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Stoney223
Stoney223
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Yesterday 10:40pm

Effects of passion

The effects of passion can be sweeter than sugar, but coated with the venom of a black widow spider, hanging in a spider 🕷️ web 🕸️ of silk thread 🧵 for sure it's necessary to understand what I'm saying can be taken in so many ways when it's about love mix with passion fruit 🍑 Now that I've got your undivided attention, let's take a closer look at what I'm saying 🤨 For when love is good it's a blessing in disguise, but when the love is bad, it's so hard to get away from the negativity, and drama and confusion and madness. But regardless...
 #dialogue   #emotional   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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Yesterday 11:39am

Mirror Reflection

A mirror reflection is like looking at one self in the 🪞 mirror that hangs on the wall 🧱 FOR it's true that what we see is the truth of who we really are in high sight. BUT yet it reveals the deepness of the scares, that did not heal through the process of time nor did the memories of moments spent alone in the heat of the night. For sure we have to learn to be honest with thyself, for sure only you can change your own thoughts, about what you want and need to sustain your own life. For sure as we exchange our thoughts on the fact that yesterday, is gone we have to stop and...
 #dialogue   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness   #uplifting 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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Yesterday 2:13am

To be invisible

Have you ever wished that you could be invisible, in another life time, within  your own thoughts and, insight and imagination. But yet it's just a dream in your own mind, 🤔 as it will be a true blessing in disguise. For if you could just leave your worries behind, in search of a beautiful place, far away from society. Where would travel to in this, new found illusion, where there is no space nor time. Because in this new place, there's no hate no war no hunger no sorrow, and hurt and pain with mass destruction and death. JUST a sense of the quality of life and love for all humanity...
 #dialogue   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness   #uplifting 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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27th Apr 2025 9:16pm

When will there be peace

This world has become so unreal that it's gotten to the point, that nothing is what it is suppose to be, nothing more and nothing less but an illusion of nothing, but lies and false promises. Even the people's have become less concern about, the future of our children's that are involved in killings creating nonsense, and drama and confusion and madness and chaos. 😠 Some people's are protesting for their own country, waving their country flags, and burning the Americans flags, yet you are here in America schools and colleges, 😠protesting here not in there own country. This...
 #dialogue   #grief   #LifeStruggles   #metaphor   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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27th Apr 2025 6:38am

Who knew it existed  

Who knew that a place like this does exist, in a far away place that looks like, it was created by spiritual hands. Yet still in my mind and thoughts I wonder, what else awaits me as I continue to walk, and be inspired by the depth and deepness of my surroundings. For it's not like no other place that I've ever seen through my own eyes 👁️👁️ But yet it's here and now I feel the very deepness of the calmness come over my spiritual soul. Reaching into the very deepness of my, own soul and beliefs, that I realize here there's no walls 🧱 nor 🚪 doors,...
 #dialogue   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness   #uplifting 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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25th Apr 2025 1:52pm

Spiritual Healing

Through this life we are sometimes faced with challenges that will break even the strongest of us, whether it's a relationship or marriage or friendship or lover even family. 🤔 But yet it's a huge thing to have, to learn to navigate through the process, of the ups and downs. As this to is apart of life 😔 For sure sometimes it will affect us, in ways that we may never truly really understand, For sure it's necessary to understand, that there are those things that will be, out of your own control as this is true, with honesty and truth and trust. Which will leave you alone and...
 #emotional   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness   #uplifting 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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24th Apr 2025 1:30am

Just drifting with the winds

Here I am going through the process of cleaning, out my mind thoughts with my inner emotions, begins to calm me from within my own spiritual, subconsciousness of my new beginnings of my search of peace. For sure we will have to learn how can you, make it easier for you to be able to get away from the negativity 😔 For do you believe in your own dreams, that come with endless possibilities, can you imagine. WHAT it means to find a place that would be, just what you need and want. A beautiful place of calmness, by the grace of the sea, were you look out in the distance as far as you can...
 #dialogue   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness   #uplifting 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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22nd Apr 2025 2:12am

When it's over

When it gets that way sometimes, we have to decide, not to deny the truth that keeps, slapping you in the face. 😯
WHEN it gets to that way how much more will you. Keep on believing the lies, that they won't abuse you, emotionally and mentally and physically. 😯 How much more do you think, you gonna keep taking, for truly can you really denying yourself and be honest when ask thyself. 🤔 WHAT do you want and need, in your life and love dreams. For sure when in those kinds of situations, you only have one mission, Then it's time to leave for a more righteous,...
 #abuse   #dialogue   #fear   #metaphor   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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21st Apr 2025 2:56am

In your search for love

For even in these days and times real love seems to be the most hardest thing to find in someone, with a positive commitment and consistency and real communications to articulate what we need and want not what we want and don't need. 🤨 For it's imperative that we don't base it on our past relationships, for sure some women's believe that there ain't no good men out in the world 🌎 YET that's far from the truth as there are those, men's looking and searching for the same as you are like you yet not receiving the kind of love back in return. 😞 For more than anything else...
 #hope   #love   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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20th Apr 2025 4:31am

The beauty of grace

What would you consider to be a precious pearl, of beauty of grace and charm that catches, your deepest thoughts and emotions.  For sure ask yourself do they present, who they are with the ability to articulate what they want and need. TO sustain life and love, with support, and understanding, and respect. For sure if someone came into your life, and told you that they didn't come into your life, with mind games but with a positive attitude and a genuine purpose of love and happiness. For sure we have been in relationships, that weren't meant for us 💔 that damn near broke our heart...
 #dialogue   #emotional   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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19th Apr 2025 2:44pm

A darker shade

From the many memories of the truth of the darkness, that is hidden in the shade of blue 🔵 skies, pass the white clouds of images that makes shapes followed by silent whispers, that exhibit the solar eclipse in motions of changes to come. Creating a sense of calmness and relaxation into tranquility. For it's true that we are only ENTITY'S of the images of our pass lives experience, that reflect the way we see 👁️👁️ things that has helped us to navigate, through the process of the rough times, as well as the good times. Yet it's typically to assume the...
 #LifeAsAWriter   #metaphor   #philosophical   #PowerOfWords   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
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18th Apr 2025 7:19am

IT'S THE BEST WAY

Verse:1  
A talented hand  
Is a talented brain  
Ink so fresh like words that stand  
Beautiful gestures that attain....  
   
Verse: 2  
I love to express  
Like I do my dress  
Precious heart that tries to confess  
The struggle of my huge stress  
   
Verse: 3  
Flowers dance  
With aroma immense  
Petals with colors that caress  
As they fall.They leave a mess.. but still the best  
   
CHORUS:  
It's the best way of the rest "Of the rest"  
The way life shows...
 #LifeCycle   #lyrics   #metaphor   #MyInspiration   #PowerOfWords 
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