Poems About Meditation Seeking Honest Critique
#meditation
Poems about meditation seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 4:45am
18th Jan 2025 4:45am
A Book of Hours
A winter sunset seems like the Limbo.
How low can it go with its golden glow?
The twilight says the party must go
if we want the constellations to show.
Only Luna pays a sunbeam forward
since all the stars are way too far away
to assist as she tugs her tides shoreward
even as we are at work, sleep, or play.
But poor souls need all the gold they can get
and the starlight helps, but is rather faint,
when sunbeams and moonlight will pay the debt...
with Aurora helping us reacquaint
those nagging...
How low can it go with its golden glow?
The twilight says the party must go
if we want the constellations to show.
Only Luna pays a sunbeam forward
since all the stars are way too far away
to assist as she tugs her tides shoreward
even as we are at work, sleep, or play.
But poor souls need all the gold they can get
and the starlight helps, but is rather faint,
when sunbeams and moonlight will pay the debt...
with Aurora helping us reacquaint
those nagging...
#meditation
#moon
#philosophical
67 reads
10 Comments
Glaxian
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 3:50pm
14th Jan 2025 3:50pm
Ethereal
Ethereal
I like to make lists; Horses, titanium, ethereal
People don't understand.
I don't blame them they are just limited
They tell me there are more bacterium
In and around a person than human cells.
It makes sense in a way,
I think it is the smell.
I like to count sheep; ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
People don't understand.
Don't blame me it's just the medicine.
Maybe our bacterium do more good
Than we do, during the time of sleeping.
Doesn't matter either way,
And bacteria can't smell.
I like to...
I like to make lists; Horses, titanium, ethereal
People don't understand.
I don't blame them they are just limited
They tell me there are more bacterium
In and around a person than human cells.
It makes sense in a way,
I think it is the smell.
I like to count sheep; ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
People don't understand.
Don't blame me it's just the medicine.
Maybe our bacterium do more good
Than we do, during the time of sleeping.
Doesn't matter either way,
And bacteria can't smell.
I like to...
#art
#meditation
#mirror
#NewYear
#reading
54 reads
1 Comment
NP_NP
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 10:43pm
12th Jan 2025 10:43pm
Yin & Yang
It’s yin and yang,
the dance of light and dark,
each needing the other
to keep life balanced.
We tug at the threads of blame,
claiming truth on either side,
but in reality—
neither of us is always right
nor always wrong.
We move through life,
clutching at self-preservation,
yet sleepwalking in the shadow of our own minds,
unaware of the darkness we fear.
If you fear your shadows,
know this—
you haven’t touched divinity yet,
there’s still more of you to...
the dance of light and dark,
each needing the other
to keep life balanced.
We tug at the threads of blame,
claiming truth on either side,
but in reality—
neither of us is always right
nor always wrong.
We move through life,
clutching at self-preservation,
yet sleepwalking in the shadow of our own minds,
unaware of the darkness we fear.
If you fear your shadows,
know this—
you haven’t touched divinity yet,
there’s still more of you to...
#inspirational
#learning
#meditation
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
72 reads
1 Comment
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 4:07pm
21st Dec 2024 4:07pm
~many embryonic sleeps.. in love
Viz: sleep
#love
#sleep
#birth
#death
#meditation
91 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 9:14am
21st Dec 2024 9:14am
Burst of Creativity
Burst of creativity
Catch it it runs fast
Before you know
It goes in a moment of distraction
Before you know burst of creativity is gone
And you scream and look at your phone
Should’ve wrote this down for my history
Hovers just above your thoughts
When it comes down have to figure it out
Old school pen but digital paper I shudder
To think what I’ll do if IPhone notes and
Voice memos disappear in the cloud
Catch it it runs fast
Before you know
It goes in a moment of distraction
Before you know burst of creativity is gone
And you scream and look at your phone
Should’ve wrote this down for my history
Hovers just above your thoughts
When it comes down have to figure it out
Old school pen but digital paper I shudder
To think what I’ll do if IPhone notes and
Voice memos disappear in the cloud
#inspirational
#meditation
#motivational #technology
#motivational #technology
56 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 9:00am
15th Dec 2024 9:00am
Pay Per(Version)
Fish love toothy smiles.
Yet, fear the crocodiles.
They swim in gut loads full of bile.
One by one; single file.
The guys love porn on site.
The girls love wine and late nights.
We all love the spotlights.
We're all stars shining bright.
We love our inner child.
Imaginary friends make us wild.
Not too crazy; only mild.
Leaves us thirsty to be beguiled.
Perversion isn't right.
It's not just sex that unites.
Sometimes it's the darkest night.
A surrender to the fight.
Surrounded by the...
Yet, fear the crocodiles.
They swim in gut loads full of bile.
One by one; single file.
The guys love porn on site.
The girls love wine and late nights.
We all love the spotlights.
We're all stars shining bright.
We love our inner child.
Imaginary friends make us wild.
Not too crazy; only mild.
Leaves us thirsty to be beguiled.
Perversion isn't right.
It's not just sex that unites.
Sometimes it's the darkest night.
A surrender to the fight.
Surrounded by the...
#inspirational
#meditation
#TruthOfLife
98 reads
14 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 3:17pm
11th Dec 2024 3:17pm
The Twilight
The blue light after the sun sets
Like a gas flame
Burns across the sky
Blue light with stars
To prickle White
Over the sleepy birds
The foxes wake
To thoughts of blue
The time for calm
Before the night
Like a gas flame
Burns across the sky
Blue light with stars
To prickle White
Over the sleepy birds
The foxes wake
To thoughts of blue
The time for calm
Before the night
#meditation
86 reads
2 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 3:08pm
9th Dec 2024 3:08pm
Meditating atop mothers decaying corpse
How is it that you are repulsed
By this naked green body ?
Bliss appears to mind
What is it you see?
By this naked green body ?
Bliss appears to mind
What is it you see?
#meditation
#SelfReflection
68 reads
2 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 7:47pm
6th Dec 2024 7:47pm
Selfness
Selfness
Emotional
Home for pleasure and pain
Dominant and shaping the brain
A journey of fathomless feels unleashed
An abiding pounding of life
Roaring whenever stirred
Irrational
Selfness
Selfness
Spiritual
A high yielding to God
A mysterious ascendant Self
A home for a radiating compassion
Inner power of healing Faith
Wrapping peace of silence
Mystic allure
Selfness
Emotional
Home for pleasure and pain
Dominant and shaping the brain
A journey of fathomless feels unleashed
An abiding pounding of life
Roaring whenever stirred
Irrational
Selfness
Selfness
Spiritual
A high yielding to God
A mysterious ascendant Self
A home for a radiating compassion
Inner power of healing Faith
Wrapping peace of silence
Mystic allure
Selfness
#emotions
#LifeStruggles
#meditation
#spiritual
#WritingPoetry
67 reads
2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 3:20am
21st Nov 2024 3:20am
Clockwork Bard
Line by line and writ by writ
Creativity from rotating gears?
Forged thoughts together knit
Man or machine they fear
No such thing as auto masters
Nay no spark from the soul
Sure it writes faster and faster
But my mastery is mine to control
Challenge automaton work
But words here are of flesh and bone
Homunculi writers are stuck with a dirk
Blood flows here as creativity is enthroned
No punch cards or binary brains
To say otherwise is a misguided frame
Where art thou relentless disdain? ...
Creativity from rotating gears?
Forged thoughts together knit
Man or machine they fear
No such thing as auto masters
Nay no spark from the soul
Sure it writes faster and faster
But my mastery is mine to control
Challenge automaton work
But words here are of flesh and bone
Homunculi writers are stuck with a dirk
Blood flows here as creativity is enthroned
No punch cards or binary brains
To say otherwise is a misguided frame
Where art thou relentless disdain? ...
#meditation
#rhyming
#SelfReflection
#technology
#WritingPoetry
78 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 2:21am
17th Nov 2024 2:21am
MENTALLY GO AWAY
If you had the chance to be any other place, 🤔 where will you go to escape from the very negativity, and drama and confusion and chaos. 😞 For sure what if there, were a far away place that existed, in a different time and space and place. 🤨 What would you give to be in that, kind of mentally state of well-being in your own subconscious thoughts. 🤔 For what if I told you that a place, like that does really exist in the very deepness, within your own thoughts of your mind. 🧠 Truly can put you in touch, within the very presence of the power, that you alone...
#dreams
#LifeChangingMoment
#meditation
#uplifting
#wisdom
95 reads
0 Comments
Rachelleundrgrd
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 3:12pm
8th Nov 2024 3:12pm
Morning Muse
I wake up to a silent house
the alarm cat slumbers still
walking softly on cold wood
feet melt into familial tree.
I step outside into the crisp
inhale deeply the dark sky
fields of star enfolding
follicles bristle the familiar cold.
I return to the shelter of tea
candles and incense alight
settle in to await sun’s arousal
lap abuzz with felial purr.
——
I pick up pen to wax poetic
place it quickly back in trough ...
the alarm cat slumbers still
walking softly on cold wood
feet melt into familial tree.
I step outside into the crisp
inhale deeply the dark sky
fields of star enfolding
follicles bristle the familiar cold.
I return to the shelter of tea
candles and incense alight
settle in to await sun’s arousal
lap abuzz with felial purr.
——
I pick up pen to wax poetic
place it quickly back in trough ...
#beauty
#cats
#meditation
#nature
#SelfReflection
113 reads
6 Comments
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