Poems About Manipulation Seeking Honest Critique
#manipulation
Poems about manipulation seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Mar 2024 1:22pm
8th Mar 2024 1:22pm
He Told Me That He Lives Here
Bonnie woke up and
saw some store employees stare
at her before she
noticed that she was sleeping
naked on a bed display.
saw some store employees stare
at her before she
noticed that she was sleeping
naked on a bed display.
#fiction
#tanka
#ignorance
#sensual
#manipulation
206 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Mar 2024 4:26am
8th Mar 2024 4:26am
Well? What Are You Waiting For? Let's Get It On.
Brian caught Madison reading Hustler.
She smiled, sat up and gone topless.
That made him get hard.
She smiled, sat up and gone topless.
That made him get hard.
#friendship
#home
#fiction
#sensual
#manipulation
207 reads
0 Comments
athar
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2024 7:10am
23rd Feb 2024 7:10am
Pretty lies and convienent truths
Born into a realm where facades gleam and half-truths soothe,
Before 'mother' found form on my tongue, from her bosom I was removed.
At the tender age of eight, braided yarn in hand,
I unearthed secrets in those threads, a world unplanned.
By nine, my discoveries brought labels, harsh and cold,
Branded 'broken', a narrative unfairly told.
At eleven, within actual school walls I was set,
Solitude my prior tutor, with beasts and boughs my only bet.
Clueless in the art of mingling, a misfit in their space, ...
Before 'mother' found form on my tongue, from her bosom I was removed.
At the tender age of eight, braided yarn in hand,
I unearthed secrets in those threads, a world unplanned.
By nine, my discoveries brought labels, harsh and cold,
Branded 'broken', a narrative unfairly told.
At eleven, within actual school walls I was set,
Solitude my prior tutor, with beasts and boughs my only bet.
Clueless in the art of mingling, a misfit in their space, ...
#anger
#lies
#betrayal
#manipulation
#deception
173 reads
0 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 1:52pm
22nd Feb 2024 1:52pm
Northern youth…
#depression
#drugs
#addiction
#nostalgia
#manipulation
194 reads
3 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
20th Feb 2024 1:47pm
20th Feb 2024 1:47pm
everything can become anything
when our culture can
manipulate us into not
believing the facts
of our 5 senses
that is when our minds
will become senseless
manipulate us into not
believing the facts
of our 5 senses
that is when our minds
will become senseless
#humankind
#culture
#manipulation
158 reads
6 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
18th Feb 2024 5:01pm
18th Feb 2024 5:01pm
it's all relative
when all laws have been
abolished
one could be arrested and
punished for anything
there will no difference
between the innocent
and the guilty
and the gallows will
sing
abolished
one could be arrested and
punished for anything
there will no difference
between the innocent
and the guilty
and the gallows will
sing
#lies
#shadows
#tragedy #manipulation
#tragedy #manipulation
186 reads
4 Comments
Ashtal_Leb_Azure
Poem Published
30th Jan 2024 12:43pm
30th Jan 2024 12:43pm
Trust me not
Close your eyes, my dear,
You don't need to see the light.
I will be your guide, your seer,
I will show you the true sight.
Bleed your ears, my love,
You don't need to hear the noise.
I will be your voice, your dove,
I will sing you the sweetest joys.
Trust in me, my everything,
And everything will be alright.
Your body is a broken wing,
But I will make you soar in flight.
But do you know, my dear,
What price you pay for this bliss?
Do you feel, my love,
The poison in my kiss?
Do you see,...
You don't need to see the light.
I will be your guide, your seer,
I will show you the true sight.
Bleed your ears, my love,
You don't need to hear the noise.
I will be your voice, your dove,
I will sing you the sweetest joys.
Trust in me, my everything,
And everything will be alright.
Your body is a broken wing,
But I will make you soar in flight.
But do you know, my dear,
What price you pay for this bliss?
Do you feel, my love,
The poison in my kiss?
Do you see,...
#love
#dark
#obsession
#manipulation
#deception
448 reads
2 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
24th Jan 2024 2:08pm
24th Jan 2024 2:08pm
A Sharpened Edge
It is interesting to see how siblings can grow so differently.
When raised in a house where you must fight to survive, you’d think everyone would come out covered in wounds but with a heart of hardened steel.
Shaped against a spilling wheel, a sharpened tongue.
But, not everyone is steel.
Some people are copper.
Or bronze.
Tin, even.
The battle would quickly dull their blade, their spirits.
They can be fixed with some time and effort, but is it worth it?
If they will break once more so soon?
A lot of people think about...
When raised in a house where you must fight to survive, you’d think everyone would come out covered in wounds but with a heart of hardened steel.
Shaped against a spilling wheel, a sharpened tongue.
But, not everyone is steel.
Some people are copper.
Or bronze.
Tin, even.
The battle would quickly dull their blade, their spirits.
They can be fixed with some time and effort, but is it worth it?
If they will break once more so soon?
A lot of people think about...
#children
#childhood
#abuse
#manipulation
#fear
216 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2024 3:43am
23rd Jan 2024 3:43am
This Is Not What I Counted On
"Put your clothes
on the bed and join me
outside" was what Suzanne said before
Jason does that only to be surprised by her
sitting topless and posing for some
photographer working
for Hustler.
on the bed and join me
outside" was what Suzanne said before
Jason does that only to be surprised by her
sitting topless and posing for some
photographer working
for Hustler.
#home
#fiction
#art
#sensual
#manipulation
212 reads
0 Comments
Zephlin347
Poem Published
11th Jan 2024 3:34pm
11th Jan 2024 3:34pm
False Listener
You pierced my heart with a knife,
Unleashing deceit and pain,
Our vows, shattered in this strife,
Leaving me in sorrow's domain.
You failed to see my inner flame,
The essence of my true being,
But now I rise, no longer tame,
Breaking free from your grip, freeing.
I bid farewell with strength and fortitude,
You don't merit my forgiveness,
Your attempts to confine and delude,
Won't trap me in a life of darkness.
Unleashing deceit and pain,
Our vows, shattered in this strife,
Leaving me in sorrow's domain.
You failed to see my inner flame,
The essence of my true being,
But now I rise, no longer tame,
Breaking free from your grip, freeing.
I bid farewell with strength and fortitude,
You don't merit my forgiveness,
Your attempts to confine and delude,
Won't trap me in a life of darkness.
#anger
#regret
#betrayal #manipulation
#betrayal #manipulation
155 reads
2 Comments
peninnah
Poem Published
10th Jan 2024 4:38pm
10th Jan 2024 4:38pm
PRAYING MANTIS
Oh! I fear for some yo' dear brothers!
Sexy ladies hanging 'round y'all
Giving 'good loving' faster than you open the safe
Moving in before you give 'em key
A baby in the Kiln and just like that you're marked!
"Let's take life insurance baby," She convince you. "just incase something happens..."
Oh yeah! You gonna happen;
Accusations of misconduct, battery charge... you know how they crawl!
Before long you depressed, drinking too much, in acrimonious divorce or behind bars
Which is preferable to rotting away in a coffin...
Sexy ladies hanging 'round y'all
Giving 'good loving' faster than you open the safe
Moving in before you give 'em key
A baby in the Kiln and just like that you're marked!
"Let's take life insurance baby," She convince you. "just incase something happens..."
Oh yeah! You gonna happen;
Accusations of misconduct, battery charge... you know how they crawl!
Before long you depressed, drinking too much, in acrimonious divorce or behind bars
Which is preferable to rotting away in a coffin...
#lies
#betrayal
#manipulation #deception
#manipulation #deception
122 reads
4 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
12th Dec 2023 7:35pm
12th Dec 2023 7:35pm
Forbidden Honey
#dark
#erotic
#manipulation
293 reads
4 Comments
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