Poems for and About Husbands Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about husbands seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Fairy man!
His talk was about all things.
Of small gusts passing by,
away, on a gray afternoon.
Deep in the haunted mirror.
For he had come like the morning of a day,
when the world that existed was august
and it was slowly entering September.
Gold leaf and silence in our eyes.
This is how he looked to me:
A wild shadow of the forest,
full of whispers and mystery.
I looked into his calm eyes,
and all my heart was his...
And all my heart, still, was his,
like a sunset at sunrise.
I found him dancing like a leaf, ...
Of small gusts passing by,
away, on a gray afternoon.
Deep in the haunted mirror.
For he had come like the morning of a day,
when the world that existed was august
and it was slowly entering September.
Gold leaf and silence in our eyes.
This is how he looked to me:
A wild shadow of the forest,
full of whispers and mystery.
I looked into his calm eyes,
and all my heart was his...
And all my heart, still, was his,
like a sunset at sunrise.
I found him dancing like a leaf, ...
#love
#husband
#LGBT
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My Breaths Even Pace
His rough hands do embrace
They glide upon my satin face
Upon my lips his fingers trace
I close my eyes as my heart does race
His body like stone as the ancients did carve
For his body I’ll always starve
The curves on his skin will always pull me in
My body for him it has always been
His voice makes me blush
Like a red rose at dusk
Though he towers higher than I
No..I’ll never leave his side
They glide upon my satin face
Upon my lips his fingers trace
I close my eyes as my heart does race
His body like stone as the ancients did carve
For his body I’ll always starve
The curves on his skin will always pull me in
My body for him it has always been
His voice makes me blush
Like a red rose at dusk
Though he towers higher than I
No..I’ll never leave his side
#love
#husband
#relationships
#beauty
#admiration
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some good long years
And he left breathless
disheveled
as if he had
a life of delay...
stopped at the door
and kissed the man
that he had learned
to love
breathed out
disheveled
and happy.
PAR
disheveled
as if he had
a life of delay...
stopped at the door
and kissed the man
that he had learned
to love
breathed out
disheveled
and happy.
PAR
#happiness
#love
#husband
#LGBT
#passion
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Circe's Gold Cage
Your love language is Circe's island
Food, wine, luxury as far as the eye can see
Warmth and comfort offered so freely
Blind acceptance of anything I could say
You give me anything I could ever want
But it is as hollow as a wooden bell
People's assumption is I'm in control
But we know differently, don't we?
There will be a moment when I turn on you
That's when the luxury turns to golden bars
We are always assuring ourselves
We would never hurt each other
But Circe told Odysseus she meant no harm
You offer love and everything...
Food, wine, luxury as far as the eye can see
Warmth and comfort offered so freely
Blind acceptance of anything I could say
You give me anything I could ever want
But it is as hollow as a wooden bell
People's assumption is I'm in control
But we know differently, don't we?
There will be a moment when I turn on you
That's when the luxury turns to golden bars
We are always assuring ourselves
We would never hurt each other
But Circe told Odysseus she meant no harm
You offer love and everything...
#husband
#honesty
#denial
#FeelingTrapped
#fear
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Hurray For The REVERSAL Of ROE V WADE
Roe v. Wade has been reversed !!
First of all, privacy is no realistic basis for legalizing abortion.
Just because the baby is within your body, that doesn't give you the right to kill it !!
You are not an absolute monarch over that baby. Suppose I invite someone over to my house and he slips on the slippery floor.
So he says "I'm gonna sue you for having that slippery floor." So I say to myself, I can't let this bum sue me !!
So I'm tempted to "wack" this guy - and justify it on the basis that it happened within the PRIVACY of my house.
But does the mere...
First of all, privacy is no realistic basis for legalizing abortion.
Just because the baby is within your body, that doesn't give you the right to kill it !!
You are not an absolute monarch over that baby. Suppose I invite someone over to my house and he slips on the slippery floor.
So he says "I'm gonna sue you for having that slippery floor." So I say to myself, I can't let this bum sue me !!
So I'm tempted to "wack" this guy - and justify it on the basis that it happened within the PRIVACY of my house.
But does the mere...
#husband
#honesty
#admiration
#respect
#dating
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post office
the being was the being was the being was
beheaded by the country's navy...
...
..., bled slowly, ...
its parts scattered like ashes
the doors
open open open open
there is a taxi waiting
there is a taxi that is not
either in wait or in wait
was the being that had been
...
PAR
beheaded by the country's navy...
...
..., bled slowly, ...
its parts scattered like ashes
the doors
open open open open
there is a taxi waiting
there is a taxi that is not
either in wait or in wait
was the being that had been
...
PAR
#love
#kindness
#husband
#boyfriend
#men
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The Harvest
The Harvest had just begun at a Seventh-Day Adventist Church.
Brother and Sister Brown arrived there early in fancy clothes.
The stingy couple did not bring any gifts for the Harvest.
A mouthy deacon with prying eyes approached them at the gate.
“Good morning, Brother and Sister Brown,” he said heartily.
Mr. and Mrs. Brown politely returned the greeting.
The inquisitive deacon immediately asked Mrs. Brown,
“Why did you and your husband come here with empty hands?”
“You didn’t even bring a dozen eggs for the harvest,” he added.
Mr. Brown said...
Brother and Sister Brown arrived there early in fancy clothes.
The stingy couple did not bring any gifts for the Harvest.
A mouthy deacon with prying eyes approached them at the gate.
“Good morning, Brother and Sister Brown,” he said heartily.
Mr. and Mrs. Brown politely returned the greeting.
The inquisitive deacon immediately asked Mrs. Brown,
“Why did you and your husband come here with empty hands?”
“You didn’t even bring a dozen eggs for the harvest,” he added.
Mr. Brown said...
#wife
#husband
#religion #funny
#religion #funny
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Without coffee or remorse
I like cops and married women for
the same reasons:
They’re pissed at the world,
they fuck fast
and they
keep their
mouths shut.
So I texted a cop
I’d once done a ride-along with,
because while
I read porn,
my husband
and our girlfriend
talked about
baby names.
It punched a hole
in me.
Something gaping
and ugly.
And I wanted to fill it.
With you.
With you.
I wanted to feel all that
tension,
that heat
that...
the same reasons:
They’re pissed at the world,
they fuck fast
and they
keep their
mouths shut.
So I texted a cop
I’d once done a ride-along with,
because while
I read porn,
my husband
and our girlfriend
talked about
baby names.
It punched a hole
in me.
Something gaping
and ugly.
And I wanted to fill it.
With you.
With you.
I wanted to feel all that
tension,
that heat
that...
#husband
#girlfriend
#sex
#lover
#emptiness
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Of kings and queens
I used to dream of o Kingdom,
I used to see you as a Queen
and my self as the Most Powerfull of all
And the dream, as they always do,
shaterd!
there is no Kingdom
There is no Power above all
There is nothing left..
But a Queen...
You asked me Why?
I said just because...
can't you see?
Oh darlin'... can't you see?
You rule my world.
You're a poor man's dream
You're a rich man's downfall
can't you see
you made a King out of me?
I used to see you as a Queen
and my self as the Most Powerfull of all
And the dream, as they always do,
shaterd!
there is no Kingdom
There is no Power above all
There is nothing left..
But a Queen...
You asked me Why?
I said just because...
can't you see?
Oh darlin'... can't you see?
You rule my world.
You're a poor man's dream
You're a rich man's downfall
can't you see
you made a King out of me?
#love
#wife
#husband
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my him -
-
You deserve joy,
ever fleck of skin,
every inch of tenderness,
every worst thought you've had,
and no one wins,
no one bathes themselves in light, love,
no one comes out pure,
no one says the right thing,
and no one is harmless,
and no one is free,
no one is predestined,
no one is merciless,
no one is uninvolved,
we are all smatterings of joy and sadness,
a peeling and regrowing in our undersides,
we are capable of self sacrifice,
and malice
and faith
and error,
and wisdom
and...
You deserve joy,
ever fleck of skin,
every inch of tenderness,
every worst thought you've had,
and no one wins,
no one bathes themselves in light, love,
no one comes out pure,
no one says the right thing,
and no one is harmless,
and no one is free,
no one is predestined,
no one is merciless,
no one is uninvolved,
we are all smatterings of joy and sadness,
a peeling and regrowing in our undersides,
we are capable of self sacrifice,
and malice
and faith
and error,
and wisdom
and...
#love
#husband
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those bruises
those bruises
I want to give you gold,
gold that'll riddle a God
back to the odious rat they were
before they were put upon a cloud.
I want to make kebab sticks
from their whiskers,
pesto from their bones,
venture into a pale, quiet period.
There, your furied light
will mingle with mine,
we'll stare at a mouth wide open,
spread central at the banquet.
I want to give you gold,
so freedom isn't bound
by economy or domination
or land.
I want to give you gold,
gold that'll riddle a God
back to the odious rat they were
before they were put upon a cloud.
I want to make kebab sticks
from their whiskers,
pesto from their bones,
venture into a pale, quiet period.
There, your furied light
will mingle with mine,
we'll stare at a mouth wide open,
spread central at the banquet.
I want to give you gold,
so freedom isn't bound
by economy or domination
or land.
#husband
#friendship
#God #escape
#God #escape
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confessions
an expert in evading feeling
I twirl my emotions inside me then block them out
it's a gift really forgetting
but there is a great fear in me
of losing my beloved
I wonder when I let him in?
I mean, I didn't intend to
my plan was to fill my loneliness
when did I become so needful
needing his love, needing his affections
I'm usually cold on the outside
this admission would surprise him
I don't let my emotions show
that would be a weakness
most you'll get from me
is a flicker in the eyes
I...
I twirl my emotions inside me then block them out
it's a gift really forgetting
but there is a great fear in me
of losing my beloved
I wonder when I let him in?
I mean, I didn't intend to
my plan was to fill my loneliness
when did I become so needful
needing his love, needing his affections
I'm usually cold on the outside
this admission would surprise him
I don't let my emotions show
that would be a weakness
most you'll get from me
is a flicker in the eyes
I...
#love
#husband
#relationships #confessional
#relationships #confessional
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