Poems About Grief Seeking Honest Critique
#grief
Poems about grief seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Mamas Don't
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Mama, please don’t leave
Daddy is having a hard time.
He said he can’t look at me
He cries all the time
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Mamas don’t usually go
You left me here, just me
Daddy is so angry
I just don’t understand this though
Text
Mama, Why don’t you come home?
Daddy has been gone
He leaves me here a lot on my own
I didn’t ask to be alone
Mama's Text
Baby girl, I’m sorry to say
I didn’t want to tell you when I left that day
I set your...
Mama, please don’t leave
Daddy is having a hard time.
He said he can’t look at me
He cries all the time
Text
Mamas don’t usually go
You left me here, just me
Daddy is so angry
I just don’t understand this though
Text
Mama, Why don’t you come home?
Daddy has been gone
He leaves me here a lot on my own
I didn’t ask to be alone
Mama's Text
Baby girl, I’m sorry to say
I didn’t want to tell you when I left that day
I set your...
#despair
#grief
#heartbroken
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I will rise and shine
I will rise and shine
Early tomorrow morning
I am not planning to sleep in
During the morning
And waste a day
Also father you brought more snow
It snow last night when I was sleeping
And this morning still snowing
I hope it ends this afternoon
I am not planning to go out
Anywhere today
I will stay in today
And I will do some work for my Father
Early tomorrow morning
I am not planning to sleep in
During the morning
And waste a day
Also father you brought more snow
It snow last night when I was sleeping
And this morning still snowing
I hope it ends this afternoon
I am not planning to go out
Anywhere today
I will stay in today
And I will do some work for my Father
#confusion
#grief
#hate
#sadness
#shame
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I'm not you
I'm not you and you are not me 😞 to tell me that what, I got going on in my own body and mind and spiritual soul, is not what I have been dealing with for awhile now ain't cancer. FOR sure you don't have to take my words of what I say is the truth. For sure who are you to judge someone who's whole life, has been turned up side down having to deal with cancer. For like I've said I'm not you and you are not me, fighting for my life s second time in my own life time. 🙏 Yet you insist that you know me when you really don't bother to do your own research, for sure I don't have no...
#anger
#fear
#frustration
#grief
#sadness
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Now, but a memory
The sound of her voice begins to fade
As her face of bright happy features dulls into a sepia blur
Yet, her smile remains vivid and constant in my minds eye
Skipping every other beat in grief,
my heart…will miss you forever
As her face of bright happy features dulls into a sepia blur
Yet, her smile remains vivid and constant in my minds eye
Skipping every other beat in grief,
my heart…will miss you forever
#grief
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Move Along
A land that's been invaded
by hate and vitriol
waiting on a king
to fix the troubles
two babies in the backseat
shame on us
took too long
Detroit's cold in the winter
move along move along
someone's gotta get stepped on
move the fuck along
sell some pillows or apple cider vinegar
million likes on social media
this is how far we've come
on and on we keep ranting
as our world comes undone
but what you gonna do
if they don't pay yah
move along move along
peace be with you ...
by hate and vitriol
waiting on a king
to fix the troubles
two babies in the backseat
shame on us
took too long
Detroit's cold in the winter
move along move along
someone's gotta get stepped on
move the fuck along
sell some pillows or apple cider vinegar
million likes on social media
this is how far we've come
on and on we keep ranting
as our world comes undone
but what you gonna do
if they don't pay yah
move along move along
peace be with you ...
#anger
#grief
#hope #PopCulture
#hope #PopCulture
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Mother
Mother,
I feel,
like
an
earthquake
got buried
in
your
womb.
Smothering,
positivity
and
the love I miss,
crumbling tomb......
I forgot
how to love,
I forgot
how to feel,
I have
one emotion
and is
negativity
I'm a
narcissist,
I even
hurt a kid
who hurt
me
with her words.
She was only
a puppy at 12
I feel bad
and I feel mad
but its not enough
to assume.....
that I can change,
walk past ...
I feel,
like
an
earthquake
got buried
in
your
womb.
Smothering,
positivity
and
the love I miss,
crumbling tomb......
I forgot
how to love,
I forgot
how to feel,
I have
one emotion
and is
negativity
I'm a
narcissist,
I even
hurt a kid
who hurt
me
with her words.
She was only
a puppy at 12
I feel bad
and I feel mad
but its not enough
to assume.....
that I can change,
walk past ...
#anxiety
#confusion
#dark
#grief
#heartbroken
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Devolution
Idiots have merged with neo-nazis
to make this world an uglier place
spawning a planet of...idiotzis
with overpriced egg on each beef-wit face;
faces that turn their noses up at books
since the time that they save with every ban
they can spend kissing the ass of the crooks
who kiss the ass of the crook with the tan,
all to enable a future of hate,
where forward pay is all a game of blame
which...NEVER...has been a romantic trait
but only a counterproductive aim
that leads to the puniest short term gain,
of...
to make this world an uglier place
spawning a planet of...idiotzis
with overpriced egg on each beef-wit face;
faces that turn their noses up at books
since the time that they save with every ban
they can spend kissing the ass of the crooks
who kiss the ass of the crook with the tan,
all to enable a future of hate,
where forward pay is all a game of blame
which...NEVER...has been a romantic trait
but only a counterproductive aim
that leads to the puniest short term gain,
of...
#greed
#grief
#hate #regret
#hate #regret
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Goodbye Dad
Goodbye Dad
I am heart broken
That I have lost you
So fast
I can't stop crying
Yes I could never believe
That you had to part so soon
But deep down
I could not stand to see you
Suffer every day
Battling you disease
I tried to make you
Comfortable
Also I had to be strong for you
And it is very hard to do
Yes you lost you battle
And at the same time
It was hard to see you leave
This earth
But at the same time
I must understand that
You are in a better place them me
You are living a new...
I am heart broken
That I have lost you
So fast
I can't stop crying
Yes I could never believe
That you had to part so soon
But deep down
I could not stand to see you
Suffer every day
Battling you disease
I tried to make you
Comfortable
Also I had to be strong for you
And it is very hard to do
Yes you lost you battle
And at the same time
It was hard to see you leave
This earth
But at the same time
I must understand that
You are in a better place them me
You are living a new...
#despair
#disappointment
#grief
#heartbroken
#shame
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Another Day (Final Attempt)
She runs bare feet, blood seeping
as she runs and he is shouting,
His bellowing voice does echoes
into a coffee sipping morning.
I see how scared she's running
and her father is so scolding,
Over was the short conversation
& then he bellows her name.
The morning was so dark and misty
but he looked on so mysteriously
Anger and for his princess
Desired and she's now foot-prints
She's gone and so much less,
you wanted so much more old...
as she runs and he is shouting,
His bellowing voice does echoes
into a coffee sipping morning.
I see how scared she's running
and her father is so scolding,
Over was the short conversation
& then he bellows her name.
The morning was so dark and misty
but he looked on so mysteriously
Anger and for his princess
Desired and she's now foot-prints
She's gone and so much less,
you wanted so much more old...
#despair
#grief
#sadness
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Everything is just the same
Time flies by, so rather quick
Everyday repeats itself, week after week
Relentless agony, when nothing awaits
Maybe one day life will smile at you
Stuck in the middle without progression
Only you can guide yourself out of there
You can create another world, all in your mind
In solitude you will find
in your head everything is better than you'll ever be
Life is seldom fair
It leads you to despair
After every uphill
You will descend
You can hide from your fears
to avoid all the pain
but never get to...
Everyday repeats itself, week after week
Relentless agony, when nothing awaits
Maybe one day life will smile at you
Stuck in the middle without progression
Only you can guide yourself out of there
You can create another world, all in your mind
In solitude you will find
in your head everything is better than you'll ever be
Life is seldom fair
It leads you to despair
After every uphill
You will descend
You can hide from your fears
to avoid all the pain
but never get to...
#depression
#grief
#hurt
#loneliness
#sadness
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It's Always About You
I see demons in the corners of my eyes.
Maybe it's just the reflections from the tears I won't let fall.
I'm seeing things I swear,
But they all say I'm not keen to supernatural beings.
I lie and say that doesn't bother me,
But my chest was ripped apart,
Because one day I swore I saw you,
And I can't live with knowing you're really gone.
Your home is cold, and it waits for you,
But there's something even colder that waits for you,
She rots and writes poems for a ghost that she knows will never return.
Maybe it's just the reflections from the tears I won't let fall.
I'm seeing things I swear,
But they all say I'm not keen to supernatural beings.
I lie and say that doesn't bother me,
But my chest was ripped apart,
Because one day I swore I saw you,
And I can't live with knowing you're really gone.
Your home is cold, and it waits for you,
But there's something even colder that waits for you,
She rots and writes poems for a ghost that she knows will never return.
#death
#depression
#emptiness
#grief
#hurt
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Moth (Dark Addiction)
My bed-room surrounds,
with wine bottles around
and the Pepsi that i mix,
I'm not a life full of bliss
3 Liters is barely enough
on my skin so ruggedly tough
I don't wish to be the one to hurt
This dragon even smoked
a child till she was burnt.
I hate this version in the mirror
a worse of all demeanor,
I was blessed with high intelligence
and wasted it on drugs I blessed.
Oh father, am I to re-born a demon,
acid to all words of your sermons
I...
with wine bottles around
and the Pepsi that i mix,
I'm not a life full of bliss
3 Liters is barely enough
on my skin so ruggedly tough
I don't wish to be the one to hurt
This dragon even smoked
a child till she was burnt.
I hate this version in the mirror
a worse of all demeanor,
I was blessed with high intelligence
and wasted it on drugs I blessed.
Oh father, am I to re-born a demon,
acid to all words of your sermons
I...
#dark
#despair
#disappointment
#emptiness
#grief
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