Poems for and About Husbands Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about husbands seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:08pm
Yesterday 3:08pm
To Give To My Husband On Christmas Day
Zander, I hope that this nude portrait of me
would be perfect enough to give to my husband
on Christmas Day. I need something to spice up
our...! Why are you also with your clothes off? Oh, no!
would be perfect enough to give to my husband
on Christmas Day. I need something to spice up
our...! Why are you also with your clothes off? Oh, no!
#Christmas
#dialogue
#fiction
#husband
#sex
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 4:52pm
11th Dec 2024 4:52pm
Marriage Life
I'm use to spending my days in bad weather.
Hot, cold, sleet, snow, whiteouts it didn't matter.
Pushing myself to the limits because I hated to see you sick.
Who would have thought that the moments away would be the reason that we'd eventually split.
Thank God you made it through and now the kids are grown.
The only down fall is I'm sitting at this table eating breakfast all alone.
When just 10 years ago I was singing to a different tune.
I can't say I hate you because yes I understand you, even though sometimes I wish it wasn't true.
On the outside...
Hot, cold, sleet, snow, whiteouts it didn't matter.
Pushing myself to the limits because I hated to see you sick.
Who would have thought that the moments away would be the reason that we'd eventually split.
Thank God you made it through and now the kids are grown.
The only down fall is I'm sitting at this table eating breakfast all alone.
When just 10 years ago I was singing to a different tune.
I can't say I hate you because yes I understand you, even though sometimes I wish it wasn't true.
On the outside...
#husband
#love
#marriage
#separation
#wife
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 2:41pm
4th Nov 2024 2:41pm
By A Horde Of Zombies
Gwen
woke up
naked and
alone before
she had put on a
robe and stepped out of the
bedroom to see with shocked eyes
her husband Peter get eaten
by a horde of zombies until one
charged towards her making a scared Gwen scream.
woke up
naked and
alone before
she had put on a
robe and stepped out of the
bedroom to see with shocked eyes
her husband Peter get eaten
by a horde of zombies until one
charged towards her making a scared Gwen scream.
#death
#fiction
#husband
#sex
#zombies
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 1:34pm
31st Oct 2024 1:34pm
Before My Husband Comes Home
Let's get
this whole thing
over
and done with before
my husband comes home
and sees me naked
with one
of our young
neighbors.
this whole thing
over
and done with before
my husband comes home
and sees me naked
with one
of our young
neighbors.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#husband
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 1:17am
30th Oct 2024 1:17am
Is It Okay If I Join You Guys?
Jordan was enjoying having herself probed
by her husband Nikolas before they saw her
sister Skylar standing in the doorway of
their bedroom with one hand inside those lace panties.
by her husband Nikolas before they saw her
sister Skylar standing in the doorway of
their bedroom with one hand inside those lace panties.
#fiction
#home
#husband
#sex
#sister
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BaldyBrown
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 2:49am
27th Oct 2024 2:49am
Aesthetic
You turned over on to your left side, as lies a fetus
There painted before me were your contours
exposing resplendent hints of your hourglass
The subject being framed by your coarsely flowing
raven hair, and by the entire back of your right arm
Other supporting elements spoke from your
benevolent and delicate palm and fingers
There is a single spaghetti strap from your negligee
laying diagonally, aimlessly over your olive skin
pretending to support one of your melons ...
There painted before me were your contours
exposing resplendent hints of your hourglass
The subject being framed by your coarsely flowing
raven hair, and by the entire back of your right arm
Other supporting elements spoke from your
benevolent and delicate palm and fingers
There is a single spaghetti strap from your negligee
laying diagonally, aimlessly over your olive skin
pretending to support one of your melons ...
#admiration
#husband
#love
#Romanticism
#wife
118 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 1:11pm
24th Oct 2024 1:11pm
Saw A Pic Of Her Twin Girls
A shocked
Katherine
looked in
her husband's wallet,
saw a pic of her
twin girls naked and
which his
favorite
child is.
Katherine
looked in
her husband's wallet,
saw a pic of her
twin girls naked and
which his
favorite
child is.
#daughter
#emotional
#fiction
#husband
#sex
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PAR
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 1:26pm
18th Oct 2024 1:26pm
Man
Man, the softness of your presence
like rain that awakens the aroma of the earth.
Your essence penetrates deeply
in the roots of my soul, nourishing.
The days are adorned by your scrumptious joy
where every moment shared is a feast for the spirit.
You are the warmth of the sun on winter days
a beacon guiding through the darkness.
You dwell in me not as a guest
but as an integral part of who I am.
Your smiles echo in my memories
drawing serene landscapes in my thoughts.
You are the calm in the chaos, the gentle...
like rain that awakens the aroma of the earth.
Your essence penetrates deeply
in the roots of my soul, nourishing.
The days are adorned by your scrumptious joy
where every moment shared is a feast for the spirit.
You are the warmth of the sun on winter days
a beacon guiding through the darkness.
You dwell in me not as a guest
but as an integral part of who I am.
Your smiles echo in my memories
drawing serene landscapes in my thoughts.
You are the calm in the chaos, the gentle...
#husband
#love
#marriage
#men
#mirror
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 00:37am
17th Oct 2024 00:37am
Beatrice and Arthur
Arthur comes down in a robe, pajama and slippers because it is 5:30 in the morning, and the damn blender is going off in the kitchen. And here's how that conversation went.
Beatrice
Ohh thank goodness you're awake. I was waiting until you rose. I need your assistance on this
Arthur
B, you woke me up at this godforsaken hour. For what reason?
Beatrice
You know I said I was starting my whole exercise regime. You said you would assist me with anything I ask of you. And I need your...
Beatrice
Ohh thank goodness you're awake. I was waiting until you rose. I need your assistance on this
Arthur
B, you woke me up at this godforsaken hour. For what reason?
Beatrice
You know I said I was starting my whole exercise regime. You said you would assist me with anything I ask of you. And I need your...
#erotic
#husband
#wife
248 reads
20 Comments
mel44
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 3:28pm
22nd Sep 2024 3:28pm
It is You
It was your hands
that held me when ill
genuinely grateful
you helped me be still
It was your strength
granting me courage to fight
when my hope was lost
and woefully out of sight
It was your belief
affording me assurance
that I could survive
fostering my endurance
It was your confidence
that willed me tenacity
to persevere through darkness
that forbade me to see
It is your heart always
that sweeps me away
yet keeps me grounded
and my demons at bay
It will forever...
that held me when ill
genuinely grateful
you helped me be still
It was your strength
granting me courage to fight
when my hope was lost
and woefully out of sight
It was your belief
affording me assurance
that I could survive
fostering my endurance
It was your confidence
that willed me tenacity
to persevere through darkness
that forbade me to see
It is your heart always
that sweeps me away
yet keeps me grounded
and my demons at bay
It will forever...
#husband
#lover
202 reads
6 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
27th Aug 2024 3:04am
27th Aug 2024 3:04am
between the lines
Yet the deepest truths are best read between the lines, and, for
the most part, refuse to be written.”—Amos Bronson Alcott
and yet i read you,
glyph and word and line,
and contemplate you
as my book divine,
parsing you mornings
—e’en at dead of night!—
sifting fair warnings
from your naked light.
rude metaphors hide
underneath your eyes,
stripping all my pride
as deep longings rise.
giggle all you want
at my helplessness:
you know that i can’t
half your milk express;
...
the most part, refuse to be written.”—Amos Bronson Alcott
and yet i read you,
glyph and word and line,
and contemplate you
as my book divine,
parsing you mornings
—e’en at dead of night!—
sifting fair warnings
from your naked light.
rude metaphors hide
underneath your eyes,
stripping all my pride
as deep longings rise.
giggle all you want
at my helplessness:
you know that i can’t
half your milk express;
...
#husband
#learning
#love
#relationships
#wife
119 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 1:21pm
28th Jun 2024 1:21pm
Want To Join Us For A Threesome?
Kelly came home and
found her husband Peter and
Bridget both naked in bed.
That was before he
held out his hand and asked "Want
to join us for a threesome?"
found her husband Peter and
Bridget both naked in bed.
That was before he
held out his hand and asked "Want
to join us for a threesome?"
#corruption
#fiction
#home
#husband
#sensual
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