Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
s0_obscen3
s0_Obscene
s0_Obscene
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 1:31pm
28th Dec 2024 1:31pm
Suffering from apathy
Even if we don't speak,
you hold a place no one can seek.
A space you made, deep and true,
that only ever belonged to you.
Though time has pulled us far apart,
you'll always live within my heart.
you hold a place no one can seek.
A space you made, deep and true,
that only ever belonged to you.
Though time has pulled us far apart,
you'll always live within my heart.
#emotions
#forgiveness
#happiness
#love
#TimeHeals
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oldmanG
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 8:07pm
27th Dec 2024 8:07pm
Statue in Time
More you sit
More you die
Sit like a statue in time
Hardens around you
Through your mind
Limbs so supple
Die grapes on vine
Keep mobile
Even just in your head
Jack be nimble
Head can’t think
Don’t want to be
Remembered
But I’ll deliver
Concrete can’t hold me
I’m pouring through
Set my place
In time
Set my soul
Back to family
More you die
Sit like a statue in time
Hardens around you
Through your mind
Limbs so supple
Die grapes on vine
Keep mobile
Even just in your head
Jack be nimble
Head can’t think
Don’t want to be
Remembered
But I’ll deliver
Concrete can’t hold me
I’m pouring through
Set my place
In time
Set my soul
Back to family
#aging
#emotions
#family
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 00:46am
25th Dec 2024 00:46am
Fia 12 days of X-Mas
1st day you joined a gym
2nd day you learned to swim
3rd day you shaved down there
4th day you cared about hair
5th day you turned down snacks
6th day no kisses came back
7th day a mark on your neck
8th day a ticket to Quebec
9th day not sure what to do
10th day then came YOU
11th day a smile on my face
12th day here honey, I packed your suitcase!
1st day of Christmas, what could it be
Mom, what did you make to eat
2nd paper cuts
3rd can you get it
4th alarm fire
5th food...
2nd day you learned to swim
3rd day you shaved down there
4th day you cared about hair
5th day you turned down snacks
6th day no kisses came back
7th day a mark on your neck
8th day a ticket to Quebec
9th day not sure what to do
10th day then came YOU
11th day a smile on my face
12th day here honey, I packed your suitcase!
1st day of Christmas, what could it be
Mom, what did you make to eat
2nd paper cuts
3rd can you get it
4th alarm fire
5th food...
#confusion
#denial
#emotions #frustration
#emotions #frustration
168 reads
13 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 1:33am
23rd Dec 2024 1:33am
Drunkard's lament
INSIDE ROARE
Drunkard's lament
The sun is burning today,
I'm thirsty.
There's nowhere to go for a drink.
The asphalt was already flowing,
I'll carry my thirty tons further.
Suddenly, as Fata Morgana stood there.
The old non-stop bar, where did it come from.
I, the fool, wanted to drink water too,
I didn't have to be here with you and drink.
Beautiful girls,
eyes empty as my glass.
Legs straight as a wire in concrete,
I only see a white clone.
The old non-stop bar, it's not a gift.
The old...
Drunkard's lament
The sun is burning today,
I'm thirsty.
There's nowhere to go for a drink.
The asphalt was already flowing,
I'll carry my thirty tons further.
Suddenly, as Fata Morgana stood there.
The old non-stop bar, where did it come from.
I, the fool, wanted to drink water too,
I didn't have to be here with you and drink.
Beautiful girls,
eyes empty as my glass.
Legs straight as a wire in concrete,
I only see a white clone.
The old non-stop bar, it's not a gift.
The old...
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 1:06am
23rd Dec 2024 1:06am
Hitchhiker
INSIDE ROARE (2000)
Hitchhiker
1) You wave in vain, no one stops,
the car's headlights shine through the drops.
But they have a different direction, go back.
You're a fool who wants to see the world.
R) Go back, go back.
Your conscience is telling you.
Life is short, life is short.
You're supposed to enjoy it.
You fool, you want to make it.
But you don't want to just dream about it.
2) You're soaked to the skin,
your feet hurt like you're going to fall.
Well, where are you going, you don't know.
Just...
Hitchhiker
1) You wave in vain, no one stops,
the car's headlights shine through the drops.
But they have a different direction, go back.
You're a fool who wants to see the world.
R) Go back, go back.
Your conscience is telling you.
Life is short, life is short.
You're supposed to enjoy it.
You fool, you want to make it.
But you don't want to just dream about it.
2) You're soaked to the skin,
your feet hurt like you're going to fall.
Well, where are you going, you don't know.
Just...
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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Elusive
Phillip Knox
Phillip Knox
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 2:33am
22nd Dec 2024 2:33am
Nights in Shades of Red
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
205 reads
6 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 5:39pm
21st Dec 2024 5:39pm
Blissfully Relaxed,
Blissfully relaxed,
From materialistic delight, detached
I left my skin down to the carnal mortality
clothed my soul in transcendental eternity
Mountains and forests, skies and seasons
Shepherds and pastoral eclogues;, my glossary
If to flesh satisfaction called on
I am Naturally calibrated, not addicted
Each and every container is to be filled
With the appropriate fair value, not abused
And so, i feel
Heavenly untroubled,
Earthly fulfilled
Spiritually healed ...
From materialistic delight, detached
I left my skin down to the carnal mortality
clothed my soul in transcendental eternity
Mountains and forests, skies and seasons
Shepherds and pastoral eclogues;, my glossary
If to flesh satisfaction called on
I am Naturally calibrated, not addicted
Each and every container is to be filled
With the appropriate fair value, not abused
And so, i feel
Heavenly untroubled,
Earthly fulfilled
Spiritually healed ...
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
80 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 11:53am
21st Dec 2024 11:53am
Never love or hate
Focus
The truth of a blade
The truth of it sharpness
Steel can cut through flesh & bone
Never love or hate
The truth of a blade
The truth of it sharpness
Steel can cut through flesh & bone
Never love or hate
#emotions
#hate
#love
#strength
#honesty
83 reads
8 Comments
s0_obscen3
s0_Obscene
s0_Obscene
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 3:19pm
20th Dec 2024 3:19pm
Quercitron yellow
A lot of people would become yellow
some are yellow
Quercitron yellow?
no just yellow like a flower or another bee
you...me?
Quercitron like the only rising sun
setting. just letting the moon pass by
two equal beings bringing meaning to one another
Quercitron yellow
for each other...
some are yellow
Quercitron yellow?
no just yellow like a flower or another bee
you...me?
Quercitron like the only rising sun
setting. just letting the moon pass by
two equal beings bringing meaning to one another
Quercitron yellow
for each other...
#admiration
#emotions
#hope
#kindness
#love
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Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 1:58am
19th Dec 2024 1:58am
Graffiti
Long hair flowing...genderless
biracial multicolored
graphic on a wide wall.
-- Luscious 6X (lgbtqia2s+)
Words written...
Fuk Da Bitch.
Kill Whitey.
-- Sniper K (RIP)
Little brown man
with a huge red nose
snorting coke.
-- Hunnterr Hit
Signs of the times PEOPLE!
Seen nearly as much
as NO RIGHT & STOP
-- Observed by Paula
A dead or sleeping
young hooker near
the graffiti wall.
-- 911 Call Center (4:20pm - 12/18/24)
biracial multicolored
graphic on a wide wall.
-- Luscious 6X (lgbtqia2s+)
Words written...
Fuk Da Bitch.
Kill Whitey.
-- Sniper K (RIP)
Little brown man
with a huge red nose
snorting coke.
-- Hunnterr Hit
Signs of the times PEOPLE!
Seen nearly as much
as NO RIGHT & STOP
-- Observed by Paula
A dead or sleeping
young hooker near
the graffiti wall.
-- 911 Call Center (4:20pm - 12/18/24)
#boredom
#drugs
#emotions
63 reads
6 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 9:30pm
17th Dec 2024 9:30pm
Only for your love
INSIDE ROARE
Only for your love
Only in your love, only in your love,
I don't believe in anything, everyone lies to me.
Only in your love, only in your love,
Whisper into your hands.
What more could I have, perhaps to listen,
Whose heart beats harder. Not just to lie to yourself.
What more could I have, truth or lies.
You can't dodge this, do whatever you want.
And yet I know that your hand will caress me.
Only in your love, only in your love,
I don't believe in anything, everyone lies to me.
Only in your love,...
Only for your love
Only in your love, only in your love,
I don't believe in anything, everyone lies to me.
Only in your love, only in your love,
Whisper into your hands.
What more could I have, perhaps to listen,
Whose heart beats harder. Not just to lie to yourself.
What more could I have, truth or lies.
You can't dodge this, do whatever you want.
And yet I know that your hand will caress me.
Only in your love, only in your love,
I don't believe in anything, everyone lies to me.
Only in your love,...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 7:03am
17th Dec 2024 7:03am
Need Some Dialogue
Need some dialogue
Without it all bets are off and then it’s On(fire)
If we can’t put some words together to get us
A little closer to being real no bullshit gloves are off
So give me some dialogue
And I’ll show you we’re not so different
When a storm comes upon us we can deal without human impulses
So talk to me I’ll talk to you
Give me some dialogue to show us both
We aren’t Ape Men
And I’ll grill you up something good
Enough to feed our family
Until we burp and unbutton our pants
...
Without it all bets are off and then it’s On(fire)
If we can’t put some words together to get us
A little closer to being real no bullshit gloves are off
So give me some dialogue
And I’ll show you we’re not so different
When a storm comes upon us we can deal without human impulses
So talk to me I’ll talk to you
Give me some dialogue to show us both
We aren’t Ape Men
And I’ll grill you up something good
Enough to feed our family
Until we burp and unbutton our pants
...
#emotions
#fate
#friendship #hope
#friendship #hope
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