Misunderstood Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#misunderstood
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
30th Jun 2024 11:43pm
30th Jun 2024 11:43pm
ill met by street light
sorry if I’m in your way
is different to
mine and dig
all you like but
it’s late and it’s dark
and I stopped to roll a
cig
and then I bumped into
you in the park
is different to
mine and dig
all you like but
it’s late and it’s dark
and I stopped to roll a
cig
and then I bumped into
you in the park
#misunderstood
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3 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
30th Jun 2024 1:24am
30th Jun 2024 1:24am
it's safer this way
looking out my living
room window at the
outside world
the window and I
do not speak with
each other
but we have a quiet
understanding
it keeps the outside
world from getting in
and keeps me from
getting out
the window is wiser
than the world and
I...
and knows that is
for the best
room window at the
outside world
the window and I
do not speak with
each other
but we have a quiet
understanding
it keeps the outside
world from getting in
and keeps me from
getting out
the window is wiser
than the world and
I...
and knows that is
for the best
#misunderstood
#temptation
213 reads
8 Comments
I_was_rare_once
RareFaction
RareFaction
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 7:09am
28th Jun 2024 7:09am
#8
The oldest of faces yet farthest of friends.
The one who was shaken and yet still remains.
Through trials and trouble and sorrows and danger,
He looked and found a way to put to death his own anger.
On lifes path he had long last wondered.
Till by the side he cried as he pondered.
"if the path is so long and people are evil, what is the point should i continue?"
Then it hit him, the reason and purpose: to love and serve a god who knows what his hurt is.
More things in his mind then ever before, he looked and he saw this word from the old, ...
The one who was shaken and yet still remains.
Through trials and trouble and sorrows and danger,
He looked and found a way to put to death his own anger.
On lifes path he had long last wondered.
Till by the side he cried as he pondered.
"if the path is so long and people are evil, what is the point should i continue?"
Then it hit him, the reason and purpose: to love and serve a god who knows what his hurt is.
More things in his mind then ever before, he looked and he saw this word from the old, ...
#friendship
#kindness
#misunderstood
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Duice
Poem Published
16th Jun 2024 4:42pm
16th Jun 2024 4:42pm
Demeanor (Stan Lee vs. White Rabbit)
Heartbeat so loudly ominous
my lioness can't take a Dozer on my chest
at a Thanos snap my aura goes gorilla
(warfare) even Kong she say baby even calm you stress
(Bizarro) nah more like Banner in his feelings
I just keep Him Super suppress
there's no Beast topping paramount of Deadpool
when he's loose rip the \S/ off your breath
I tore my heart from my sleeves
you’d think I’m (Logan) boosting top echelon of my rank
it’s nothing major commanded a sergeant
I shoot Magneto prodigal thoughts returned like a...
my lioness can't take a Dozer on my chest
at a Thanos snap my aura goes gorilla
(warfare) even Kong she say baby even calm you stress
(Bizarro) nah more like Banner in his feelings
I just keep Him Super suppress
there's no Beast topping paramount of Deadpool
when he's loose rip the \S/ off your breath
I tore my heart from my sleeves
you’d think I’m (Logan) boosting top echelon of my rank
it’s nothing major commanded a sergeant
I shoot Magneto prodigal thoughts returned like a...
#strength
#monsters
#emotions
#frustration
#misunderstood
473 reads
0 Comments
DarkPassion
Poem Published
4th Jun 2024 2:02pm
4th Jun 2024 2:02pm
Sparkling success in supremacy
System of silence
Support the suppression within
Echoes of their cries.
#Haiku made for you.
Support the suppression within
Echoes of their cries.
#Haiku made for you.
#freedom
#hypocrisy
#misunderstood
#oppression
#shadows
249 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
4th Jun 2024 00:53am
4th Jun 2024 00:53am
in a mood
not hungry
you’re in a mood about something or other might appeal if you look at the
menu know what you’re like when you’re hungry
she says
but I’m not
you’re in a mood about something or other might appeal if you look at the
menu know what you’re like when you’re hungry
she says
but I’m not
#misunderstood
139 reads
3 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
31st May 2024 00:34am
31st May 2024 00:34am
fool
you think the woman in the pub
is smiling at you, but she’s smiling at something
she’s just thought
of
course it has nothing to
do with you
is smiling at you, but she’s smiling at something
she’s just thought
of
course it has nothing to
do with you
#misunderstood
132 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th May 2024 1:23pm
18th May 2024 1:23pm
Come On, Candi! Call It Quits! Willya?!
Mark
always
sees Candace
walk around the
pool constantly with
that seductive look in
her eyes and still wants her to
finally get it through her thick
head and call it quits because that guy's
going to marry his true love Danielle.
always
sees Candace
walk around the
pool constantly with
that seductive look in
her eyes and still wants her to
finally get it through her thick
head and call it quits because that guy's
going to marry his true love Danielle.
#fiction
#friendship
#ignorance
#marriage
#misunderstood
160 reads
0 Comments
Alois_inwriting02
Poem Published
14th May 2024 5:29am
14th May 2024 5:29am
L'état de nos échanges
My
nuance
cries wolf in
Their
world of
totalitarian
action.
nuance
cries wolf in
Their
world of
totalitarian
action.
#minimalist
#misunderstood
267 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th May 2024 8:37pm
11th May 2024 8:37pm
Don't Judge Me, Look At Yourself
People always ask me, are you alright?
You looked bummed out
Or they say Cheer Up!!
Smile!!!
What's the matter with you?
And I just stare at them
Nothing is wrong with me
Must be something with my face
Or my eyes that makes me look angry, sad or crazy
Some little girl no more then 7 walked up to me yesterday
She handed me a flower and told me to cheer up
It made me smile
I felt like taking the flower & shoving it down her throat
Piss off fucker!
You looked bummed out
Or they say Cheer Up!!
Smile!!!
What's the matter with you?
And I just stare at them
Nothing is wrong with me
Must be something with my face
Or my eyes that makes me look angry, sad or crazy
Some little girl no more then 7 walked up to me yesterday
She handed me a flower and told me to cheer up
It made me smile
I felt like taking the flower & shoving it down her throat
Piss off fucker!
#anger
#frustration
#misunderstood
262 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th May 2024 1:16pm
9th May 2024 1:16pm
Understand
I understand
I understand you
I understand me
I understand them
I can't shut it off
Sometimes I wish I didn't understand
The shit hurts
I know what I'm talking about
You know what I'm talking about
They know what I'm talking about
We all understand
Get it?
I understand you
I understand me
I understand them
I can't shut it off
Sometimes I wish I didn't understand
The shit hurts
I know what I'm talking about
You know what I'm talking about
They know what I'm talking about
We all understand
Get it?
#confusion
#identity
#LifeStruggles #misunderstood
#LifeStruggles #misunderstood
202 reads
8 Comments
ursa
Poem Published
4th May 2024 2:07pm
4th May 2024 2:07pm
Ode to Gen X
The poem unwritten, words rarely expressed
not ever the host, never asked to be guest
in your childhood, left feral, uncared for, discarded
tending to self, armed in latch-keys; unguarded
Apologetic, serene, your work-ethic on par
you cover your bruises, aware of your scars
where your face is forgotten you lead with your eyes
an adult at eight, and at fifty you rise
to the rather oblivious; your plans laid backstage
preparing for battle, persevering with age
you survive in your values; placid,...
not ever the host, never asked to be guest
in your childhood, left feral, uncared for, discarded
tending to self, armed in latch-keys; unguarded
Apologetic, serene, your work-ethic on par
you cover your bruises, aware of your scars
where your face is forgotten you lead with your eyes
an adult at eight, and at fifty you rise
to the rather oblivious; your plans laid backstage
preparing for battle, persevering with age
you survive in your values; placid,...
#misunderstood
265 reads
13 Comments
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