Poems About the Moon by Top Critiquers
#moon
Poems about the moon by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Pulled To Her
Even from afar I can sense her beauty
shimmering outside
the confines of the rain
I am pulled to her
in an ever glowing attraction
changing rapidly in intensity
and fervor
but never fading away
I see her coming nearer
as red hues fill a waning sky
her silhouette glowing
taking a rightful place at my side
night takes hold as do i
embracing the pain
we both have left
breeding deep inside
shimmering outside
the confines of the rain
I am pulled to her
in an ever glowing attraction
changing rapidly in intensity
and fervor
but never fading away
I see her coming nearer
as red hues fill a waning sky
her silhouette glowing
taking a rightful place at my side
night takes hold as do i
embracing the pain
we both have left
breeding deep inside
#moon
#lover
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12 Comments
Moon
hello Helio I touch the nexus solar flare gratefully
the shaded afternoon is safe
night is out there sleeping
the moon is felt turning over in his head
tonight its fulness will spill out
drawing us closer to the abyss
for those with the notion by all means
knowledge of what is out there is best taken in small doses
a sip of the ocean
it's vast, the tide pulls deep
into madness we slip under
as for me I will tip toe through the shallows collecting shells
until the tide rolls out
and the moon goes to sleep...
the shaded afternoon is safe
night is out there sleeping
the moon is felt turning over in his head
tonight its fulness will spill out
drawing us closer to the abyss
for those with the notion by all means
knowledge of what is out there is best taken in small doses
a sip of the ocean
it's vast, the tide pulls deep
into madness we slip under
as for me I will tip toe through the shallows collecting shells
until the tide rolls out
and the moon goes to sleep...
#moon
#night
104 reads
2 Comments
Touch Pad
Touch Pad
So little
Territory
Ends up
In the news,
Small enough
Acknowledged,
Despite its
Many views.
Tiny
On the map
Of worlds,
Yet infinite acclaim,
And often given
Slim attention
For such
A well known name.
So little
Territory
Ends up
In the news,
Small enough
Acknowledged,
Despite its
Many views.
Tiny
On the map
Of worlds,
Yet infinite acclaim,
And often given
Slim attention
For such
A well known name.
#moon
#shadows
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5 Comments
wooooooo....
the spirits ride
they look at you
they see you
believe in them
they're with you
ride with them
don't look back
they look at you
they see you
believe in them
they're with you
ride with them
don't look back
#moon
#shadows
279 reads
19 Comments
Lunar zen
13 / 30
Lunar zen
Summer nights
reunites
me with my
long time
Pagan Goddess.
Tepid winds
Dust Devils
dancing
running
amok.
Scorching dark
takes nothing
from Selene’s
Brilliance
for her lunar
full
Is ever a constant
reassurance
in my timeline.
Natural
In nature
zen & witchcraft
parallel join
& separate
enable me to
scale the
pitfall’d laden
jebel laid
before my
pilgrimaged
path.
...
Lunar zen
Summer nights
reunites
me with my
long time
Pagan Goddess.
Tepid winds
Dust Devils
dancing
running
amok.
Scorching dark
takes nothing
from Selene’s
Brilliance
for her lunar
full
Is ever a constant
reassurance
in my timeline.
Natural
In nature
zen & witchcraft
parallel join
& separate
enable me to
scale the
pitfall’d laden
jebel laid
before my
pilgrimaged
path.
...
#identity
#moon
#night
#nature
#Buddhist
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0 Comments
The Magic Rhyme
The faires spirit of the wise woman dance on to bring the night, casting a softly spoken spell bringing eternity to them as they dance around the heath, forrest and the bog.
The magic rhythm echoes into the universe carried on whispers of secret rhyme into the cosmos, suddenly a great spark ignites an the ancient tale unfolds, the cosmic force awaken.
Rays unimaginable burst through darkness like golden thread, brilliance and beauty cast as light is softly spread, the midnight lakes and streams of the forest shine with crystal frost, while luna...
The magic rhythm echoes into the universe carried on whispers of secret rhyme into the cosmos, suddenly a great spark ignites an the ancient tale unfolds, the cosmic force awaken.
Rays unimaginable burst through darkness like golden thread, brilliance and beauty cast as light is softly spread, the midnight lakes and streams of the forest shine with crystal frost, while luna...
#earth
#moon
#nature #stars
#nature #stars
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Dreamscape #102
Floating slowly away
In the space
Between the moon and the Earth
Green-blue-white Earthlight
Somersaulting backwards
Landing softly on the moon
There's not much on the moon
It's a pure landscape
Free from the ravages of human beings
It's peaceful on the moon
In the space
Between the moon and the Earth
Green-blue-white Earthlight
Somersaulting backwards
Landing softly on the moon
There's not much on the moon
It's a pure landscape
Free from the ravages of human beings
It's peaceful on the moon
#dreams
#moon
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Peppermint Hostess
Peppermint Hostess
Peppermint hostess
From the realm of the three heavens
Eclipses my sun king
With denim fire
Her eyes are the green of rice paddies
Below the misty panda mountains of Guilin
Where turtle doves coo
In her Oriental soul
She is the dream of a silkworm
Spun in the silence of a heart
That has known the fragrance of tears
On a ghost moon night
Peppermint hostess
From the realm of the three heavens
Eclipses my sun king
With denim fire
Her eyes are the green of rice paddies
Below the misty panda mountains of Guilin
Where turtle doves coo
In her Oriental soul
She is the dream of a silkworm
Spun in the silence of a heart
That has known the fragrance of tears
On a ghost moon night
#beauty
#moon
#silence
#tea
#women
102 reads
4 Comments
AS IT BLINGS
A night to be for...
A nights darkness galore
Coating you to be a part of it too
Baby let's break the moon in two
Milky way dip me through
Hot flashes of your planets I never knew
Babe show me what's new
Colors that excite like midnight blue
Versatile globe
Satellites my ear lobes
Rows and rows
Of your gravity what all holds
AS IT BLINGS...
MANY GALAXY RINGS
HEAR THEM SING...
FADED ECHOES... SINGS.....
AS IT BLINGS...
ASTRONAUTS HOME BRINGS
BEAUTIFUL THINGS
MY DARK MATTER...
A nights darkness galore
Coating you to be a part of it too
Baby let's break the moon in two
Milky way dip me through
Hot flashes of your planets I never knew
Babe show me what's new
Colors that excite like midnight blue
Versatile globe
Satellites my ear lobes
Rows and rows
Of your gravity what all holds
AS IT BLINGS...
MANY GALAXY RINGS
HEAR THEM SING...
FADED ECHOES... SINGS.....
AS IT BLINGS...
ASTRONAUTS HOME BRINGS
BEAUTIFUL THINGS
MY DARK MATTER...
#love
#moon
#stars
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5 Comments
This Artist's Moonlight Muse On The Beach
Her skin shined brightly
which made her become
this artist's moonlight
muse on the beach for
his own camcorder.
which made her become
this artist's moonlight
muse on the beach for
his own camcorder.
#beach
#moon
#fiction
#dialogue
#art
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2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About the Moon by Top Critiquers