Poems About Manipulation Seeking Honest Critique
#manipulation
Poems about manipulation seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 12:38pm
14th Oct 2024 12:38pm
Broken Promises, Broken Mirrors
No reasoning here
You've demolished many hearts
Mirrors tell no lies
You've demolished many hearts
Mirrors tell no lies
#hurt
#lies
#manipulation #senryu
#manipulation #senryu
165 reads
12 Comments
dead_lluwi
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 4:13pm
11th Oct 2024 4:13pm
deplnt
tears falling through blood shot eyes,
wish all could go counterclockwise.
answer back to the echo of my wails,
before you know it i'll be nothing but tales.
so don't leave me rotting as im in pain,
don't test my patience when i say im insane.
begged you to trust the love we built,
coaxing you through nothing but guilt.
so here we are again, quiet whispers of i love you's,
purely empty words filled with nothing but excuse.
wish all could go counterclockwise.
answer back to the echo of my wails,
before you know it i'll be nothing but tales.
so don't leave me rotting as im in pain,
don't test my patience when i say im insane.
begged you to trust the love we built,
coaxing you through nothing but guilt.
so here we are again, quiet whispers of i love you's,
purely empty words filled with nothing but excuse.
#dark
#deception
#lies
#manipulation
#secrets
145 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 7:47pm
10th Oct 2024 7:47pm
The way you're going
Your parents have an issue and you live in constant pain
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what you tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what you tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
#LifeStruggles
#manipulation
#parent
#religion
#rhyming
131 reads
6 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 10:15pm
8th Oct 2024 10:15pm
Contemplating On These Chains
Let me tell you what we tend to do. When you put a person in solitary confinement we try to play it cool. But that shit ain't even closely or remotely to being the fuckin truth. Laying on this uncomfortable bed, going crazy in my head. Steadily thinkin how you got me looking like a god damn fool. So I try to play some Spades but these hatin as bitches are cheating just the same. So I punched him in his face. Scared ass cellmates ratted me out so I caught another case. This ain't the fuckin place. Pacing in this tiny cell, what the hell am I to even fucking do. What happened to loving me and...
#breakup
#LifeStruggles
#love
#manipulation
#prison
167 reads
0 Comments
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
The Gardener
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 9:34pm
2nd Oct 2024 9:34pm
Why do you feel lost all the time?
#abuse
#hurt
#manipulation #sadness
#manipulation #sadness
134 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 8:23pm
1st Oct 2024 8:23pm
They just want to f**k you
We all say different but for once, I'll let you woman know the truth
The bottom line is that guys just want to fuck you any way they can
I know that some of you disagree with me
I know that some of you are in love with your man and he's all you think about and the two of you will go skipping down some yellow brick road forever & ever
You have been lied to
They all want to fuck you
When you come into that restaurant with that tiny dress on or those tight yoga pants showing off your ass
The men in the place want to stop eating their food and eat you! ...
The bottom line is that guys just want to fuck you any way they can
I know that some of you disagree with me
I know that some of you are in love with your man and he's all you think about and the two of you will go skipping down some yellow brick road forever & ever
You have been lied to
They all want to fuck you
When you come into that restaurant with that tiny dress on or those tight yoga pants showing off your ass
The men in the place want to stop eating their food and eat you! ...
#ignorance
#love
#manipulation
#relationships
#sex
187 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 7:22pm
28th Sep 2024 7:22pm
You'll then see it my way
Taking what's mine is mine
Taking what's yours is mine
How can I strive to be the best when everyone has something I want?
I've been rejected all my life
Now it's time for me to get what I want, what I need
If you don't want to let go, that's perfectly fine
I have your name & number
I'll find you
Force it out of your grip and annihilate you
You'll then see it my way
Taking what's yours is mine
How can I strive to be the best when everyone has something I want?
I've been rejected all my life
Now it's time for me to get what I want, what I need
If you don't want to let go, that's perfectly fine
I have your name & number
I'll find you
Force it out of your grip and annihilate you
You'll then see it my way
#bullying
#greed
#manipulation
#SelfReflection
#tragedy
138 reads
15 Comments
B_xav_jay
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 7:27pm
25th Sep 2024 7:27pm
Bandaids
Time
It comes and it goes
Something’s aren’t meant to last forever
What started off as I love you
Slowly turned to I hate you
Or maybe I hate myself
For loving you so much
You’ve torn me down and broken me
For that I should be grateful
Or so you remind me
I deserved it it’s all my fault
Or so you remind me
You stripped me of my pride
You stripped me of my dignity
And between the bruises
I love yous meant like bandaids
But they don’t band do they
And through it all
My...
It comes and it goes
Something’s aren’t meant to last forever
What started off as I love you
Slowly turned to I hate you
Or maybe I hate myself
For loving you so much
You’ve torn me down and broken me
For that I should be grateful
Or so you remind me
I deserved it it’s all my fault
Or so you remind me
You stripped me of my pride
You stripped me of my dignity
And between the bruises
I love yous meant like bandaids
But they don’t band do they
And through it all
My...
#DomesticViolence
#manipulation
#MovingOn
#sadness
#separation
124 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 1:47am
21st Sep 2024 1:47am
AS THIS WORLD CHANGE
Here we are still moving on as the situations of the world even becomes, more darker with each day that seems to get worser. Then the day as before leaving you not better off. YET still facing a society of chaos and drama and madness, in a ball of confusion impacting the very quality of life. But yet you keep on pushing and striving and moving, forward with your faith and continue to pray that it isn't God to blame. FOR it is the blame that falls at the feet of mankind. For sure we can ask thyself, 🤔 if we want to be really be honest within thyself, who is truly to blame for the...
#manipulation
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#tragedy
141 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 10:11pm
19th Sep 2024 10:11pm
A Tragic Misfortune
The longest year,
sheds new light,
into the shade
onward into battle
the demigods inherit,
the new night,
into the light
forsake the liberation
promising to all
an ambush of deception
sheds new light,
into the shade
onward into battle
the demigods inherit,
the new night,
into the light
forsake the liberation
promising to all
an ambush of deception
#betrayal
#deception
#lies
#manipulation
#war
99 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 4:04pm
6th Sep 2024 4:04pm
WIDE SCREEN LIFE STYLE
It's the vice. The jobs; The car extension of the dick;
Paris model clothes; Duplex with garage;
Social networks, Cell Phones;
Television with movie screen!?!?!?
You show yourself!
Show you! Shows the new TV with special effects
guaranteed when you tell them the price you paid;
The car you use to go to Mommy's
more turning her from the sad;
The Hyper - Mega - Recent Sound System
with which you wake up the neighbors on Sunday morning
with any Macarena or Lipa Doja shitty shit!
You impose your image!
You...
Paris model clothes; Duplex with garage;
Social networks, Cell Phones;
Television with movie screen!?!?!?
You show yourself!
Show you! Shows the new TV with special effects
guaranteed when you tell them the price you paid;
The car you use to go to Mommy's
more turning her from the sad;
The Hyper - Mega - Recent Sound System
with which you wake up the neighbors on Sunday morning
with any Macarena or Lipa Doja shitty shit!
You impose your image!
You...
#death
#greed
#hypocrisy
#lies
#manipulation
125 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 11:18am
6th Sep 2024 11:18am
Sweet Talk
She hates guys
She says they have brains in their cocks
She says that she can tell that I'm different
I'm going over to her house tonight to get in her pants and sell her the Brooklyn Bridge
She says they have brains in their cocks
She says that she can tell that I'm different
I'm going over to her house tonight to get in her pants and sell her the Brooklyn Bridge
#deception
#friendship
#lies
#manipulation
#sex
147 reads
10 Comments
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