Misunderstood Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Damon
Damon
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 1:09pm
25th Nov 2023 1:09pm
They Don't See Me
If I were an entity known as Brevity
Could you then understand me?
So many wilfully choose not to see
O' say can you see ME as I truly be?
Could you then understand me?
So many wilfully choose not to see
O' say can you see ME as I truly be?
#misunderstood
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Oct 2023 6:54pm
18th Oct 2023 6:54pm
Thinking About The Look On Jeff's Face
While taking a
shower, Gwen
began thinking
about the look on Jeff's
face when he saw her dance
on that strip club stage one
night and crying her own blue eyes out.
shower, Gwen
began thinking
about the look on Jeff's
face when he saw her dance
on that strip club stage one
night and crying her own blue eyes out.
#women
#corruption
#fiction
#misunderstood
#seductive
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LongTubiFree
Poem Published
17th Oct 2023 7:47pm
17th Oct 2023 7:47pm
The underneath ones
I represent the misfit daughter and sons,
the truly underneath ones.
The ones you would like to forget,
the ones you seen as not worth it.
The freaks, the geeks, the weirdos
the ones you showed the bottom of your nose.
Now you see us for how we are,
the true rebellion, the true burning star.
Yes, I represent the underneath ones
not for being required,
rather the evil I've seen done.
They are no longer undesired,
though you mistook their oddity for ugliness,
now you see the wild beauty that comes
from following the beat of...
the truly underneath ones.
The ones you would like to forget,
the ones you seen as not worth it.
The freaks, the geeks, the weirdos
the ones you showed the bottom of your nose.
Now you see us for how we are,
the true rebellion, the true burning star.
Yes, I represent the underneath ones
not for being required,
rather the evil I've seen done.
They are no longer undesired,
though you mistook their oddity for ugliness,
now you see the wild beauty that comes
from following the beat of...
#loneliness
#rejection
#courage
#motivational
#misunderstood
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Oct 2023 2:50am
15th Oct 2023 2:50am
Thought You Were Someone I Know
Wanda
heard someone
say "There
you are" which made her
turn around and see
some guy say "Sorry.
Thought you
were someone
I know."
heard someone
say "There
you are" which made her
turn around and see
some guy say "Sorry.
Thought you
were someone
I know."
#fiction
#honesty
#misunderstood
#confusion
#emotional
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Sep 2023 2:24pm
21st Sep 2023 2:24pm
The Reason Why We Broke Up
At first, John thought he knew what was wrong with
Karen and went to her place to fix that
problem by asking her to marry him. But
when he got there and saw Karen naked with
two other women, he said "Forget it!" and left.
Karen and went to her place to fix that
problem by asking her to marry him. But
when he got there and saw Karen naked with
two other women, he said "Forget it!" and left.
#lesbian
#marriage
#fiction
#misunderstood
#sensual
143 reads
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Asani
Poem Published
15th Sep 2023 10:26pm
15th Sep 2023 10:26pm
Aro
Is it safe to say I believe in the honesty in polyamory?
In comparison to the uneasy pain of divorce
Polyamory may be viewed as a great sense of relief from the pricks of the reconstructed phenomenon we call monogamy.
However, there is no difference only in the number of treason
But I’d rather sustain and foster the delicate growth of one’s love in one person.
Just because I can live without you doesn’t mean I love you any less than I possibly can, but that is it for me.
You left as morning light
You got tired of my ignorance to your...
In comparison to the uneasy pain of divorce
Polyamory may be viewed as a great sense of relief from the pricks of the reconstructed phenomenon we call monogamy.
However, there is no difference only in the number of treason
But I’d rather sustain and foster the delicate growth of one’s love in one person.
Just because I can live without you doesn’t mean I love you any less than I possibly can, but that is it for me.
You left as morning light
You got tired of my ignorance to your...
#courage
#dark
#romantic
#misunderstood
#wisdom
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Aug 2023 8:28pm
17th Aug 2023 8:28pm
Passage Taken To Achieve True Stardom
Passage that Maggie had taken to achieve
true stardom was not a good one for the latest
issue of Hustler came out and she saw that
both she and some guy were getting it on in there.
true stardom was not a good one for the latest
issue of Hustler came out and she saw that
both she and some guy were getting it on in there.
#women
#fiction
#misunderstood
#sensual
#sacrifice
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lotuslover
Gypsy_Rose
Gypsy_Rose
Poem Published
13th Aug 2023 8:03pm
13th Aug 2023 8:03pm
A Delinquent Debutant
The dreams I had
Turned into nightmares
Blanketed with haunting numbness
Ethereal mists invoking
Confusion.
But a joke on me
Cosmic puzzle
Where I’ve lost a few pieces
A laugh that condescends stalking peace
Joy in disillusionment
A broken key.
But a fallen Valkyrie
Tension in temptation
Voices that linger
A poisonous vinegar
That laces my gall
With convoluted diversions.
But a constant delusion
Hateful jealousy
That you’ve found a new reflection
A...
Turned into nightmares
Blanketed with haunting numbness
Ethereal mists invoking
Confusion.
But a joke on me
Cosmic puzzle
Where I’ve lost a few pieces
A laugh that condescends stalking peace
Joy in disillusionment
A broken key.
But a fallen Valkyrie
Tension in temptation
Voices that linger
A poisonous vinegar
That laces my gall
With convoluted diversions.
But a constant delusion
Hateful jealousy
That you’ve found a new reflection
A...
#secrets
#misunderstood
#FeelingLost
#temptation
#bittersweet
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LunasChild8
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2023 2:47pm
22nd Jun 2023 2:47pm
Take a Look in the Mirror
Some would call me heartless
Others would claim that I’ve lost my way
Rather than spreading gossip
You should observe me day by day.
-
The struggles that I go through
Each threaten to push me down
I plan on collecting what I’m due
To turn my life back around.
-
Take a look in the mirror, before you judge someone else
Cruel remarks are too natural in this day and age
Everyone has their struggles, stuck in their version of hell
Lord, give me strength to make it through another day.
-
I endure, I survive, I yell out my...
Others would claim that I’ve lost my way
Rather than spreading gossip
You should observe me day by day.
-
The struggles that I go through
Each threaten to push me down
I plan on collecting what I’m due
To turn my life back around.
-
Take a look in the mirror, before you judge someone else
Cruel remarks are too natural in this day and age
Everyone has their struggles, stuck in their version of hell
Lord, give me strength to make it through another day.
-
I endure, I survive, I yell out my...
#rhyming
#misunderstood
#SelfReflection #SelfWorth
#SelfReflection #SelfWorth
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th May 2023 1:45pm
20th May 2023 1:45pm
Tried To Make A Move On Her
Jason
saw this brunette
in a light tan type suit
and tried to make a move on her
only to get his nuts totally kicked.
saw this brunette
in a light tan type suit
and tried to make a move on her
only to get his nuts totally kicked.
#beauty
#fiction
#funny
#misunderstood
#temptation
151 reads
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Auraofblack
James Burns
James Burns
Poem Published
14th May 2023 9:36am
14th May 2023 9:36am
No Server Found
#dark
#misunderstood
#FeelingLost #acceptance
#FeelingLost #acceptance
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schizostalker
Poem Published
2nd May 2023 9:58pm
2nd May 2023 9:58pm
Competition
In life competition teaches people you win or lose.
Sometimes even in life you don't get to choose.
However, in a relationship that shouldn't be the case.
If they make you feel second choice you need more then space.
If your always feeling like last place in their life.
Maybe what you need to rethink your husband or wife.
You should always fell like their first option.
Other then your children might be the only exception.
No point in giving your life totally.
For a person to reciprocate hopefully.
No point in living for someone at all. ...
Sometimes even in life you don't get to choose.
However, in a relationship that shouldn't be the case.
If they make you feel second choice you need more then space.
If your always feeling like last place in their life.
Maybe what you need to rethink your husband or wife.
You should always fell like their first option.
Other then your children might be the only exception.
No point in giving your life totally.
For a person to reciprocate hopefully.
No point in living for someone at all. ...
#secrets
#faith
#misunderstood
#emptiness
#FeelingTrapped
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