Metaphor Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#metaphor
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 12:17pm
1st Apr 2025 12:17pm
We have to ignore somethings
Through this cycle of life we all will have to learn, to walk away from the negativity of nonsense, that doesn't have anything to do with our own lives. For sure we have to learn how to navigate, through the process of the confusion trying to make some kind of sense out of it all. Just because we decided not to entertain, ourselves in a way that is detrimental to our own way of thinking about life. For sure we are responsible for our own actions, that comes with consequences, even when we speak within a conversation to articulate, what we have to say in a positive way to someone. Who is hell...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 2:11am
1st Apr 2025 2:11am
caress
loneliness of soul I'm missing something
wandering spirit return to me
caress the feeling
sensing you are near
covet the art of forgetting
it hurts too much to remember
listless day give me invitation
to share in celebration with your earth-bound children
remorseful shadow cultivating sorrow within me
draw nearer so I will know the immortal
part me from my brothers and sisters
and let me forget what it is to be human
painful understanding I am terribly different
with thoughts of where will I go
cast...
wandering spirit return to me
caress the feeling
sensing you are near
covet the art of forgetting
it hurts too much to remember
listless day give me invitation
to share in celebration with your earth-bound children
remorseful shadow cultivating sorrow within me
draw nearer so I will know the immortal
part me from my brothers and sisters
and let me forget what it is to be human
painful understanding I am terribly different
with thoughts of where will I go
cast...
#metaphor
#spiritual
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 00:42am
29th Mar 2025 00:42am
Gaze
a melody plays quietly
and I agree deep within with the sentiments
I've been here before
So, why am I so perplexed?
wondering at the same stumbling blocks
tripwires of faith getting me tangled
problems I've faced before and never conquered
I'm left kicking my ass damn it I did it again
Socrates of knowledge
philosophy of none
my mind reels, and I open doors
and as Nietzsche's said
careful gazing into the abyss
It might just be gazing into you
so with questions posed
Answers are given but...
and I agree deep within with the sentiments
I've been here before
So, why am I so perplexed?
wondering at the same stumbling blocks
tripwires of faith getting me tangled
problems I've faced before and never conquered
I'm left kicking my ass damn it I did it again
Socrates of knowledge
philosophy of none
my mind reels, and I open doors
and as Nietzsche's said
careful gazing into the abyss
It might just be gazing into you
so with questions posed
Answers are given but...
#metaphor
#philosophical
104 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 1:48pm
28th Mar 2025 1:48pm
respite
meditating on the inner world with thoughts of how it affects the outer
rejuvenating my soul
taking in the beauty and rejecting what doesn't belong in my inner garden
Pursuing what is offered, I side-step the gruesome
It muddies my soul
Violence only makes me fear
my job is gatekeeper of the sacred
Tending to my flowers, I am reminded of beauty
in the great old trees of wisdom
They are keepers of dreams and visions
forsaking nothing they are sentients of time
the sun rises on the gentle and evil alike
my empathic...
rejuvenating my soul
taking in the beauty and rejecting what doesn't belong in my inner garden
Pursuing what is offered, I side-step the gruesome
It muddies my soul
Violence only makes me fear
my job is gatekeeper of the sacred
Tending to my flowers, I am reminded of beauty
in the great old trees of wisdom
They are keepers of dreams and visions
forsaking nothing they are sentients of time
the sun rises on the gentle and evil alike
my empathic...
#meditation
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
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2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 2:22pm
27th Mar 2025 2:22pm
the lament of blackbirds
my sadness peaks in the internal storms
resting in my sanctuary of doubt
with the belief I am safe from the chaotic feelings
hunkered down behind the strongest walls
A strangled scream is ripped from my soul
as I see faces in the window
people I care for vanishing
It is time to close down
and yet my soul chooses to linger
haunting a place that knows me well
it's halls my sacred place
my forlorn demons look to me
We are once again homeless
blackbirds of the host picking at carrion
taking flight to land...
resting in my sanctuary of doubt
with the belief I am safe from the chaotic feelings
hunkered down behind the strongest walls
A strangled scream is ripped from my soul
as I see faces in the window
people I care for vanishing
It is time to close down
and yet my soul chooses to linger
haunting a place that knows me well
it's halls my sacred place
my forlorn demons look to me
We are once again homeless
blackbirds of the host picking at carrion
taking flight to land...
#birds
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#metaphor
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 9:01am
25th Mar 2025 9:01am
Sleepless Dreams
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ For I know some people's may and will take this message, in different kinds of way as it is just, a mental stimulation of silent thoughts. FROM sleepless nights when I can't just turn my mind off from the deepest thoughts, that creeps in the dark deepness of my mind. For sure it's necessary to understand that tomorrow isn't a promise to anyone, for sure what I'm saying is facts not fiction. For sure it will sound morbid, to some people's yet there are those who has felt these real genuine...
#aging
#cancer
#death
#emotional
#metaphor
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 3:47am
25th Mar 2025 3:47am
That Outer BODY feelings
Have you ever had a sacred outer body experience with feelings, with a real positive level of energy as you go through, a manfestion which revolves within your thoughts of your own mind thoughts. For sure it's necessary to understand, that what you think you have the ability to be able to achieve. As it is a want and need to believe that you alone, have the ability and power within your own hands and mind thoughts. For do you really believe in your faith of your mind thoughts, that you do possess the skills of magical powers of strength and energy and determination and PERSEVERANCE. TO PUSH...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#StreamOfConsciousness
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 9:04pm
24th Mar 2025 9:04pm
smoke
carving my thoughts on the sky
the clouds float by and take note
of my scribblings disappearing like smoke
to vanish just like they were never written
a thousand eyes watch on
reading the sacred art
over bewitching the blue
he swoons and turns
touching the mortal lass
whose melancholy is addicting
serenading her she smiles sadly
we will be forgotten
the onlookers will forsake the honesty of the moment
and take at their pleasure my dreams
the clouds float by and take note
of my scribblings disappearing like smoke
to vanish just like they were never written
a thousand eyes watch on
reading the sacred art
over bewitching the blue
he swoons and turns
touching the mortal lass
whose melancholy is addicting
serenading her she smiles sadly
we will be forgotten
the onlookers will forsake the honesty of the moment
and take at their pleasure my dreams
#love
#metaphor
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2 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 10:30pm
22nd Mar 2025 10:30pm
~rain.blossoms
https://youtu.be/DUphZvkt4KA?feature=shared
still no signs of a stop .. roaring
bassy angered lions of the skies
in serial thunderstorms .. with shrilly
sudden attacking hasty insertions
now and then..
of an impudently cluster-clapping
lightnings of fluctuating whites ..
this spring rain
after so long
a heat spell
when had almost forgotten
of what rain is.. for months
now
drenching core ...
still no signs of a stop .. roaring
bassy angered lions of the skies
in serial thunderstorms .. with shrilly
sudden attacking hasty insertions
now and then..
of an impudently cluster-clapping
lightnings of fluctuating whites ..
this spring rain
after so long
a heat spell
when had almost forgotten
of what rain is.. for months
now
drenching core ...
#flowers
#love
#metaphor
#rain
#sensual
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7 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 3:39am
22nd Mar 2025 3:39am
Hidden Secrets
Through this life they say that hidden behind secrets, are nothing but lies and false deception of hope, and with only perseverance to uncover our truth of our own potential of our inner strength and perseverance. For sure there are secrets, that will affect us in ways that we have to learn, how much more of the hurt and pain that we will have to carry to the grave. 🪦 Yet sometimes there are secrets that we wish, that we wish that we could change, but as with love and life sometimes we wish that we could, take back the words, that you've had said to someone who doesn't deserve your...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 3:28am
20th Mar 2025 3:28am
The White Wolf
The elders say there once was upon a time a story was told by the ancient ones, about the white wolf that roam the country side, traveling in the woods of forgotten time in search of the wolf pack. For it was said that kind of white wolf was some kind of ancient god, with mystical powers of protection over the land, and the spiritual creatures who live in this land buried deep into the forest of mother nature. For the elders say that this white wolf only has one purpose, and that is to protect all that exist on the land of what time has forgotten. For this white wolf was born from a special...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#mythology
#philosophical
#symbolism
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 3:47pm
19th Mar 2025 3:47pm
Foot Steps in the clouds
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ Have you ever stop and look and listen to your footsteps of where, you've been and gone through the process of living your own life. As you've had your share of the ups and downs that came with life, for sure we will have and had some rough times as well as some good times. For let's be honest and truthful with thyself, as we reflect upon our steps through this cycle of your life. For sure we've had our share of disappointments, and moments when we shed some tears, when we were alone. But yet we somehow was able to stay focus,...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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