Poems About Hate Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about hate seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Hate You
My mind screams that I hate you
Even as we make plans for a future
That is nothing more than a facade
Because you will never be the man you promised to me.
Even as we make plans for a future
That is nothing more than a facade
Because you will never be the man you promised to me.
#anger
#apathy
#emptiness
#hate
#love
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Opportunism.

#anger
#hate
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Shadowborn
and out from the dead
reanimated anew
unsightly and unabated
surreal visage
inviting annihilation
bound by servitude
now embodying
nurtured hate
swallowing all pain
a final respite
from suffering
kill and grow
indestructible
eternal soul
accursed to slavery
stolen from the grave
darkest depths
distance between damnation
unable to feel
murderous intent
purveyor of death
towering trials
impossible reality
break the rift
dungeon of despair
slaughter everything ...
reanimated anew
unsightly and unabated
surreal visage
inviting annihilation
bound by servitude
now embodying
nurtured hate
swallowing all pain
a final respite
from suffering
kill and grow
indestructible
eternal soul
accursed to slavery
stolen from the grave
darkest depths
distance between damnation
unable to feel
murderous intent
purveyor of death
towering trials
impossible reality
break the rift
dungeon of despair
slaughter everything ...
#anger
#curse
#dark
#hate
#shadows
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I will rise and shine
I will rise and shine
Early tomorrow morning
I am not planning to sleep in
During the morning
And waste a day
Also father you brought more snow
It snow last night when I was sleeping
And this morning still snowing
I hope it ends this afternoon
I am not planning to go out
Anywhere today
I will stay in today
And I will do some work for my Father
Early tomorrow morning
I am not planning to sleep in
During the morning
And waste a day
Also father you brought more snow
It snow last night when I was sleeping
And this morning still snowing
I hope it ends this afternoon
I am not planning to go out
Anywhere today
I will stay in today
And I will do some work for my Father
#confusion
#grief
#hate
#sadness
#shame
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Little Sam
Little Sam
I am so glad that we
Get along just fine
Also we have the same
Interests
That is a good thing
Little Sam
Are you also a Christian like me
From birth to adulthood
I am dying to know
Also do you pray to God
The same way I do
Every single night
Before you go bed
Yes I do
But I am not a Christian
Little Sam
I enjoy going out with you
Today we spend our day
Together at the Eaton Centre
We walk inside the mall
While it snow outside
Also we had our healthy lunch
I am so glad that we
Get along just fine
Also we have the same
Interests
That is a good thing
Little Sam
Are you also a Christian like me
From birth to adulthood
I am dying to know
Also do you pray to God
The same way I do
Every single night
Before you go bed
Yes I do
But I am not a Christian
Little Sam
I enjoy going out with you
Today we spend our day
Together at the Eaton Centre
We walk inside the mall
While it snow outside
Also we had our healthy lunch
#confusion
#dark
#greed
#hate
#sadness
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BUCK IT!!!
HATE by the buckets
fill em up
pour em out
nobody's safe
money so important
more for me
less for you
i got the power
i'll show you how
i know the way
follow me and shut up
break down,fall down
no getting up
stay down
hate by the buckets
fill em up
pour em out...
fill em up
pour em out
nobody's safe
money so important
more for me
less for you
i got the power
i'll show you how
i know the way
follow me and shut up
break down,fall down
no getting up
stay down
hate by the buckets
fill em up
pour em out...
#hate
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Hail Brigid!
I offer this, my life.
As a sacrifice.
To the restless dead.
To the hungry ghosts.
And all lines that end.
The fury of the tornado is fierce.
And, we have such little time.
Let me defy the fates.
May the Gods accept my offering.
Of blood.
As,
The shedding of blood.
Is sacred.
As a sacrifice.
To the restless dead.
To the hungry ghosts.
And all lines that end.
The fury of the tornado is fierce.
And, we have such little time.
Let me defy the fates.
May the Gods accept my offering.
Of blood.
As,
The shedding of blood.
Is sacred.
#hate
#pagan
#prayer
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In Canada I wish to be a Kamikaze.
Death.
My friend.
Let us make amends.
Bury the hatchet.
For I smell war in the air.
I hear the cacophony of artillery.
Rumbling in the distance.
And, if you'll let me death.
I shall kill as many of the invader.
As you will let me.
Let me die in vain.
Unknown and unloved.
So my ancestors won't weep.
For my cowardice.
I shall bravely march off to my anihilation.
And I hope I go to Hell.
Ontop of a pile of corpses.
Of these savages.
And what is this life.
But the falling...
My friend.
Let us make amends.
Bury the hatchet.
For I smell war in the air.
I hear the cacophony of artillery.
Rumbling in the distance.
And, if you'll let me death.
I shall kill as many of the invader.
As you will let me.
Let me die in vain.
Unknown and unloved.
So my ancestors won't weep.
For my cowardice.
I shall bravely march off to my anihilation.
And I hope I go to Hell.
Ontop of a pile of corpses.
Of these savages.
And what is this life.
But the falling...
#hate
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That Changed His Mind Totally
Michael hated his co-worker Connie.
That's before he saw her new dress.
That changed his mind totally.
That's before he saw her new dress.
That changed his mind totally.
#beauty
#fiction
#hate
#relationships
#sensual
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Devolution
Idiots have merged with neo-nazis
to make this world an uglier place
spawning a planet of...idiotzis
with overpriced egg on each beef-wit face;
faces that turn their noses up at books
since the time that they save with every ban
they can spend kissing the ass of the crooks
who kiss the ass of the crook with the tan,
all to enable a future of hate,
where forward pay is all a game of blame
which...NEVER...has been a romantic trait
but only a counterproductive aim
that leads to the puniest short term gain,
of...
to make this world an uglier place
spawning a planet of...idiotzis
with overpriced egg on each beef-wit face;
faces that turn their noses up at books
since the time that they save with every ban
they can spend kissing the ass of the crooks
who kiss the ass of the crook with the tan,
all to enable a future of hate,
where forward pay is all a game of blame
which...NEVER...has been a romantic trait
but only a counterproductive aim
that leads to the puniest short term gain,
of...
#greed
#grief
#hate #regret
#hate #regret
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Hatred For Only You
You're a lying son of bitch
Talking crap behind everyone's back
Hell is the general direction which
You should direct yourself to
You don't stand for what you speak
Getting tired of your shit
In reality you're so weak
Your a god damn hypocrite
How can you find pride in being hated?
Or are you too blind to see the reality?
So you've decided on your stance
Your greed beats your empathy
To think I even respected you once
'Cos you're as much as an enemy
Though we're all conceited in some way
You're just way too...
Talking crap behind everyone's back
Hell is the general direction which
You should direct yourself to
You don't stand for what you speak
Getting tired of your shit
In reality you're so weak
Your a god damn hypocrite
How can you find pride in being hated?
Or are you too blind to see the reality?
So you've decided on your stance
Your greed beats your empathy
To think I even respected you once
'Cos you're as much as an enemy
Though we're all conceited in some way
You're just way too...
#anger
#hate
#hypocrisy
#lies
#relationships
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f**k Me Hey-Zeus!

#anger
#dirty
#hate
#religion
#sex
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