sticking its tongue into her just
before it saw Nancy and lunged at
her making Nancy wake up screaming loud.
the way
back to the
campsite, Nancy
spotted Marcia on
the ground naked under
a full moon with a demon
sticking its tongue into her just
before it saw Nancy and lunged at
her making Nancy wake up screaming loud.
#fiction
#friendship
#monsters
#nightmares
#sex
107 reads
0 Comments
One's Vampiric Nightmare
Karen
found herself
inside
a crypt stripped naked
and probed by a beast
that sucks blood before
she woke
up screaming
so loud.
found herself
inside
a crypt stripped naked
and probed by a beast
that sucks blood before
she woke
up screaming
so loud.
#fiction
#nightmares
#scary
#sex
#vampires
92 reads
0 Comments
Soulless
Nothing behind the face
I move through cities
Mixing with silence and shadow
I'm too freaked out to remember
What life is like
Without exhaustion and paranoia
Nerved & heavily charged
I go through the hours
Waiting for dreams to start
I move through cities
Mixing with silence and shadow
I'm too freaked out to remember
What life is like
Without exhaustion and paranoia
Nerved & heavily charged
I go through the hours
Waiting for dreams to start
#dreams
#nightmares
#shadows
95 reads
8 Comments
Result Of Watching Too Many Vampire Movies
Remington
felt something snake like on
her bare skin which made her open both
eyes and find herself naked in a coffin with
a bat creature about to suck her
blood until she woke up
screaming loud.
felt something snake like on
her bare skin which made her open both
eyes and find herself naked in a coffin with
a bat creature about to suck her
blood until she woke up
screaming loud.
#fiction
#graveyard
#nightmares
#sex
#vampires
119 reads
0 Comments
Supernatural Rape Nightmare
Gracelynn woke to someone laughing.
A ghost stripped the helpless chick naked.
Poor Gracelynn woke up screaming.
A ghost stripped the helpless chick naked.
Poor Gracelynn woke up screaming.
#abuse
#fiction
#ghosts
#nightmares
#sex
105 reads
0 Comments
Heartache on aisle 5
I wake with sudden ambition, a deep sadness stretch's across my face and I take A moment of reflection
my ghost of past lost visits me once again, A bitter-sweet reunion of the face I wished to lay beside.
for A seemingly unrelated dream can shift to the most serious of moments and it is the heart that seems locked in A eternal nightmare.
with eyes as sharp as glass she stares into my soul and lights it asunder with every second I am forced to remember her everything.
how is it that after this long I refuse to let go even when I have begged for...
my ghost of past lost visits me once again, A bitter-sweet reunion of the face I wished to lay beside.
for A seemingly unrelated dream can shift to the most serious of moments and it is the heart that seems locked in A eternal nightmare.
with eyes as sharp as glass she stares into my soul and lights it asunder with every second I am forced to remember her everything.
how is it that after this long I refuse to let go even when I have begged for...
#dreams
#FirstLove
#heartbroken
#nightmares
#SelfReflection
87 reads
0 Comments
The bottom of everything
I cast myself out to the edge of insanity,
reeling myself in slowly,
waiting for the dark creature below the surface to take notice.
Swallow me, drag me down to a depth with unbearable pressure.
A dark place where every decision,
the slightest twitch is the difference
between life and death.
Describing these moments with you,
dark creature,
is nearly impossible.
I beg to live,
I beg to die.
If I manage to break free,
I only crave to see you again.
reeling myself in slowly,
waiting for the dark creature below the surface to take notice.
Swallow me, drag me down to a depth with unbearable pressure.
A dark place where every decision,
the slightest twitch is the difference
between life and death.
Describing these moments with you,
dark creature,
is nearly impossible.
I beg to live,
I beg to die.
If I manage to break free,
I only crave to see you again.
#addiction
#anxiety
#depression
#nightmares
#weakness
191 reads
2 Comments
Daddys Girl (Horror)
The taste of my own blood is not satisfactory
I need for him to come back to me
I may have taken too much; I will admit
I can't hold back I'm a greedy bitch
Pass the blade across my lips.
Feeling the trickle down to my tits
He looked into my eyes it's saying nothing was there
Two black pools of loss and despair
He got away out the window and down the wall
He must have broken his leg it’s a hell of a fall
“You must come back to me
I'm being so sweet
Daddy, come back to me
what we started is not complete.” ...
I need for him to come back to me
I may have taken too much; I will admit
I can't hold back I'm a greedy bitch
Pass the blade across my lips.
Feeling the trickle down to my tits
He looked into my eyes it's saying nothing was there
Two black pools of loss and despair
He got away out the window and down the wall
He must have broken his leg it’s a hell of a fall
“You must come back to me
I'm being so sweet
Daddy, come back to me
what we started is not complete.” ...
#anger
#dark
#nightmares
271 reads
22 Comments
Unable To Open My Eyes
Behind closed doors lurks a different monster
Not the one that’s portrayed on every livestream
Playing off this charade that’s been getting over
Moving forward with the logistics of the scheme
Heartless in the belief of satisfying his shallow ego
We’re all human pawns on a maniacal chessboard
Plotting how to conquer and slay every single rival
Every attempt at peace will be maliciously ignored
Loyalty is rewarded while the insubordinate suffer
Transparent souls are met with an untimely demise
Brutal stench of death abominates a...
Not the one that’s portrayed on every livestream
Playing off this charade that’s been getting over
Moving forward with the logistics of the scheme
Heartless in the belief of satisfying his shallow ego
We’re all human pawns on a maniacal chessboard
Plotting how to conquer and slay every single rival
Every attempt at peace will be maliciously ignored
Loyalty is rewarded while the insubordinate suffer
Transparent souls are met with an untimely demise
Brutal stench of death abominates a...
#nightmares
152 reads
21 Comments
Nightmare Parallax
I walk the halls where shadows cling
where nothing living stirs
The walls are wet with blackened veins
that pulse with broken words
Each step I take, the ground recoils
or is it I who shift?
This place, alive with writhing thoughts
twists like a cosmic rift
A door appears, its frame a mouth
its teeth like jagged stone
It yawns, a breathless, deathless void
I enter, not alone
A figure stands, but lacks a face
its limbs a tangle, bare
It lifts its hand, but there’s no hand
just fingers made of air ...
where nothing living stirs
The walls are wet with blackened veins
that pulse with broken words
Each step I take, the ground recoils
or is it I who shift?
This place, alive with writhing thoughts
twists like a cosmic rift
A door appears, its frame a mouth
its teeth like jagged stone
It yawns, a breathless, deathless void
I enter, not alone
A figure stands, but lacks a face
its limbs a tangle, bare
It lifts its hand, but there’s no hand
just fingers made of air ...
#dark
#dreams
#nightmares
120 reads
0 Comments
Carnival of the Wicked
"Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, step right up for the spectacle you’ve all been waiting for, as tonight, we celebrate The Wretched And The Damned! Get ready to experience the most frightening night of all, hide your kids whether big or small. Brace yourselves and open your eyes people, welcome to the CARNIVAL OF THE WICKED".
BEHOLD
The freaks of nature taking all control
STAND UP
For the show you’ve all been waiting for
LAUGHTER
Is filling up the creepy marquee
FIRE
The fire breathers heating up the stage
...
BEHOLD
The freaks of nature taking all control
STAND UP
For the show you’ve all been waiting for
LAUGHTER
Is filling up the creepy marquee
FIRE
The fire breathers heating up the stage
...
#dark
#evil
#fiction
#nightmares
#ThrillSeeking
84 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Nightmares Seeking Honest Critique