Misunderstood Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#misunderstood
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
Why we do what we do
There comes a time in each of our lives, that we have to learn to walk away from the very darkness of deepness, with it's negativity that draws us into a different kind of space that's out of this world. 🌎 For sure my question. ❓ TO you is more beneficial, to the well being of your insanity that has taken, over your life even your thoughts and dreams. For my question to you. ❓Why do we do that what we do 😞 when it comes to our relationships, as we choose to stay in a bad situation. For is it out of the love that you have not yet truly received, for is it that you...
#dating
#ForbiddenLove
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#misunderstood
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ChaosScripted
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 6:12am
24th Nov 2024 6:12am
“Waiting”
Waiting with insomnia,
My companion to the end.
Eyes closed, heart in pieces;
Too many to mend.
Racing thoughts, going so slow;
Dreams lost, couldn’t find my way.
Gave up long ago-
In supplication I pray.
A path with purpose;
A burden too great.
Dejected and hopeless
I carry this weight.
Unable to understand,
Or misunderstood.
Intention’s become blurred;
Beginning to question what’s good.
Half truths and trusting smiles;
Love laced with complete lies.
Spreading stain of deception
Bleeding before...
My companion to the end.
Eyes closed, heart in pieces;
Too many to mend.
Racing thoughts, going so slow;
Dreams lost, couldn’t find my way.
Gave up long ago-
In supplication I pray.
A path with purpose;
A burden too great.
Dejected and hopeless
I carry this weight.
Unable to understand,
Or misunderstood.
Intention’s become blurred;
Beginning to question what’s good.
Half truths and trusting smiles;
Love laced with complete lies.
Spreading stain of deception
Bleeding before...
#despair
#LifeStruggles
#misunderstood
#suffering
#suicide
111 reads
7 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 10:13pm
17th Nov 2024 10:13pm
Sanity
We spend our whole adult life
Distracting ourselves from losing our
Sanity
Some are just better at it than others
Some of us just give in
Lyrically Inclined
Distracting ourselves from losing our
Sanity
Some are just better at it than others
Some of us just give in
Lyrically Inclined
#honesty
#misunderstood
#wisdom
138 reads
8 Comments
ClearmindedVillain
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 2:16am
31st Oct 2024 2:16am
Trapped In Your Swollen Heart
Damaged.
Someone did you wrong.
Now we pay for it.
Shame to the one that did you wrong.
Shame on you for falling for it.
Over and over again.
You’re circling into your own tail.
A toxic circle of dizziness.
Good at times but can you come back?
Will you be trapped in the past?
The guy who hurt her the most she will forever love.
What did we do to pay this price?
What must be done to get what we deserve?
Someone did you wrong.
Now we pay for it.
Shame to the one that did you wrong.
Shame on you for falling for it.
Over and over again.
You’re circling into your own tail.
A toxic circle of dizziness.
Good at times but can you come back?
Will you be trapped in the past?
The guy who hurt her the most she will forever love.
What did we do to pay this price?
What must be done to get what we deserve?
#honesty
#misunderstood
#relationships
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Duice
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 8:55pm
22nd Oct 2024 8:55pm
Miss understood (Part 1)
I’m not for [ everybody ]
not everyone comprehends innuendo [ here ]
In hindsight I wrote intuition in [ frustration ]
let me speak to be absolutely [ clear: ]
Don’t just listen for How in my [ words ]
listen close to What intellect is in its [ meaning ]
I don’t speak circles to [ entertain ]
I speak in Braille for the [ gleaning ]
Envision in binary patterns as felt [ repetition ]
rationalize bumps and breaks to [ devour ]
You heard 50 shades of [ grey ]
I discern sweet from [ sour ]
Its...
not everyone comprehends innuendo [ here ]
In hindsight I wrote intuition in [ frustration ]
let me speak to be absolutely [ clear: ]
Don’t just listen for How in my [ words ]
listen close to What intellect is in its [ meaning ]
I don’t speak circles to [ entertain ]
I speak in Braille for the [ gleaning ]
Envision in binary patterns as felt [ repetition ]
rationalize bumps and breaks to [ devour ]
You heard 50 shades of [ grey ]
I discern sweet from [ sour ]
Its...
#confusion
#frustration
#learning
#misunderstood
#wisdom
291 reads
10 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 6:45am
22nd Oct 2024 6:45am
Repeat Offender
Pessimistic fool by nature or so it seems
Always waiting for the other shoe to drop
Past the double talk and random schemes
Still unable to make all this madness stop
Change is inevitable it’s a product of time
Careless actions leading to another bender
Found guilty but never committed a crime
A social stigma spawning a repeat offender
Always waiting for the other shoe to drop
Past the double talk and random schemes
Still unable to make all this madness stop
Change is inevitable it’s a product of time
Careless actions leading to another bender
Found guilty but never committed a crime
A social stigma spawning a repeat offender
#misunderstood
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oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 12:55pm
12th Oct 2024 12:55pm
Drag Thoughts
Drag thoughts
Thoughts drag
Drag story time
Reading books
Drag thoughtful
Pleasure in human flesh
Thoughtful drag
Lifts up my spirits
Just want to exist
In this hateful place
Not putting upon
What makes me be alive
Thoughts in drag
Reasoned and respectful
Why can’t they be one of us
When they give so much love
Not asking for anything special
Just to be realized as human
And not a freak of nature
The only thing they groom
Is...
Thoughts drag
Drag story time
Reading books
Drag thoughtful
Pleasure in human flesh
Thoughtful drag
Lifts up my spirits
Just want to exist
In this hateful place
Not putting upon
What makes me be alive
Thoughts in drag
Reasoned and respectful
Why can’t they be one of us
When they give so much love
Not asking for anything special
Just to be realized as human
And not a freak of nature
The only thing they groom
Is...
#identity
#LGBT
#love
#misunderstood
#reading
84 reads
2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 1:53am
27th Sep 2024 1:53am
Imposter
Evil lurks, with God's disgrace.
Heaven weeps, as tears lead chase.
Under moon lite nights, and days unbound.
The Devil yearns, hear his wailing howls.
Understand, the prays unturned.
Like summer breeze, on skin that burns.
Find the bliss, from foreign gates.
Miss led trails, and venomous snakes.
Half bitten apples, that knowledge taints.
Robbed by Eve, where Time forsakes.
Notes of lies, that mortals make.
Tunes of tongues, for life will ache.
Heaven weeps, as tears lead chase.
Under moon lite nights, and days unbound.
The Devil yearns, hear his wailing howls.
Understand, the prays unturned.
Like summer breeze, on skin that burns.
Find the bliss, from foreign gates.
Miss led trails, and venomous snakes.
Half bitten apples, that knowledge taints.
Robbed by Eve, where Time forsakes.
Notes of lies, that mortals make.
Tunes of tongues, for life will ache.
#humankind
#LifeStruggles
#love #misunderstood
#love #misunderstood
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 10:26pm
16th Sep 2024 10:26pm
2 B (9-16-2024, 1:00pm; Palm Springs, California)
to be
do be
could be
should be
might be
may be
do be
is
tear drops
rain drops
fall like
seasons
fall like
lifetimes
come
and gone
fall like countless
fallen feathers
forever lost
to winds
of timeless time
lost to rhyme
lost to reason
when all
time
for reason s
flown
...
do be
could be
should be
might be
may be
do be
is
tear drops
rain drops
fall like
seasons
fall like
lifetimes
come
and gone
fall like countless
fallen feathers
forever lost
to winds
of timeless time
lost to rhyme
lost to reason
when all
time
for reason s
flown
...
#fate
#misunderstood
#philosophical
#SelfReflection
#spiritual
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 1:28pm
10th Sep 2024 1:28pm
Deck of Cards (Collab With Duice)
Splitting chakra checkered card
deck reveals a big Joker of hearts
Aligned to be circus clown renown in mastery
to circles in aerial misdirection of arts
A bachelor of scholar in jester
to whimsical false degree starts
Unbalanced on high-rise thread walks
that net catch wild reaction remarks
Cannon fodder for fun launched
on explosions blown sky high
A cardinal jeered by child eyes
or mohawk birdie sky draws nigh...
deck reveals a big Joker of hearts
Aligned to be circus clown renown in mastery
to circles in aerial misdirection of arts
A bachelor of scholar in jester
to whimsical false degree starts
Unbalanced on high-rise thread walks
that net catch wild reaction remarks
Cannon fodder for fun launched
on explosions blown sky high
A cardinal jeered by child eyes
or mohawk birdie sky draws nigh...
#inspirational
#misunderstood
#ThrillSeeking #collaboration
#ThrillSeeking #collaboration
174 reads
10 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 1:31pm
6th Sep 2024 1:31pm
Reincarnated Rock
Hard as shit.
Stiff as a brick.
Can't tickle me. I'm not giving in.
I love to sin.
Get these hills rolling,
On little kids crossing the bridge.
No more trolling.
I'm Napoleon the smallest fright.
You break me with your dynamite.
My minions will stand and fight.
River pebbles like a slip n slide.
My foes regret this bumpy ride.
Through the waterbed, at great heights.
Spew them down a waterfall,
No wings to fly.
My enemies know they're gonna die.
I laugh on the inside,
Not sure why I commit...
Stiff as a brick.
Can't tickle me. I'm not giving in.
I love to sin.
Get these hills rolling,
On little kids crossing the bridge.
No more trolling.
I'm Napoleon the smallest fright.
You break me with your dynamite.
My minions will stand and fight.
River pebbles like a slip n slide.
My foes regret this bumpy ride.
Through the waterbed, at great heights.
Spew them down a waterfall,
No wings to fly.
My enemies know they're gonna die.
I laugh on the inside,
Not sure why I commit...
#misunderstood
#spiritual
108 reads
10 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
19th Aug 2024 3:24am
19th Aug 2024 3:24am
LOVE IN MY ARMS (I)(original 1st draft;1976; Poretto Jetty, Galveston, Texas; struggling with being Gay at 22 yr.s old)
love in my arms
here then gone
comes and goes
like some rare moon tide
so infrequently in my life
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clarity only added to
my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
so i chose to stay home
until the sun had gone down
as evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
then down to the beach i walked
as night s darkness soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where upon looking back towards shore
i stared up at the seawall s...
here then gone
comes and goes
like some rare moon tide
so infrequently in my life
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clarity only added to
my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
so i chose to stay home
until the sun had gone down
as evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
then down to the beach i walked
as night s darkness soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where upon looking back towards shore
i stared up at the seawall s...
#ForbiddenLove
#gay
#misunderstood
#sea
#UnrequitedLove
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