Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 4:18pm
24th Nov 2024 4:18pm
A quite ride in the wake of summer
in the twilight silence; shy sun flickers in the distance, inside a fleet of hazy clouds
dangling between sky and mountain, its disk faintly dissolving leaving a flaming trail. westward floating......
Cicling joyfully into the west, thinking of the olden summers, the young runners,and the small toddlers......
my bike challenges the wind of a quiet evening tide, as the path starkly, solely echos the galvanized tires....................
i would willingly go faster, but the silence of the route was just a flowing poetry to be rhymed,A moment to be...
dangling between sky and mountain, its disk faintly dissolving leaving a flaming trail. westward floating......
Cicling joyfully into the west, thinking of the olden summers, the young runners,and the small toddlers......
my bike challenges the wind of a quiet evening tide, as the path starkly, solely echos the galvanized tires....................
i would willingly go faster, but the silence of the route was just a flowing poetry to be rhymed,A moment to be...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational #motivational
#inspirational #motivational
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Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:42pm
23rd Nov 2024 11:42pm
Inside Roare my lo love is Aurora
Inside Roare
my lo love is Aurora "Some type of Skin"
Something weighs us down,
no one knows what.
Someone is holding the trigger.
Someone is making you go,
someone is saying "stop".
A few Aspen leaves are shaking in the wind.
It's blowing in your hair,
you don't believe that the green meadow will turn to ice.
In the morning everything will be white,
tell the snow fairy that it needs blue.
Whiteeeeeee
Something is pressing on you,
I guess I know what.
why are you hiding it, ...
my lo love is Aurora "Some type of Skin"
Something weighs us down,
no one knows what.
Someone is holding the trigger.
Someone is making you go,
someone is saying "stop".
A few Aspen leaves are shaking in the wind.
It's blowing in your hair,
you don't believe that the green meadow will turn to ice.
In the morning everything will be white,
tell the snow fairy that it needs blue.
Whiteeeeeee
Something is pressing on you,
I guess I know what.
why are you hiding it, ...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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Elusive
Phillip Knox
Phillip Knox
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 00:45am
23rd Nov 2024 00:45am
Seductive Nights
I first scoped your ass
the glare of a gaze
moving up your chest
so clear, my thoughts could touch your breasts.
My heart pulsated
as with rhythmic muse
like a moonlight sonata
within shades of midnight blue.
The appeal of your pose
enticing, like fire-red diamonds
you burn soul
giving me strange desires.
Your lust, naked pipedreams
henna in your hair
touched by falling sunbeams
how it flared.
I stared, resistless
like a moth burned by light
your hips paralyzed me
at first...
the glare of a gaze
moving up your chest
so clear, my thoughts could touch your breasts.
My heart pulsated
as with rhythmic muse
like a moonlight sonata
within shades of midnight blue.
The appeal of your pose
enticing, like fire-red diamonds
you burn soul
giving me strange desires.
Your lust, naked pipedreams
henna in your hair
touched by falling sunbeams
how it flared.
I stared, resistless
like a moth burned by light
your hips paralyzed me
at first...
#emotions
#happiness
#love #strength
#love #strength
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crazycatlady
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 11:46pm
22nd Nov 2024 11:46pm
The Present
So how do I choose a deep underground theme?
What does poetry actually mean?
A word game was a good start I suppose
after reading a sultry romantic prose
As I deliberate over what I will write
only my own words I will cite
What interests should I think deeply about?
I consider some and while I pout
The rhyme and rhythm is working for me
Being in the present moment is key
An awakening of sensation and thought
Is what this little experience has brought
What does poetry actually mean?
A word game was a good start I suppose
after reading a sultry romantic prose
As I deliberate over what I will write
only my own words I will cite
What interests should I think deeply about?
I consider some and while I pout
The rhyme and rhythm is working for me
Being in the present moment is key
An awakening of sensation and thought
Is what this little experience has brought
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
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Evocation
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 12:16pm
22nd Nov 2024 12:16pm
Playing with Fire
I feel her unravelling me
she stirs my senses like a siren
as I bathe in the depths of her swirling beauty
her timeless affection
melts away my defences like butter
I feel her warmth
glowing like amber through my soul
in the milky silence of night
she touches the essence of me
and I let her into my heart
she stirs my senses like a siren
as I bathe in the depths of her swirling beauty
her timeless affection
melts away my defences like butter
I feel her warmth
glowing like amber through my soul
in the milky silence of night
she touches the essence of me
and I let her into my heart
#confusion
#emotions
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Elusive
Phillip Knox
Phillip Knox
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 11:31am
22nd Nov 2024 11:31am
Fallen Rosebud
You remind me of Autumn
your simple grace
can be compared to a rosebud
falling in the wind.
Your presence blessed me
the soft tone of your form
as you brushed against me
moving flirtatiously, subtly.
Your scent lingers on my mind
and your sudden touch of kindness
pulled me, strongly attracted
I gazed into your almond-shaped eyes.
I think of you incessantly
here at your mercy
your beauty titillates me,
tantalizing my thoughts.
I saw you last week
passing your way, I spoke ...
your simple grace
can be compared to a rosebud
falling in the wind.
Your presence blessed me
the soft tone of your form
as you brushed against me
moving flirtatiously, subtly.
Your scent lingers on my mind
and your sudden touch of kindness
pulled me, strongly attracted
I gazed into your almond-shaped eyes.
I think of you incessantly
here at your mercy
your beauty titillates me,
tantalizing my thoughts.
I saw you last week
passing your way, I spoke ...
#admiration
#emotions
#hope
#love
#respect
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Elusive
Phillip Knox
Phillip Knox
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 11:12am
22nd Nov 2024 11:12am
Your Name Could Have Been Prunella
You were there standing quietly
I was taken by on look at you
your beauty, exotic- excited me
true your dress was simply blue.
I cannot lie, my inarticulation
at the sight of sunsets in your eyes
your essence, smile
took me to new heights.
Brown hair, reflecting tints of henna
your provocative form
and walk, your name could have been Prunella,
as you reached for my love.
Your price is far above jewels
captivated by your style
the rose that bloomed,
but faded from my life.
I was taken by on look at you
your beauty, exotic- excited me
true your dress was simply blue.
I cannot lie, my inarticulation
at the sight of sunsets in your eyes
your essence, smile
took me to new heights.
Brown hair, reflecting tints of henna
your provocative form
and walk, your name could have been Prunella,
as you reached for my love.
Your price is far above jewels
captivated by your style
the rose that bloomed,
but faded from my life.
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude #love
#gratitude #love
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Adingtan
Dottie
Dottie
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 4:31pm
21st Nov 2024 4:31pm
Purples
Nature's best musicians sing
Over lakes and ponds and streams
Sweet and salty waters hum
My guitar strings gently strum
Let the melody of worlds
Convey her gentle sound through you
Drown in deep blues
Sing in strong reds
So that you might live in purples
Follow singing rivers ahead
Go where no man's ever tread
Stay until you lose yourself
Stay until you lose your self
Over lakes and ponds and streams
Sweet and salty waters hum
My guitar strings gently strum
Let the melody of worlds
Convey her gentle sound through you
Drown in deep blues
Sing in strong reds
So that you might live in purples
Follow singing rivers ahead
Go where no man's ever tread
Stay until you lose yourself
Stay until you lose your self
#birds
#emotions
#hope
#nature
#water
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1 Comment
Adingtan
Dottie
Dottie
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 3:04pm
21st Nov 2024 3:04pm
Wind's song
I am the voice of the wind
The one you've forgotten
That sang lullabies to you as a child
Now I am singing a song of despair
Begging for some grown kid to remember
The soothing melodies of the sleepless nights
I am the song of the moon and the skies
The child who asked the cosmos all why's
Hear the wind's desperate cries
The one you've forgotten
That sang lullabies to you as a child
Now I am singing a song of despair
Begging for some grown kid to remember
The soothing melodies of the sleepless nights
I am the song of the moon and the skies
The child who asked the cosmos all why's
Hear the wind's desperate cries
#bittersweet
#emotions
#sadness
#universe
#wind
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Sappho
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 12:20pm
21st Nov 2024 12:20pm
Whispers of Love (Collaboration with Vision_of_Insanity)
To you, as you light up the sky
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us
Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and
Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your cherry lips, velvety and sweet
Need to be sealed with a kiss
Echoing in divine dimensions of
Eternal bliss
Eternally yours...
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us
Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and
Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your cherry lips, velvety and sweet
Need to be sealed with a kiss
Echoing in divine dimensions of
Eternal bliss
Eternally yours...
#emotions
#love
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6 Comments
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 11:12am
21st Nov 2024 11:12am
Want
Once, I was encumbered;
With shame, that was not mine.
Now, that war is over,
I straighten out my spine.
Fear belongs, to the mediocre.
So I left mine, behind.
Want, is the hangover.
Slowing down my mind.
ARM
With shame, that was not mine.
Now, that war is over,
I straighten out my spine.
Fear belongs, to the mediocre.
So I left mine, behind.
Want, is the hangover.
Slowing down my mind.
ARM
#emotions
#shame
#TimeHeals
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 3:21pm
20th Nov 2024 3:21pm
From A Man From Earth
From Man To Mankind
I don't have wrath to vent on my foe
Arrogance and ignorance are shame i know
No one has to swell with what they own
Only poor spirits can feel down and low
My name is man, i am eternal god
Eternity, is for the Only one God
But, the time i am granted on earth
Is for good doing, for eternal Lord
Let me not pretend i am the master of all
Death and sickness make me cry and crawl
They make feel little, i kneel with fear and awe
Still am i poorly armed, before the death toll
But Nature has taught...
I don't have wrath to vent on my foe
Arrogance and ignorance are shame i know
No one has to swell with what they own
Only poor spirits can feel down and low
My name is man, i am eternal god
Eternity, is for the Only one God
But, the time i am granted on earth
Is for good doing, for eternal Lord
Let me not pretend i am the master of all
Death and sickness make me cry and crawl
They make feel little, i kneel with fear and awe
Still am i poorly armed, before the death toll
But Nature has taught...
#emotions
#morality
#philosophical
#religion
#spiritual
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