Poems About Hate Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about hate seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
NP_NP
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 3:16pm
15th Jan 2025 3:16pm
Fake Ass
What if we swapped that tiny
dancer in the music box,
For a stripper on a pole,
In the heat of intoxicated thoughts?
Drunk and jealousy, trust me,
don't mix,
Friction ignites where emotions twist.
Was it a fight over a customer’s gaze,
Or did beauty alone set
the stage ablaze?
I wasn't in her mind, so I couldn't know,
The tension that simmered,
ready to blow.
One stood on the side stage,
the other with a client,
Corona's in hand, the day shift riot, ...
dancer in the music box,
For a stripper on a pole,
In the heat of intoxicated thoughts?
Drunk and jealousy, trust me,
don't mix,
Friction ignites where emotions twist.
Was it a fight over a customer’s gaze,
Or did beauty alone set
the stage ablaze?
I wasn't in her mind, so I couldn't know,
The tension that simmered,
ready to blow.
One stood on the side stage,
the other with a client,
Corona's in hand, the day shift riot, ...
#anger
#conflict
#hate
#violence
#WritingPoetry
82 reads
0 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 3:11am
15th Jan 2025 3:11am
One more day needed...
A man I know just lost his mother.
We comforted him as best we could.
He cried for hours. I'm sure his
cries continued after I left.
I left because I was angry. Not at
the bereaved friend - but at my
CUNT mother! I survived her.
I raised myself while being her slave
and the family sex toy. She had
been abused and escaped! She
chose to return to the fold and
allow/force the physical and sexual
abuse on me!
I wish we would have had love between
us! We didn't! I avoided her for over a
decade as I was...
We comforted him as best we could.
He cried for hours. I'm sure his
cries continued after I left.
I left because I was angry. Not at
the bereaved friend - but at my
CUNT mother! I survived her.
I raised myself while being her slave
and the family sex toy. She had
been abused and escaped! She
chose to return to the fold and
allow/force the physical and sexual
abuse on me!
I wish we would have had love between
us! We didn't! I avoided her for over a
decade as I was...
#abuse
#anger
#hate #mother
#hate #mother
80 reads
6 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 3:29pm
14th Jan 2025 3:29pm
Haters of the Truth
You commend the poet with flattery when you agree with what he writes,
But you make disdainful comments when you disagree with his work.
You challenge his writing because you have bad intentions towards him.
Furthermore, you raise nonsensical side points to anger and entrap the writer.
The poet would rather not have conversations with evil-minded people.
On many occasions, you dissent to the views of the poet and create confusions.
You deliberately misrepresent the poet’s arguments to mislead the readers.
The people who oppose the work of the...
But you make disdainful comments when you disagree with his work.
You challenge his writing because you have bad intentions towards him.
Furthermore, you raise nonsensical side points to anger and entrap the writer.
The poet would rather not have conversations with evil-minded people.
On many occasions, you dissent to the views of the poet and create confusions.
You deliberately misrepresent the poet’s arguments to mislead the readers.
The people who oppose the work of the...
#anger
#hate
#money
#murder
#racism
90 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 10:42am
13th Jan 2025 10:42am
Tired of your bullshit
I'm so sick and tired of hearing you
So much that I don't know what to do
I don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smart
I could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart
You think you're clever, funny, and kind
People like you make people like me lose our minds
I hate who you are, what you believe in, and stand what for
Being forced to be around you at any time is a chore
Everything you do, and everything you say
Makes me contemplate suicide every day
You do things so backwards, I don't even know where to start
I wish...
So much that I don't know what to do
I don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smart
I could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart
You think you're clever, funny, and kind
People like you make people like me lose our minds
I hate who you are, what you believe in, and stand what for
Being forced to be around you at any time is a chore
Everything you do, and everything you say
Makes me contemplate suicide every day
You do things so backwards, I don't even know where to start
I wish...
#anger
#CallToAction
#fiction
#frustration
#hate
119 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 11:26am
12th Jan 2025 11:26am
That's all your worth
Wretched but beautiful
My eyes see you but I look away
Throw yourself into a den of lions
I'll bring the popcorn and goobers
Will they eat you or spit you out
Your flesh is bitter and diseased
To much negativity and malignancy
How can one walk around with such a tainted soul?
Bless yourself in my river of urine
That's what I think of you anyway
Take it, accept it
That's all your worth
Go home and drown yourself in your bottomless, endless self pity
Hope your having a great weekend
My eyes see you but I look away
Throw yourself into a den of lions
I'll bring the popcorn and goobers
Will they eat you or spit you out
Your flesh is bitter and diseased
To much negativity and malignancy
How can one walk around with such a tainted soul?
Bless yourself in my river of urine
That's what I think of you anyway
Take it, accept it
That's all your worth
Go home and drown yourself in your bottomless, endless self pity
Hope your having a great weekend
#fiction
#hate
#manipulation
#SelfHarm
#TruthOfLife
94 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 00:13am
10th Jan 2025 00:13am
Ignorance
People don't realize how stressed out you get,
When your head is so congested,
You have to physically push on the vessels,
To relieve it.
Without relief, you get spasms.
Dizziness and fear.
And the annoyance of people,
Trying to be friendly.
Thinking that talking would help.
When all it does,
Is trigger spams and fear.
The fear of losing control,
Of something you never used to control.
But now you have to.
Or else you'll die.
When your head is so congested,
You have to physically push on the vessels,
To relieve it.
Without relief, you get spasms.
Dizziness and fear.
And the annoyance of people,
Trying to be friendly.
Thinking that talking would help.
When all it does,
Is trigger spams and fear.
The fear of losing control,
Of something you never used to control.
But now you have to.
Or else you'll die.
#FeelingLost
#hate
#healing
#loneliness
#suffering
96 reads
7 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 1:04am
9th Jan 2025 1:04am
The Serpent Within
Deep in the heart where shadows creep unseen,
A serpent stirs, its whispers soft yet sly.
Its fangs are envy, poised to sink and bind,
Its coils constrict, a grip that will not cease.
It feeds on dreams, the light it slowly taints,
Until the soul is hollowed, bleak, and bare.
At first, the soul seems whole, unbroken, bare,
But doubt, unspoken, slithers in unseen.
Desires take root, once pure but quickly taint,
As jealous thoughts awaken, sharp and sly.
Their whispers grow, refusing now to cease,
A bitter longing, gnawing at the...
A serpent stirs, its whispers soft yet sly.
Its fangs are envy, poised to sink and bind,
Its coils constrict, a grip that will not cease.
It feeds on dreams, the light it slowly taints,
Until the soul is hollowed, bleak, and bare.
At first, the soul seems whole, unbroken, bare,
But doubt, unspoken, slithers in unseen.
Desires take root, once pure but quickly taint,
As jealous thoughts awaken, sharp and sly.
Their whispers grow, refusing now to cease,
A bitter longing, gnawing at the...
#anger
#hate
#jealousy
65 reads
2 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 5:58am
6th Jan 2025 5:58am
Bo's Shadow
Bo was 6 yrs old when he made a full body
silhouette in class. He chose black paper and he carefully cut it out and brought it home proudly.
He called it his shadow.
He taped it to his wall near his bed and there it
stayed for 3 years. The longest our mom had ever stayed in any apartment. The building was owned by our extremely perverted aunt. She liked to touch him.
So did our Mom. The entire family was like that. He
secretly told me that he put his soul into his "shadow" to keep it safe from mom, our aunt - the entire family! ...
silhouette in class. He chose black paper and he carefully cut it out and brought it home proudly.
He called it his shadow.
He taped it to his wall near his bed and there it
stayed for 3 years. The longest our mom had ever stayed in any apartment. The building was owned by our extremely perverted aunt. She liked to touch him.
So did our Mom. The entire family was like that. He
secretly told me that he put his soul into his "shadow" to keep it safe from mom, our aunt - the entire family! ...
#abuse
#graveyard
#hate #PTSD
#hate #PTSD
59 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 9:37pm
5th Jan 2025 9:37pm
I HATE ASS KISSERS!
Go ahead
Insert your tongue really deep into their asshole
Taste your bosses rectum
Maybe this will get you what you want from them
You have an image to maintain
An agenda to get ahead, to reach a goal
Do you think this will get you what you want?
If it don't, then your brown nose will look even shittier then it does now
I hope you fall flat on your face, you pathetic scumbag
Here's some advice,
Clean that shit off your nose, don't come near me ever again
and please go fuck yourself!
Insert your tongue really deep into their asshole
Taste your bosses rectum
Maybe this will get you what you want from them
You have an image to maintain
An agenda to get ahead, to reach a goal
Do you think this will get you what you want?
If it don't, then your brown nose will look even shittier then it does now
I hope you fall flat on your face, you pathetic scumbag
Here's some advice,
Clean that shit off your nose, don't come near me ever again
and please go fuck yourself!
#anger
#CallToAction
#hate
112 reads
12 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 9:26pm
5th Jan 2025 9:26pm
A Day Without Sun
I despise this wretched place
Where the sky forever heralds light
Sunbeams scorch and burn my face
A relentless, golden blight
I yearn for cold shade
The solace of shadowed rule
Umbral waters I'd wade
Immersed in its Cimmerian pool
I pray for the sun’s dying breath
For Nox to reign and smother more
Yet I know I plead in vain with death
This battle is lost, this endless war
From this cursed, red-dusted soil
I call to the night for its start
To end this gleaming, sky-lit boil
Return my race's starborne...
Where the sky forever heralds light
Sunbeams scorch and burn my face
A relentless, golden blight
I yearn for cold shade
The solace of shadowed rule
Umbral waters I'd wade
Immersed in its Cimmerian pool
I pray for the sun’s dying breath
For Nox to reign and smother more
Yet I know I plead in vain with death
This battle is lost, this endless war
From this cursed, red-dusted soil
I call to the night for its start
To end this gleaming, sky-lit boil
Return my race's starborne...
#astronomy
#dawn
#hate
#night
#sun
69 reads
1 Comment
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 8:55pm
4th Jan 2025 8:55pm
Imagine
Imagine
If we could mind our business
Imagine
If we could live in peace
Imagine
If we had more education
Imagine
If there were no people starving in the world
Imagine
If there weren't people dying in the world of Aids
Imagine
If there wasn't any child abuse in the world
Imagine
If there was no rape in the world
Imagine
If we could learn to forgive people
Imagine
If there was no protest in the street
Imagine
If there wasn't prostitution in the streets
Imagine
If there wasn't people...
If we could mind our business
Imagine
If we could live in peace
Imagine
If we had more education
Imagine
If there were no people starving in the world
Imagine
If there weren't people dying in the world of Aids
Imagine
If there wasn't any child abuse in the world
Imagine
If there was no rape in the world
Imagine
If we could learn to forgive people
Imagine
If there was no protest in the street
Imagine
If there wasn't prostitution in the streets
Imagine
If there wasn't people...
#anxiety
#disappointment
#emptiness
#hate
#shame
65 reads
0 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 5:00am
4th Jan 2025 5:00am
While you f**k me...
#anger
#bipolar
#hate
#love
#sex
207 reads
8 Comments
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