Poems About Fire Seeking Honest Critique
#fire
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 2:39am
23rd Apr 2025 2:39am
I'll Return to You
I’ll leave tomorrow to a distant place.
You’ll miss me when I go away.
In three years, I’ll return to you.
I want you to wait for me,
But I know it’s too much to ask.
Your poor heart will ache for me,
But the sky will still be blue,
And the faithful sun will still shine.
I’ll think of you as time goes by.
The fire will keep burning.
I promise you that I’ll return to you.
Please don’t give up on me.
I’ll see you when I come back.
We’ll smile at each other again.
Darling, I’ll return to you,
And I’ll stay with you...
You’ll miss me when I go away.
In three years, I’ll return to you.
I want you to wait for me,
But I know it’s too much to ask.
Your poor heart will ache for me,
But the sky will still be blue,
And the faithful sun will still shine.
I’ll think of you as time goes by.
The fire will keep burning.
I promise you that I’ll return to you.
Please don’t give up on me.
I’ll see you when I come back.
We’ll smile at each other again.
Darling, I’ll return to you,
And I’ll stay with you...
#fire
#love
#sky #sun
#sky #sun
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Hashman
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 1:51am
15th Apr 2025 1:51am
Windowpane
Screaming out loud
pounding my chest
primal in the mid of night.
By the sacred fire
deep in the woods
dancing flames, rising ember's
carrying spirits to the stars.
Colors splash in my head
visions fill my mind
inside and out,
the wind talks to me
"just listen" she says.
The trees they dance with me
swaying in the breeze,
everything blends
my spirits and the wind...
pounding my chest
primal in the mid of night.
By the sacred fire
deep in the woods
dancing flames, rising ember's
carrying spirits to the stars.
Colors splash in my head
visions fill my mind
inside and out,
the wind talks to me
"just listen" she says.
The trees they dance with me
swaying in the breeze,
everything blends
my spirits and the wind...
#fire
#love
#trees #universe
#trees #universe
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PAR
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 2:42pm
7th Apr 2025 2:42pm
Hope
Light breaks the night.
Its flicker grows, yet fragile still.
A flame burns bright within despair.
Where silence lingers, whispers dare to rise anew.
Through storms and shadows, it calls, defies, it prevails.
Boundless and untamed, it stretches through time, unyielding.
Hope swells like oceans, crashing, surging with infinite waves that collide.
Its roots entangle stars, weaving lifelines from fractures, each moment revived.
Hope ascends like constellations, a beacon eternal, shining through endless skies.
Its flicker grows, yet fragile still.
A flame burns bright within despair.
Where silence lingers, whispers dare to rise anew.
Through storms and shadows, it calls, defies, it prevails.
Boundless and untamed, it stretches through time, unyielding.
Hope swells like oceans, crashing, surging with infinite waves that collide.
Its roots entangle stars, weaving lifelines from fractures, each moment revived.
Hope ascends like constellations, a beacon eternal, shining through endless skies.
#fire
#night
#shadows
#sky
#storm
80 reads
7 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 5:41pm
16th Feb 2025 5:41pm
~the trans-ease-shun #2 :: from (the not so) False Organisms to Fake Orgasms
trancing in your white velvetine translucent
thoughts.. I try to catch the sparking flames
from your hazy glimpses.. sliding smooth in
soothing lukewarm touch ..
catalytic
of a thick chemo burn of your abrasive
matchstick.. over this phosphoric browns
of my skin.. a torching singular flame
arises in a crunchy incremental acoustic
..triggering
a layered yellow & blue concentric eyeing
rings.. blazing unto a holy sooty blackening ...
thoughts.. I try to catch the sparking flames
from your hazy glimpses.. sliding smooth in
soothing lukewarm touch ..
catalytic
of a thick chemo burn of your abrasive
matchstick.. over this phosphoric browns
of my skin.. a torching singular flame
arises in a crunchy incremental acoustic
..triggering
a layered yellow & blue concentric eyeing
rings.. blazing unto a holy sooty blackening ...
#conflict
#fire
#hypocrisy
#love
#spiritual
145 reads
5 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 9:58pm
14th Feb 2025 9:58pm
Priestesses
Guardians of the flame,
sacred vows of purity,
to silent lives constrained.
Chaste in ancient Greece,
virgins bound by duty's chain,
faithful to the peace.
Under the temple's gaze,
Vestal's hearts in shadows dwell,
freedom's distant haze.
Solemn and restrained
lives of the Vestal Virgins
bound by their sacred duties
and so imposed virginity.
sacred vows of purity,
to silent lives constrained.
Chaste in ancient Greece,
virgins bound by duty's chain,
faithful to the peace.
Under the temple's gaze,
Vestal's hearts in shadows dwell,
freedom's distant haze.
Solemn and restrained
lives of the Vestal Virgins
bound by their sacred duties
and so imposed virginity.
#fire
#mythology
#prayer
#temptation
#tradition
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12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 9:28pm
10th Feb 2025 9:28pm
What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
A woman pours gasoline all over herself and her infant child
She lights a match, and the two of them go up in flames in the middle of their playground in town
The reason...Someone asked the woman, "What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
Sucks for her and her infant.
She lights a match, and the two of them go up in flames in the middle of their playground in town
The reason...Someone asked the woman, "What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
Sucks for her and her infant.
#devil
#fire
#food
#satirical
#suicide
114 reads
15 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:14am
7th Feb 2025 3:14am
The Fires Spread
It came from the night
A shadow unbidden, a hunger unnamed
Torn fields lie in its wake
The marrow of the world split and spent
Give me the strength
To tread this charnel ground
To walk through sundered ribs
And gaze upon the scattered skull of potential
Where the future was butchered
Where tomorrow went to die
Now I sit among the ruins of the living wood
A silent witness, a weary judge
Contemplating the nature of the beast
That which devours, that which desecrates
The embers stir
Like worms in the...
A shadow unbidden, a hunger unnamed
Torn fields lie in its wake
The marrow of the world split and spent
Give me the strength
To tread this charnel ground
To walk through sundered ribs
And gaze upon the scattered skull of potential
Where the future was butchered
Where tomorrow went to die
Now I sit among the ruins of the living wood
A silent witness, a weary judge
Contemplating the nature of the beast
That which devours, that which desecrates
The embers stir
Like worms in the...
#dark
#death
#fire
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PAR
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 9:20pm
5th Feb 2025 9:20pm
Skeletons out of the closet!
From a very young age
I've always loved skeletons
and I kept all those I found
along the path of this life...
I have no idea why but apparently
they all want to come out of the closet
so suddenly... unexpectedly.
In the next minute, probably!
I've always loved skeletons
and I kept all those I found
along the path of this life...
I have no idea why but apparently
they all want to come out of the closet
so suddenly... unexpectedly.
In the next minute, probably!
#escape
#fear
#fire
117 reads
10 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 3:47am
30th Jan 2025 3:47am
In Front Of A Fireplace... And Something Else
Both Rick and Teri
got naked in front of both
a fire and Jeff's sex film crew.
got naked in front of both
a fire and Jeff's sex film crew.
#art
#fiction
#fire
#friendship
#sex
170 reads
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rksingh
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 5:43am
25th Jan 2025 5:43am
Love
Seeing earth in her
I merge my naked I:
unselfing selves
--R K Singh
I merge my naked I:
unselfing selves
--R K Singh
#earth
#fire
#spiritual
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 3:09am
11th Jan 2025 3:09am
One
tumblimg through eternity I look through time
assailents of friction rise and fall
sinister attention stirs, my head whips around
eyes glare into the void
designated misfortune, fated disorder
lends to the chaos in the cosmos
destructive forces spin
the wind pushes with it's brutality
heaven breathes fire
and the ground quakes
hailstorm it leaves me shaken
the elements mix
and life sprouts
needed growth happens
hearts and souls expand
political giants are brought down
something hums in the...
assailents of friction rise and fall
sinister attention stirs, my head whips around
eyes glare into the void
designated misfortune, fated disorder
lends to the chaos in the cosmos
destructive forces spin
the wind pushes with it's brutality
heaven breathes fire
and the ground quakes
hailstorm it leaves me shaken
the elements mix
and life sprouts
needed growth happens
hearts and souls expand
political giants are brought down
something hums in the...
#earth
#fire
#humankind
116 reads
7 Comments
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