Poems About Identity Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about identity seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 8:19pm
27th Dec 2024 8:19pm
#1
There is only one number
The number one
All other digits are jumbled
I have too much confusion in my life
In order to annihilate my confusion, my time wasting activities,
I must get to one after the smoke clears
She will be my only weakness
Like many instances, things are not always what they seem
Many weaknesses are blessings in disguise, clouds with silver linings
She is my weakness
She is my blessing
The number one
All other digits are jumbled
I have too much confusion in my life
In order to annihilate my confusion, my time wasting activities,
I must get to one after the smoke clears
She will be my only weakness
Like many instances, things are not always what they seem
Many weaknesses are blessings in disguise, clouds with silver linings
She is my weakness
She is my blessing
#confusion
#identity
#loneliness
#myself
#weakness
88 reads
8 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 4:16pm
27th Dec 2024 4:16pm
In a world of Juliets, call me Lady Macbeth
I had to sub a Sophomore Lit class
when the professor was out
with COVID
And my inner literary snob
screamed a thousand
deaths when the 20-year-old zygotes
romanticized about
Romeo and Juliet.
I smiled and fluttered
my eyelashes
and smashed those
cute little bitches
who thought they
invented thought
with actual arrogance.
You see children,
Shakespeare...
when the professor was out
with COVID
And my inner literary snob
screamed a thousand
deaths when the 20-year-old zygotes
romanticized about
Romeo and Juliet.
I smiled and fluttered
my eyelashes
and smashed those
cute little bitches
who thought they
invented thought
with actual arrogance.
You see children,
Shakespeare...
#dark
#narrative
#lover
#revenge
#identity
227 reads
26 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 2:27pm
26th Dec 2024 2:27pm
prison
drunk on words, you threw yourself
into the hourly burly of
the great prison where thoughts are chained
by words and made to glow for their captors
they galvanise the self
that abstract thing
and make it almost real
for fleeting addictive moments
into the hourly burly of
the great prison where thoughts are chained
by words and made to glow for their captors
they galvanise the self
that abstract thing
and make it almost real
for fleeting addictive moments
#art
#identity
#SelfReflection #WritingPoetry
#SelfReflection #WritingPoetry
81 reads
3 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 6:41am
24th Dec 2024 6:41am
The importance of ME
I awarded myself the golden key
convinced in my own verctity
stood on the podium
in no ones shadow, I am the total sum
Oscar`s, cast in my image
I will not hide my glittering plumage
reflections in lake, told the truth
loves adoration, of my beautiful youth
perfection, bedazzled, spotlight on freeze
the oneness of my holy trinity, achieved.
convinced in my own verctity
stood on the podium
in no ones shadow, I am the total sum
Oscar`s, cast in my image
I will not hide my glittering plumage
reflections in lake, told the truth
loves adoration, of my beautiful youth
perfection, bedazzled, spotlight on freeze
the oneness of my holy trinity, achieved.
#identity
43 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 8:25pm
21st Dec 2024 8:25pm
Self-Esteem
A woman standing in the mirror yelling,
"Where were you when I needed you?!"
"Where were you when I needed you?!"
#fear
#identity
#minimalist
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
76 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:13am
20th Dec 2024 11:13am
Identity
I bait my own trap
I'll wait for myself to walk in and trip the mine
I'll wait for myself to walk in and trip the mine
#identity
#myself
#regret #SelfReflection
#regret #SelfReflection
75 reads
15 Comments
Miss_Haides
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 5:08pm
19th Dec 2024 5:08pm
Anonymous Energy
I was formed from a seed of desperation.
Written and scarred upon my skin, upon my temperament.
Upon my disposition.
I wear it like a crown for all to see.
Look upon my face and recognise me.
The face of nothing.
The face of no one.
Unseen.
The face of many generations of many entities.
None belong to me.
Borrowed atoms, borrowed genes.
Just light anonymous energy.
Don't you see? The parade?
Quickly!
Don, your hat! Your Gloves! Your Hair!
Your Identity.
Unseen.
The face of no one.
The...
Written and scarred upon my skin, upon my temperament.
Upon my disposition.
I wear it like a crown for all to see.
Look upon my face and recognise me.
The face of nothing.
The face of no one.
Unseen.
The face of many generations of many entities.
None belong to me.
Borrowed atoms, borrowed genes.
Just light anonymous energy.
Don't you see? The parade?
Quickly!
Don, your hat! Your Gloves! Your Hair!
Your Identity.
Unseen.
The face of no one.
The...
#identity
#myself
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#spiritual
70 reads
1 Comment
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 9:56am
19th Dec 2024 9:56am
Greyhound Bus Station Fragrance Samplers!
Bleach - Available near the Ladies Room. WARNING: this may burn your eyes. Use as a jerk repellent!
Urine - Inside the Men's Room exclusive eau de toilet!
Economically priced!
Sewer - Available near the north side of building. The scent of ASS. The 2024 Gay Scent!!!
Farts - Available everywhere inside Greyhound. Includes free spritzer! Our lowest priced scent!
French fries - Available near the restaurant. Hot Grease! Attracts hungry men and dogs. Maybe bears!!!
Tobacco - Sample near the doors. Very few still available!...
Urine - Inside the Men's Room exclusive eau de toilet!
Economically priced!
Sewer - Available near the north side of building. The scent of ASS. The 2024 Gay Scent!!!
Farts - Available everywhere inside Greyhound. Includes free spritzer! Our lowest priced scent!
French fries - Available near the restaurant. Hot Grease! Attracts hungry men and dogs. Maybe bears!!!
Tobacco - Sample near the doors. Very few still available!...
#city
#identity
59 reads
5 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 4:41am
17th Dec 2024 4:41am
The Ink Stained Mirror
self critical poet
writing mediocre poetry
never be published
writing mediocre poetry
never be published
#identity
#LifeAsAWriter
#senryu #WritingPoetry
#senryu #WritingPoetry
98 reads
6 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 6:37pm
16th Dec 2024 6:37pm
The Good, Bad & Ugly: Me
#identity
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
42 reads
5 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 2:18pm
16th Dec 2024 2:18pm
Collage Art - Not Pretty - What I Do
On purpose
Cut up old paintings
Make collages
This one came out rustic
Added oil pastels
Functional
Not pretty
Life is like that
I’m not pretty anymore
Most parts still working …
Cut up old paintings
Make collages
This one came out rustic
Added oil pastels
Functional
Not pretty
Life is like that
I’m not pretty anymore
Most parts still working …
#art
#confessional
#identity
#PopCulture
#SelfWorth
153 reads
26 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 1:35am
14th Dec 2024 1:35am
Lips and Aura … Come Closer Babe
Let’s face it
I got it
You want it
It’s ok
Holidays are almost here
Get the real deal
Accept no substitutes
Free Delivery
I got it
You want it
It’s ok
Holidays are almost here
Get the real deal
Accept no substitutes
Free Delivery
#identity
#men
#myself
#power
#romantic
202 reads
22 Comments
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