Metaphor Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#metaphor
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 2:13pm
10th Dec 2024 2:13pm
NIGHT TIME THOUGHTS
Here I am just a mortal man in the wee hours in.a beautiful, place to just unwind and shut my mind off. AS I clear out my thoughts amongst the spider webs 🕸️ of deepness of the world. For sure as I sit here amongst, the darkness in the silent of peace and tranquility. AS the fire 🔥 slowly starts warming, my body and spiritually lifting, my spirit to new highs. For it's here in this space and time, I can be free to dream as I think about, what has happen that has change, my own outlet about life. 🤔 For sure in this moment of no time. just space. I slowly began...
#evolution
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
#uplifting
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 3:48pm
9th Dec 2024 3:48pm
day
talk to me dearest day of the dawn
secreting away your joy
the freckled dew on the lawn
the stoic silence of the willow as she leans
a catpillars pilgrimage to a meadow
while crickets serenade
and all type of animals come to greet you
tell me day of your wonderous, wild blue
your verdant green and glorious gold
talk to me about dust motes dancing on the wind
quietly wiling away an afteroon in a garden
while flowers chant rhymes of forget me knots
to forgotten and cherished lovers
beautiful day I await an...
secreting away your joy
the freckled dew on the lawn
the stoic silence of the willow as she leans
a catpillars pilgrimage to a meadow
while crickets serenade
and all type of animals come to greet you
tell me day of your wonderous, wild blue
your verdant green and glorious gold
talk to me about dust motes dancing on the wind
quietly wiling away an afteroon in a garden
while flowers chant rhymes of forget me knots
to forgotten and cherished lovers
beautiful day I await an...
#love
#metaphor
98 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 7:49pm
8th Dec 2024 7:49pm
IF THERE IS NO MORE WARS
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. Just imagine if there wasn't no more WARS. 🤨 FOR could you even imagine in your own, thoughts of your own mind what the world, 🌎 WOULD be like if there was no more damn WARS... 🤔 Yeah I know some of your think that I'm crazy 🤨 or I just lost my damn mind. 😯 But yet it's possible that could happen, 😔 on the flip side of our own situation, and own opinions on the screen of life. 🤨 For sure as we exchange thoughts and insight and imagination, tell me what's...
#dialogue
#epic
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
71 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 1:33am
7th Dec 2024 1:33am
LIKE WE THINK
Through this vortex of life we all have to learn, to walk away from the negativity, of our own thoughts and insight into the deepness of darkness. For sure it's necessary to understand, that there comes a time and place that we have to learn more about ourselves. FOR sure there's nothing really wrong, with wanna be off some where with, ME AND I WITH MYSELF. 🤔 FOR example sometimes we need to escape, from the negativity and drama and madness and chaos 😡 that's happening in the world. 🌎 But yet it's here and now I'm able to learn, to listen to the very deepness of the...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
67 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 9:09pm
6th Dec 2024 9:09pm
A Clovers View...
I am alone and just one, a clover low, upon this quiet plain,
My leaves wave gently, a simple emerald hue, drinking sunlight, dew, and rain.
Around me blooms of white and pink nestle, like kin, their beauty shows off to all,
We sway as soft whispers of the wind that teach us where to grow, showing us how to be strong and to survive against life's breath.
Above, the larks and sparrows sing, their melodies unfold, lingering sounds to the earth,
And I, a humble clover here, watch heaven’s songs retold as white clouds dance upon the blue skies.
The dandelions...
My leaves wave gently, a simple emerald hue, drinking sunlight, dew, and rain.
Around me blooms of white and pink nestle, like kin, their beauty shows off to all,
We sway as soft whispers of the wind that teach us where to grow, showing us how to be strong and to survive against life's breath.
Above, the larks and sparrows sing, their melodies unfold, lingering sounds to the earth,
And I, a humble clover here, watch heaven’s songs retold as white clouds dance upon the blue skies.
The dandelions...
#beauty
#LifeStruggles
#metaphor #nature
#metaphor #nature
44 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 7:46pm
6th Dec 2024 7:46pm
u-4-ik
viz u4ik
#freedom
#love
#metaphor
#minimalist
#spiritual
185 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 4:37pm
5th Dec 2024 4:37pm
poets
dismal day don't be my friend
in sadness gloom I find myself
wishing in grief for a brighter tomorrow
where in I could redeem my soul
sacred dawn allow me this priviledge
to cast my lot with the fates
bringing my life to fruition
intution tells me not to follow the path of least resistance
but to blaze my own trail
through the valled of the dead
awakening to new horizons
my sorrow understood in artistic expression
to be an indelible mark on the souls I touch
reaching unto the immortal
in keeping with...
in sadness gloom I find myself
wishing in grief for a brighter tomorrow
where in I could redeem my soul
sacred dawn allow me this priviledge
to cast my lot with the fates
bringing my life to fruition
intution tells me not to follow the path of least resistance
but to blaze my own trail
through the valled of the dead
awakening to new horizons
my sorrow understood in artistic expression
to be an indelible mark on the souls I touch
reaching unto the immortal
in keeping with...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#metaphor
#WritingPoetry
104 reads
12 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 3:55pm
3rd Dec 2024 3:55pm
soul child
you came in and truly saw me
not just a vision or idea of who I am
but the real me in the soul of my heart
then you held me
just held me while I cry
then you withdrew
alone in the emptiness I thought I would die
my soul groan within
and I felt its loneliness because it was mine
I cradled it like a child
nourishing its sorrow
took my time to cultivate sadness
melancholy blossomed and I gently tend to the blooms
seeing there was beauty in pain
I bear a child of regret
with new insight I look out at the...
not just a vision or idea of who I am
but the real me in the soul of my heart
then you held me
just held me while I cry
then you withdrew
alone in the emptiness I thought I would die
my soul groan within
and I felt its loneliness because it was mine
I cradled it like a child
nourishing its sorrow
took my time to cultivate sadness
melancholy blossomed and I gently tend to the blooms
seeing there was beauty in pain
I bear a child of regret
with new insight I look out at the...
#love
#metaphor
126 reads
9 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 5:24pm
2nd Dec 2024 5:24pm
Crystaline water
Crystaline water
An old Friend's Poem," one of her best " 2017
Crystaline water
cleanse my cluttered mind
weaving your coarse
leave the chaos behind
Riparian retreat
where willows embrace
finger leaf trails
shows a rippling trace
In mirrored depths
your secrets abide
the predators hunt
the hunted, hide
Amorphous shadows
neath diaphonous stream
caught for a moment
by incandescent sunbeam
Prowling predator
a solitary pike
in the margins, motionless
an...
An old Friend's Poem," one of her best " 2017
Crystaline water
cleanse my cluttered mind
weaving your coarse
leave the chaos behind
Riparian retreat
where willows embrace
finger leaf trails
shows a rippling trace
In mirrored depths
your secrets abide
the predators hunt
the hunted, hide
Amorphous shadows
neath diaphonous stream
caught for a moment
by incandescent sunbeam
Prowling predator
a solitary pike
in the margins, motionless
an...
#metaphor
#mythology
#philosophical
#uplifting
#water
102 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 9:50am
1st Dec 2024 9:50am
~ffff~ b i r d
viz ~ffff~ b i r d
#birth
#death
#freedom
#metaphor
#spiritual
225 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 00:05am
1st Dec 2024 00:05am
MY ENTITY IS THE WOLF
LET ME KNOW HOW DO YOU KNOW THYSELF, IF YOU REALLY TRULY KNOW THYSELF. 🤔 FOR do you know that we each have an, ability to manifest our own personal thoughts, 🧠 in mind and in our heart. ❤️ For I say that because of what I had to go through. 🤨 When I was told that I have different cancers stages, traveling through my mind and heart and soul and body. For now I'm going through the process of chemotherapy, for the treatment of elimination of this disease. THAT can affect each of us, in so many ways of life. 🙏 How many of us ever had a sacred...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
76 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 00:39am
30th Nov 2024 00:39am
The world is burning
It's here and now Istill can't believe that which my own eyes see, 👁️👁️ that the world is burning up 🔥 right before our own eyes and life. For sure even as the election is over and done, tell me WHY have so many folks suddenly, lost there mind and the ability to think for thyself. 🤔 Yet they are just admitting now 👁️👁️as they are expressing, their own dislikes and disbeliefs and dinning. THERE own thoughts and ignore the propaganda of lies, that they told nothing but more lies. 🤨 To have you to think those...
#dialogue
#epic
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
107 reads
2 Comments
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